LyricalOnslaught vs intensify effect *punchline *
 

1 bar,
dont matter if u check-in or not
due in 20 min

no beef we cool its i just forgot about the battle we had
MY FULT KID...

ckeck in you have 20 mins ok and if not the extension is 1 hour so have it in by at least 4 pm if not your D/Q'ed

Your rhymes are slow on penetrating me this guy is a punchline snail.
I’ll hit you way faster than the speed of sending people Internet Email.

Agian Intensity effect fail to show up to thee battle he set it up and stilll didn't post
i need a mod to please close this battle

yo intensify effect are u ever going to drop in our battle

lyrical you dont want beef, trust me - I.E been dope
I'll stab your punchlines and add injury to insults


my fult i kept on forgeting about this battle....

upp'in for votes

OK fine then let the votes come in im going soft on you cuz i realy waanted to battle you let the votes come and please vote on this battle

Vote- Intensify Effect

Reason Why I Didnt Vote L- O- Even Tho L-O's Was Easier To Read, It Was A Played Concept And Didnt Hit Very Hard, And His Second Line Was A Metaphor......

Reason Why I Did Vote I- E- Even Tho Punches Didnt Hit To Hard In This Battle His Was Better, Tho Flow Was Harder To Follow, His Line Was Better And Kinda Witty......

V- I- E

lyrical onslaught wins with better punchline and metaphores intesity took mad long to spit and then spit some bullshit

Uppin 1 on this battle please pll vote and i'll return the favor.

LyricalOnslaught : it was a nice drop 4 sho, except it wasn't a personal... i understand its complicated 2 fom a personal in 1 bar, but in punchline battles u need 2 come EXTRA hard... but its still tight it just sound like a filler...

intensify effect :

"Your rhymes are slow on penetrating me this guy is a punchline snail.
I’ll hit you way faster than the speed of sending people Internet Email"

his verse^

it was all self glory so i didnt like it at all sry...

vote/LyricalOnslaught

yo vote on dis battle
i went against da WORST nigga eva
don't just look at it vote
both of you plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137406

i vote I.E, its hard to develope shit in 1 bar but i think L.O's was off track, more personal punches

i think u quoted the wrong person u got intensify effect : then hes bar
and my bar aint even on there???

i think u ment to vote for me or what clear that up for me??

i did quote da worng person but i voted 4 da right one... thnx 4 clearin dat up tho.... yo can u return da favor even tho i aint vote 4 u

Upping 2 on this Punchline battle

Come on guys, please vote on my battles so I can get it closed.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I'll return the favor.

come on we need votes people..................
i will personally return the vote..........

just a few more..........

Upping 2 on this battle please vote
ill return the favor

Upping 3 on this Punchline battle please vote and i'll return the favor
please be generous

yea it was close but i was feelin i.e. better even. i was feelin his last line da most.though both was good.
v/ie

thanks for the vote upp'in still.........................

intensify had the harder punch.....lyrical your punch didn't hit hard homie...intensify yours did...was a pretty dope punch too

v-intensify

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Tourn vs Femcee

LyricalOnslaught
structure is good...no multis...played punch that didnt connect, as it was also a meta...

intensity effect
structure was good...no multis...punch was semi-original...didnt connect though...

Overall
both had a good structure...neither had multis...neither punch connected...LyricalOnslaught had a played punch, and intensity effect's punch was semi-original, so basing off of that...intensity effect gets my vote for bein a little more original...

VOTE - INTENSITY EFFECTa

PLEAE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...

LO:
Not Very Hard hitting...Second Was An Ight But Played Meta...Flow Was Ight...5.5/10

IE:
1st Line was Self Glorification...Which Is Ight If You Follow It Wit A Bangin Punch But U Didn't....Flow was Ight But The Punch Weak.....5/10

V/Lyrical Onslaught
keep elevatin yall

I'll stab your punchlines and add injury to insults

ya dont get it??

he writes with hes hand/arm
hes punchlines are insults if they are consider a punchline

get it better now?

ya tru the firs lines was self glori but you did good
i shouldn't even give you a chance LOL doesn't matter i can still beat you in a real battle

upp'in this battle for 1 more vote so this could finally be ova............................................... .....

.........................................upp'in... ....

plez drop a vote someone so we can end this one plez.....

i'll return the favor just drop a link plez....

L.O. you didnt really come hard at all talking about e-mail and stuff. I just wasn't feelin it.

I.E. that concept was sick but I thought it could have been developed better. It was enough to take this battle though

v/I.E.