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Durmil 07-25-04 05:33 PM

.Durmil. VS .$ik.
 
...6 Barz...
...No Biting, feeding, Flipping, Recycling...
...No Hate & D/R Votes...
...I'm Droppin First...


check in first so i see ur down

Sik Wit It 07-25-04 05:37 PM

..................CheCk.....CheCk...............

Durmil 07-25-04 06:21 PM

Sik? Well Durm stays on top of this patient like he's throwing up peace
...Keep my hands to the Earth and destroy this herb like cultivating weeds
I'm feelin sorry for this sik bastard & I'm not even bein deceivin
...Cause in real life he has less friends then NBC's next season (the TV show)
It's like i'm spittin Satan the way i got ur mind going through hell
...Check ya record kid, must be getin embarrased this the 12th time u've fell
Get the impression?, "Can i beat Durm"? don't even ask urself the question
...I aint messin, only time this cat is $ik is during acid indegestion
Roc-a-fella Clearly aint ya roots..you suck easily snapped like a twig
...Seriously 11-8 quit battelin....it's clear ur heads as empty as ur sig
I thought u might actually be good, but then peeped ya text and it stank
...And if u think ur the cream of the crop, then the harvest is shootin blanks


*there's many personals in there just look for em

uppin for ya drop kid...leave links we'll hit up ya battle's fairly

Sik Wit It 07-25-04 06:23 PM

Ok...Yo CheCk It

The only way you can flow is if you said your verse when you cough...
Don't bother flowin' anymore cause your lines are too soft...
You know this little bitch was dreaming one day that he can surf...
For all the people out there why did I have to battle Blue Boy The Smurf...
This nigga here likes to shop at the store called Eckerds...
This nigga here can't even flow but instead he gives lectures...
You need to stop spittin' dawg you know why? cause you suck...
The only you can fuckin' beat me dawg is by luck...
You can't fuckin' stop me because im better than you...
Cause you can't even fuckin' flow like that nigga DJ Clue...
Some say I flow good because im not that mean...
Cause my words are like 'Chlorox Bleach' they'll wipe yo ass clean...

Sik Wit It 07-25-04 06:24 PM

^my fault on that....

Ok...Yo CheCk It

The only way you can flow is if you said your verse when you cough...
Don't bother flowin' anymore cause your lines are too soft...
You know this little bitch was dreaming one day that he can surf...
For all the people out there why did I have to battle Blue Boy The Smurf...
This nigga here likes to shop at the store called Eckerds...
This nigga here can't even flow but instead he gives lectures...
You need to stop spittin' dawg you know why? cause you suck...
The only you can fuckin' beat me dawg is by luck...
You can't fuckin' stop me because im better than you...
Cause you can't even fuckin' flow like that nigga DJ Clue...
Some say I flow good because im not that mean...
Cause my words are like 'Chlorox Bleach' they'll wipe yo ass clean...

Sik Wit It 07-25-04 06:52 PM

Uppin' For Votes...1

Durmil 07-25-04 09:16 PM

uppin lets get soem votes on this...we'll return the favour

Big Bad Wolf 07-25-04 09:49 PM

V/Durmil
Feelin yo flow and punches came harder. Sik was aiight jus need 2 work on your shit more.

G 07-25-04 10:13 PM

Durm takes it easily with punches and personals. Both structures were alright but some lines seemed stretched. Siks rhymes were boring and not creative at all. Usin the word nigga all the time doesnt make your rhymes and punches any harder. Durm takes it with a better structure, flow, and better punches too.

Vote-Durmil

Justify 07-25-04 11:19 PM

Durmil came with better punches..wasnt feelin siks at all..good structure and flow both of ya..but durm came wit better punches n peronals

V/Durmil....return favor vs Djulien in sig

Durmil 07-26-04 12:33 AM

ight uppin for some more votes

battle stands 3-0 me

Durmil 07-26-04 11:18 AM

uppin.....

~Luciano~ 07-26-04 10:28 PM

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all i gotta say iz "Cause in real life he has less friends then NBC's next season"
that line righ there is wha got Durmil my vote hands down good drop cuz

sik you had perfect structure but ya punches were plain and simple you need 2 elevate alot and use more personals because thats wha wins you battles, work on elevating

Durmil you had nice wordplay and complexity not the best structure but hey it got the job done i like the punches you were throwin they hit the mark and got the job done

good battle

but my vote goes 2~~~~~~~~Durmil~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~Luciano~ 07-26-04 10:29 PM


all i gotta say iz "Cause in real life he has less friends then NBC's next season"
that line righ there is wha got Durmil my vote hands down good drop cuz

sik you had perfect structure but ya punches were plain and simple you need 2 elevate alot and use more personals because thats wha wins you battles, work on elevating

Durmil you had nice wordplay and complexity not the best structure but hey it got the job done i like the punches you were throwin they hit the mark and got the job done

good battle

but my vote goes 2~~~~~~~~Durmil~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Durmil 07-27-04 01:13 PM

ight good looks....uppin for some more

bump.....

Durmil 07-27-04 04:30 PM

bump

For$akeN 07-27-04 06:54 PM

Durmil's Drop:

Sik? Well Durm stays on top of this patient like he's throwing up peace
...Keep my hands to the Earth and destroy this herb like cultivating weeds
nice opener I was really feeling the second line
because 1st line was part self-glorification but it was still
good in my opinion.....7/10

I'm feelin sorry for this sik bastard & I'm not even bein deceivin
...Cause in real life he has less friends then NBC's next season
haha theres still gonna be one guy left from
friends.....JOEY!!!!!! oh well................7.5/10

It's like i'm spittin Satan the way i got ur mind going through hell
...Check ya record kid, must be getin embarrased this the 12th time u've fell
ummm......you should of switched the positions of
both lines because 1st was better than 2nd and the set-up
would of been a lil better 7.5/10

Get the impression?, "Can i beat Durm"? don't even ask urself the question
...I aint messin, only time this cat is $ik is during acid indegestion
ya nice I saw the personal wordplay with
his name and it came out hott good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!8.5/10

Roc-a-fella Clearly aint ya roots..you suck easily snapped like a twig
...Seriously 11-8 quit battelin....it's clear ur heads as empty as ur sig
sort of a unoriginal bar.....because I made a punc
h similiar b4 with the same meaning but different words......7/10

I thought u might actually be good, but then peeped ya text and it stank
...And if u think ur the cream of the crop, then the harvest is shootin blanks
ok punch ok closer not all that great tho closers
seal your fate....6.5/10


OVERALL: 7.5/10


$ik's Drop:

The only way you can flow is if you said your verse when you cough...
Don't bother flowin' anymore cause your lines are too soft...
ummm.....no personal and it was kinda weak
and unoriginal in my opinion sorry............................5/10

You know this little bitch was dreaming one day that he can surf...
For all the people out there why did I have to battle Blue Boy The Smurf...
I had no idea what the was saying.........them
was no personal and what was with the blue boy thing???? 5.5/10

This nigga here likes to shop at the store called Eckerds...
This nigga here can't even flow but instead he gives lectures...
you said flow 2x.....not good....................5.5/10
You need to stop spittin' dawg you know why? cause you suck...
The only you can fuckin' beat me dawg is by luck...
wha!!!!! 2nd line self-glorification so that is
not good.........3/10

You can't fuckin' stop me because im better than you...
Cause you can't even fuckin' flow like that nigga DJ Clue...
said flow for the 3rd time.......3/10
Some say I flow good because im not that mean...
Cause my words are like 'Chlorox Bleach' they'll wipe yo ass clean...
said flow again and weak punch........2/10

OVERALL: 4/10

Vote: Durmil good job!


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