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Ghost354 vs MONSOON
10 lines due in 30 minutes after check in
no d/r votes or none of that |
well both go in 30 min so theres no feedin, ......!
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dude done lost drownd by his name kid You'll Get Dimenished
Cauze Now, I'm Gettin-Rid-Of-Kidz Like Abortion-Clinicz Dude Think He Pac Cause His Name Flowin Till The End Of Time Shotz Ta Ya Cranium,Have Ya Brainz HANG-OUT Like CLOTHES-LINES By Lookin At ya Sig I Can Tell Ya Carrer Is Gonna Blow Like Difused Landmines But Cross Me Wrong And Get Ya Wig PUSHED BACK Like DEAD-LINES Get Cha Insidez Shifted And Moved..Injured And Bruised Not Knowin I Run-Around-With-Torch Like Olympicz-Do Tell This Bitch I Got Bars Ta Play Wit Like Spittin Dildo Rapz Check His Statz Dude Only Makin Chump Change Like Laundry Matz |
dog u dqd
couldnt even spit in 30 minutes get the fuck outta here |
I'll desinigrate you in little pieces, and put your face where your ass is,
cause this cats bullshit, whatever he spits its gases.........(and if you ask me) ill murder this dude then ill tatoo, a fukin teardrop your full of static ghost, cause my timbs don crushed your voice box ghost lookin-----I bet you puff rocks, sniff coke off mens cocks, you sure you a ghost, cause i saw the same skeptic of a gray fox, The mirrors make this ghost have fears, gets mad when he sees himself multiply in crystalized chandalears you must be jokin, hopin you an O.G on the net you aint did shitt special to evEn erupt IN effect you aint invisible,invinceable, am i gettin through to you ! dont vote this casper imitater, cause REALLY THIS NI99AZ---- SCARED OF YOU !! BOOO !! O !!! |
I Had Too Many Bars On It So I Had To Fix It And Take Out A Couple But Anyways............
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Uppin Votes
Ill Do The Same For Yall Cats Ill Be Lookin Foward |
naw nigga this should be a dq
but fuck it upin |
damn this shit already at the back page again
niggaz needa vote instead of uppin so much an return some votes like i do an stop bull shittin |
monsoon was more personal but it was weak and childish ghost spit a hard verse with sick metaphores even though it was kinda lnog on some bars it was still hot way hotter then monsoons
vote on my battles aganist daillest and killah caliph |
my bad for gettin too personal ghost
it was a battle, what can i say............ |
u striaght nigga
this dude didnt evgen poll a vote wtf lmao uppin will get at your battle with an honest vote |
............up
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Moonsoon ya need to shorten ya structure a little, only off his name in like 1 bar after that it gets played. Ghost ya shit was not all that but ya had a few tight punches in there that allowed ya to get the win.
vote=Ghost |
up will return an honest vote
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ghost had the harder hitting punches and more personals... monsoon's verse was kinda lackin. the structure and flow were a lil off in places too, and all around ghos't shit was just more entertaining to read. great wordplay, meta and all that!
v/ Ghost please return the favour and vote in one of my battles... |
what the fuuukk ?
I aint trippen,kinda understand, but damn i thought a battle was free speached as long as your puncehs hit its like me jabbin his face, in this case I used GHOST as a target in a reel fight the face meaning (GHOST ) WOULD OF SUFFERED MORE BRUISES FOR A WIN in others words be down for the count this was just a method I use only for this battle, because every battle should me unprdictable and different.......... think about it . anyways honest votes please ! |
^ everyone who battles me uses the same ol ghost shit getz old readin it nigga so it waznt unpredictable to me
uppin |
of course you would say that, expected it........anyways I dont give a fuk
it was the enjoyment to myself of just crushin your name, to be honest it felt lovely good battle though mann, im not usually the battle type, and oh yea ....................there willl be GHOSTS........ P.I.R CAP 2 |
No Personals For Neither Of You.ghost Gets Flow Moonson I Cant Follow Your Shit At All.pucnches Again Go To Ghost Harder Hittin And Slicker Moonson Step It Up Yours Were Like 3rd Grade Jokes.vote To Ghost
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aight check it, its all good I know theres somebody who felt my shitt
i havent been online in a while so i guess he got some dickridas but im gonna keep on elevatin, this shit aint gonna stop and all my real niggaz feel me !! im a pitbull, im hardheaded...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!1 |
monsoon your structure needs serious work and none of your punches hit hard or were even slightly good. ghost your punches were awwwwww so-so you feel me. yall both need to elevate some more but it wasnta horrible battle. ghost u get the vote for better punches and structure but other than that it was even.
v/ghost p.s. drop an honest vote for the battles in the sig |
Dis battle was good
the only problem is that I cant vote yet Ill be sure to vote on dis one |
good battle ghost and monsoon would win with they verses.....
but both ya cant, so, punches go to ghost, for his clothelines line and the olypic torch line struc flow and metas a tie monsoon i like ya 1st three lines an ya pitbull ending but in the end, ghost made a better effort to win vote on this i http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141032 |
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