I daughter hOz, but in this case...(latin diss haha)
:shoot: im' sonning a butch bitch. manly ass latino kitten
Troublesome flows shown to choke n crumble a bundle of ho's only the humble should know who's prone to get thrown when fucking wit pros you ducking it tho, ya fears obviously spilled but u still receieve serious beatings Curiousity Kills this Kat dead,sure u leave blood splat n threads but thats When ya periods Leaking excuse me for speaking but this is quiet awful tho, Quick question bitch...who's that manly voice in ya Audios? i apologize yo,didnt realize you fly solo when it comes to whack limits attack bitches like you, and to mention ya pix? its sad when AFRICAN kids even diss it! Quote:
damn..cant even get a Nig to collab wit you, im laughin too hard to even be mad rude cause ya "man" see'n U undressed is only when he's slapping the keys and askin for nudes Thats nasty tho *whew*u were born a Man, but it pays to be a Woman..just look at her scarred Tits whats worse is see'n her twat that resembles a confused gorilla with crusty parched lips Trust it hurts to see ya dick riders give me props and go crazy u wont phaze me with ya Dead weight delivery as if u were given birth to still born babies its rational that you practice ya flows i get a blasmphemous laugh at this folks, cause when i attack this faggot bitch i leave holes more open than her dysfunctional nose im punchin thru posts i'll get a psychiatrist for you to cope and except this and the way niggas sleep on ya lines is like geeks thats narcaleptic! |
Structure Was Off But Vocab Was Good
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sure structure was off cause i didnt put // at the end of my linez..uppin thnx for feed back more than 7 words of criticism
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Upping again for feedback
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pretty nice shit....good wordplay and vocab. It coulda had a lil more structure but other than that it was good
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dat shit was decent tha structure was off but u had nice muti's and wordplay so it was pretty decent
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word thnx up
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ill shit dawg...nice disses, flow was decent, wordplay and multis were sick, but like u said, work on that structure. ~1~
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true uppz
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eh yo u need to work on ya structure but u r killin wit the multis. i like. dont stop.
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^^^^^^
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It Was Iight...It Was Lacking The Main Parts Of A Verse...Besides Multies...If Latin Kitten Is As Nice As People Say She Is..Than She Will Tear That Up..
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this "//" isn't needed for good structure that's ezboard bullshit...yea your structure was bad and your lines were a bit dragged but you had some pretty good vocab...and a decentish diss here and there
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for your sake i hope you wasint dissing me...
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^if i was it would have said african diss.
Not really understanding the structure is off thing when i read half of you peoples stuff its basically the same except the fact i use more multies then some of you . someone who said my structure is off explain it to me a lil more...thanx for feed backs n i'll drop some feed backs on yall posts |
not a bad diss had some decent vocab some creative lines some good diss and all around i enjoyed the read nicely done..
can u give some feed back on my diss to forgotten flow pt2... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137793 |
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NAW BUT YOU SAID MY NAME IN YO SHIT...I SHALL FURTHER BREAK DOWN YO SHIT AN SEE WHATS UP WITH YO LIL DISS TO HER.. |
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SHIT WAS A DISS NO DOUBT..NOTHING HARDLY HIT...JUST FLOWED AN MULTIEZ....LIKE MORE TO HURT HER EGO AN MAKE HER CRY THEN TRYING TO BEAT HER CAUSE YOU SAID SOME WACK SHIT ONLY TO HURT HER FEELINGS IT SEEMS... PUNCHES = 2/10 FLOW=4/10 STRUCTURE=2/10 MLTIEZ=7/10 VOCAB=4/10 ENJOYMENT=3/10 OVERALL=5/10 SHIT WAS DECENT...WAS A DISS BUT IF SHES ANY GOOD SHE COULD SHIT ON THIS..I AINT SEEN NONE OF HER SHIT SO I DUNNO... :hump: |
^if it was a diss to you u would know it.....i used your NAME AFRICAN....its not like i said african is an african kid i dont know who u are or what you are for that matter...so i used your name and your qoute. problem?
..... Me N her battle is n my sig. click the first link |
upppz
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Dat's a nice come bac. keep doin tha damn thing ma
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wordz thanx ya.
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2 badd ya got murked in da battle
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she tryed though but this drop was good.
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nice drop too bad you got merked.
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structure was goood, nice diss but why in open micy you always bring the beef with both yall man yall juss stop its fucking annoying
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It was str-8 man nice disses need to work on structure and u will be start i need to post me some shit up
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