Jacket vs. Justify
 

10-16 lines
u spit first
u got 25 mins to drop
no cheatin

ight, im checkin in...no feedin off my verse either

I checked in...but i cant drop...i gotta get off...can ya give me an extension? like..ill drop before 1 a.m. alright?

fine..do it when you can..but then i cant say when i'll be able to drop

Well, alright..thanks..ill try to get it in today sometime...you can drop whenever you want..no limit since this came up..lata man

Alright, im here and writin right now..this is my real check

Here it is
 

Am I better than Jacket? That's a rhetorical question
Everyone knows he's the Al Gore of this battle election
Shoulda known better, dont challenge a "lyrical master"
Ya drops causin more confusion than a "natural disaster"
Go on, get out ya book "Rappin for dummies"
cuz you couldnt drop it hot if you paid the devil money
Bet ya nervous now i can tell ya bodies twitchin
You on the L-train now, no reason for ya bitchin
You couldn't throw a hard punch if you brought brass knucks
I'd be dodgin ya shit left and right, duck, and uppercut

Sorry it took me so long man, moms was waitin on a call

come on man, drop your verse..i aint waitin forever

alright..if you dont drop by tuesday dog..you DQd...

man..its monday..been two days....im not gonna wait on your drop forever dude

nice verse just....I think you mighta one this by dq nah mean.?

idk..i did tell him that i would give him as long as he needed..but who needs 3-4 days to drop 10 lines ya kno?

umm. . . .
 

wheres jacket?

hmm i think justify has won then right?

its been 4 days now im pretty sure...and no drop

i dropped the 24th, its the 28th, can i get a DQ here?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137463

^vote honestly..and yeah this should be a DQ

yo dawg, sorry bout the lateness for real...ive been outa town...i'll leave it up to you whether you still want me to drop...if u do, thats cool, if not, i understand

vote on da prodigy vs saytin an i'll return the favor

yah, i dont like winnin by DQ, i win fair n square, drop jacket, and dont freepost in this thread again prodigy

ok Justify, heres your competition to get yourself a fair and sqaure battle
fuck a DQ, but props to you for lettin me drop a few.
i guess i was rude, but fuck it, i thought it was a waste to battle you.
you got less skill at rappin, than a guy with a dick in his ass does at crappin.
this heres a bitch slappin. and im laughin while i smear yo trash'n with one napkin.
what you bablin? you couldnt get the croud to go crazy
if you dubbed yo voice out and replaced it with slim shady.
your style is too sloppy, while you said nothin new. it was like it was just coppied.
nobody can stop me. surely not a guy who should "Justify"
the reason why he opens fly's on guys to cover his damn eyes.
my words are so smooth they glide, so now you know you should have never even tried.

YEaH
 

DQ it...thats a no show... have u pm'd him?!

Ummmmmmmmmmmmm....^^ you loose.
Jacket..had some multis and punches but they were weaker than shit.
Justify...basically should get the battle anyway... Jacket drops after the time frame and shit like dat. U had better punches, multis [few], and structure, Jackets shit was easier to read upside down.
My vote Just.

remember....Justify "no showed" on me first******

Jacket does not get a DQ, I told him for giving me an extension he was allowed to drop whenever he could, no harm, no foul...he dropped, so vote honestly, thanks

Am I better than Jacket? That's a rhetorical question
Everyone knows he's the Al Gore of this battle election
good. nice punch.
Shoulda known better, dont challenge a "lyrical master"
Ya drops causin more confusion than a "natural disaster"
better punch. good keepin the flow.
Go on, get out ya book "Rappin for dummies"
cuz you couldnt drop it hot if you paid the devil money
yes, great punch.
Bet ya nervous now i can tell ya bodies twitchin
You on the L-train now, no reason for ya bitchin
a bit down. but still a decent punch.
You couldn't throw a hard punch if you brought brass knucks
I'd be dodgin ya shit left and right, duck, and uppercut
last line could have been harder. decent closer.....but a good opener and good flow.





ok Justify, heres your competition to get yourself a fair and sqaure battle
fuck a DQ, but props to you for lettin me drop a few.
i guess i was rude, but fuck it, i thought it was a waste to battle you.
stretched way long dog.
you got less skill at rappin, than a guy with a dick in his ass does at crappin.
this heres a bitch slappin. and im laughin while i smear yo trash'n with one napkin.
again stretched, soft punches.
what you bablin? you couldnt get the croud to go crazy
if you dubbed yo voice out and replaced it with slim shady.
better punch. good line length
your style is too sloppy, while you said nothin new. it was like it was just coppied.
nobody can stop me. surely not a guy who should "Justify"
the reason why he opens fly's on guys to cover his damn eyes.
nice multis, decent punches.
my words are so smooth they glide, so now you know you should have never even tried.
stretched......played finisher.
decent flow but mostly decent - played punches.

Vote: Justify.

Vote:

Justify
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Jacket
not a very good structure...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had some multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals..

Overall
Jacket had more multis...neither had good personals...Justify had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Justify gets my vote...

VOTE - JUSTIFY

Only one more vote....come on people, uppin.......

Jacket
fuck a DQ, but props to you for lettin me drop a few.
i guess i was rude, but fuck it, i thought it was a waste to battle you.
Wtf?Sucking up to him?
you got less skill at rappin, than a guy with a dick in his ass does at crappin.
this heres a bitch slappin. and im laughin while i smear yo trash'n with one napkin.
Blah, non flowable
what you bablin? you couldnt get the croud to go crazy
if you dubbed yo voice out and replaced it with slim shady.
No, that is just wack
your style is too sloppy, while you said nothin new. it was like it was just coppied.
nobody can stop me. surely not a guy who should "Justify"
Blah, coppied/Justify do not rhyme
the reason why he opens fly's on guys to cover his damn eyes.
my words are so smooth they glide, so now you know you should have never even tried
No... that was wack aswell

No meta's, wordplay or personals;& putting his name in your verse does not count as a personal.Obviously your a newbie, get better at text will ya.

Justify
Am I better than Jacket? That's a rhetorical question
Everyone knows he's the Al Gore of this battle election
Old dated & played
Shoulda known better, dont challenge a "lyrical master"
Ya drops causin more confusion than a "natural disaster"
Hows a natural disaster confusing?You see a cyclone & you RUN!
Go on, get out ya book "Rappin for dummies"
cuz you couldnt drop it hot if you paid the devil money
Blah
Bet ya nervous now i can tell ya bodies twitchin
You on the L-train now, no reason for ya bitchin
Filler
You couldn't throw a hard punch if you brought brass knucks
I'd be dodgin ya shit left and right, duck, and uppercut
Yeah ok... Just

Some played lines & some lines that were straight filler, flow was the only winner of this verse

V/Justify;Wasn't great, but far better then Jacket