Myster.E vs. DJulien
 

Let's go

aite faggot let me murk u quick so i could move on to my next battle, u ready

I'm ready as ever, Born ready 5,4,3,... Let's Get It On

fags neva win so in dis case ya ass gon lose/
ill sabotage ur lyrix and watch ur ego bruise/
u been demolished, my rap knowledge, is like lyrical college/
if u disrepect me punish ur ass by spit shinin' and polish/
u give a bad rep fo da new-commers/
my lyrics is hard knock like da side of a hummer/
call urself Myster dot E, take a seat in da lyrical chair/
and like da lord saviour promisin', yes da end is near/
u rank last wen categorized wit RB lyricist/
ass so u ugly, turn u to a mirror so u could see da reflection of a terrorist/

You're every other word is 'fag', thats because homosexuality is ur bag,/
You're painfully gay, cuz you're anally gay, the sayin's the same,/
Where there's a will there's a way, in your case where there's a Will he's gotta swing your way, for some foreplay and a foursome- your forte,/
This is horseplay, I'll feed you horse hay, You'll still be hungry for four days,/
That's until I emit an array of raw spray of rhymes, that'll leave you tongue tied, cuz your tongue died,/
I'm the wrong guy to come try shit wit', now I'll let rip and words will fly at ya, like bullets from 95 quick clips,
Like a fly catcher, you won't be able to catch this B, right about now I'm countin sheep, cuz you spit an amountless sheep,/
My name Remains, like a stain, in your boxers, but your too obnoxious to notice,/
You know this the only thing you're good for is to hold d*cks,/
I know the truth hurts but I had to post it, I would respect you but you a fag and a hoe bitch,/

hahahahaha myster. E you had me weak you slaughterd this cat :shoot: he didnt know what was comin :huh: theres a newb who knows what hes doin

DJulien i wasnt feelin you to much your punchlines didnt conect and your closer sucked so this is what happened to you :hump: you got rapped

"You're every other word is 'fag', thats because homosexuality is ur bag,/
You're painfully gay, cuz you're anally gay, the sayin's the same,/
Where there's a will there's a way, in your case where there's a Will he's gotta swing your way, for some foreplay and a foursome- your forte,/"

lmao that was sick twisted and hilarious

v/ myster. E

DJulien,your verse was wack as fuck dawg,no hate,just elevate.you stepped in this thread claiming you were gonna merk him,i was expecting something genius but you made a verse that was wacker than one of ym verses when i first joined.
Mr.E,your verse was ok,you had some good punches and metas but nothing too special.all i can say to both of you is elevate.

aite i say both raps was iight nuttin to go oohh and ahh about
but this nigga myster.e was good but he keep sayin tha same shit ova and ova
so did did djulien but dj had some iight punches.

Break Down I

Djulien- Basic Verse... Nothing To Serious, Structure Was Ok, But No Hard Hitting Punches, Flow Was Alright, No Multis, or Decent Wordplay.....


Myster. E-Ok Verse, Like Your Structure, Punches Where There, Multis, And Flow Was On Point Tho Feedin Was Gay On The "Gay" Lines... Overal Good Verse....



Break Down II
Punches- Myster. E
Personals- Myster. E
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Niether
Multis- Myster. E
Metaphors- Niether
Structure- Djulien
Originality- Tie
Vocab- Tie

Final Vote- Myster. E

oh shit
 

i mean i have seen meat but u got slaughtered hardcore, nice battle though. . .
myster.e won definetely. .

up................... uppin here.................................... wooooooooooooooooo

c'mon uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin here

shittttttttttt nigga u killed da lil boi he must b pissin him self he most prb cut he lips and fingers off afta dat battle mrster .e won dat shit straight up in here is straight hip hop peace mothafuckas

ripped him in half da 1st peson needs 2 practice u kinda behind my level a lil nigga E won i dun care

I would like to say thank you all of you for helpin me close my first victory technically wit Phat I would like y'all to help again in closin this one come vote up in here.

wat goes down must come up

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DJulien~ Wasn't feeling your lyrics, really gotta work with that.
Myster.E~ Couple lines were like wtf, but overall you have the battle

v/ Myster.E

I'm comin up

farenheit uppin

help me close up

close up

both had many failed attempts to land decent punches.

due to better struct. more word play, more creativity and a few poor punches....
...if its not closed, you had a better verse than Julien


vote:Myster.E

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139268

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Myster E, You won.. but you can improve on your structure.. basically you had better punchlines than him and you took it, coz his was kinda played in some point..
V/Myster E
Can you return favor and drop in mines? thanx

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139363

naw Mister E. keeps copyin himself, he has nice multi's but they juss are all forced and offbeat if he'd ever spit em to a beat............ Julien won this for actually sayin sumthin thatd be on beat......... besides that they were kinda even

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this has to be the most interesting battle i have ever see before... Dj's flow was a whole lot better, but that dosent always win battles. myster e's lines and rhymes were much better... his attempts at punchlines made his better. even tho tha other flowed better, i like myster e's style.... i was like no restrictions, nothin stoppin, he would rhyme a lot and shyt... thats what won this for me

return tha favor
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139693 me vs. reloaded
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139502 me vs mc xplicit

Vore-Myster.E

He had betta punchez he killed u man betta yet he nslaughtered u lolz well great battle u 2....dj u cud have dun betta u have no punchez or nuttin u jus talkin shyt

do me a favor n vote 2 ma battle like i did 2 u link is in signature

myster.E........structure was good.......flowed well.........punches were strong.....nice personals too..

DJulien..........structure was good.......flow was aight......punches couldv'e bin betta......personals were poor.....

Overal.......i think myster.E punches were alot harder........Julien jus needs to elevate a bit......