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Sin vs. Bomber-Z
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1 hour to drop or D/Q no feeding, blind spit no crew/hate/dr/bullshit votes g'luck kid, this is my checkin... |
aite ill spit in an hour good luck to u too. Bomber-Z checking in
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Uh, yea lets go..
Aite check it.. I got the gun in ya mouth but im playing wit tha trigger/ If ya coapporate wit me this will be a lot quicker// I bet ya wondering how can a lil 11 year old do so much pain/ But don’t get smart wit me I already put a bullet into ya brain// So the paramedics come and try to get tha bullet outa ya head/ But they cant really save you cuz you’re already dead// U wont beat me now and never will/ That’s ur last breath u wont move again ur always gon be still// You’re dead now, bye bye sin/ Don’t come back to me cuz u wont win// |
yep.. i been gone for a minute, typin a verse real quick now..
im bout to piss on this keyboard, this guy writes like a see saw but he stays down..... hes always either gettin clowned or whored.. hell get floored, he cant hang.... if i was him... id be gone now... id punch myself in the head...might as well of put a bruise on ya eye-brow.. kid, youve had ya time-now...you cant battle, your fuken weak... lost 3 times n never won... the true definition of 'shit creek'.. anytime you speak posts should come with warning attachment.. "please close the browser or get ready for embarrasment..." like watchin dryin cement... boring... even ya sigs are bad.. i think 'enygma' put it best..... Quote:
yeaaaah..... lol |
"your shit looks like the Gay Pride flag...." wtf is that bout??
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orrite whatever.... lets get some votes now....
drop ya links when your done voting.. i always return the favor... |
yea juss vote,drop ur links and me and sin will return the favor
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i found it under your post, u offered to do him a sig for 600 rb money... and he said sumthin like fuck off your shit looks like the gay pride flag.
go into that thread and ull see it. |
idk juss send this link here cuz i dunno wat ur tlkin about..
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pretty weak battle... Sin came a little harder (even tho at some points he decided not to rhyme) he took this battle.
Bomber,you need to work on your punches,wasnt feeling them at all. Both Verses had no personals... overall this battle sucked. my vote:Sin |
uppin for votes....
i was high when i wrote this shit lol drop ya links when ya done voting |
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uppin 4 fuken votes..........................
drop links when ya done... |
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drop links when ya done voting... |
uppin....................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin for votes....
drop ya links when your done voting and ill return the favor. |
damn his is hard the young nigga was alright but his shit was young sin was alright and he made me laugh with that shit creek shit and i liked his verse better but the little homie did him also so keep at it dont let no losses discourage you
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uppin for more votes to finish this...
drop links when ya done voting...... |
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drop links when ya done voting.... |
uppin this battle........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin again.......
drop links when ya done voting... |
Bomber-Z
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure is good...flow is target...no multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... Sin structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is decent...some of ur punches connected (Quotes r played though)...personals were decent... Overall both had a good structure...both had a good flow...neither had multis...Sin had the better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals..so basing off of that..Sin gets my vote... VOTE - SIN Please return the favor with an honest vote on this battle- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172 Thanx. |
uppin to finish this shit.
drop links when u done voting. |
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yo dis shit was weak as hell but it was funny kinda but it was str8 but bomba took it
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uppin for votes to finish this....... anyone?
drop links when ya done.. |
Yo, since my other battle closed;
Please return the favor with an honest vote on this battle - http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138279 Thanx again. |
bomer z
allaround was you hey sin after your done with him you'll be an compared battler with me how about set it up and me and you will battler? Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin for votes......
drop links when ya done voting.. |
its an okay battle... but sin u couldnt ryhme punches were okay bomer-z ur was ok too but u came a lil harder so i vote for u...
Vote:Bomber-Z |
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uppin for more votes... funny how every person that votes for bomber has like 6 or 7 posts.... fuken newbs..
i just wanna finish this battle... can someone just vote? |
Sin took this easy using more complex rhymes and better use of personals bomber you need to elevate a lot but keep at it. this was a pretty weak battle though
v/Sin |
sin cuz he was harder and flow was nice and so was structure
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