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dawgfatha_13 V/S Ghost354
k u no the rulez....
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cheeeck
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stop fakin dawg i'm murkin pretenderz...
u talk tuff but wouldn't smoke a turkey at da end of november we gon see dat u candy now or later... cuz my shellz'll take ya face off lyke an anxious hockey player i can tell u a fag ...shit you gotta be... so jus say dat u gay...so we can take it as reverse psychology an ya flowz ain't shyt so i ain't even carin bitch... toxic spitz? shit u jus race'n to ya death lyke a speedin terrorist u shook like Ali disease, till sum shotz ramble thru me... my flow'll be too dark 4 u cuz u cant even hold a candle 2 me nigga u got 10 minutes |
damn none of u niggaz can liv up to the rules of spittin in 30 minutes
why agree to the rules if u cant live up to em fuckin 2nd person today that couldnt do it |
yo sry bout dat I had shit to do...Imma spit in a bit.
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Check it,
Ghost,tell me how it feels to feel 'concrete' when you hit the cement... You couldnt haunt me if you was a Maghrebian landlord....claiming his overdue rent... You couldnt bring drama if you helped create that 1939 flick City Lights... Matter of Fact,the only you could bring is your 'Ghetto Blaster' to your streetfights... I'll shatter your career like a cheap discount price window... Even if you changed your name to 100 watt,you still wouldnt glow... Rap isnt for you,so stick to ballet... Gayboy,your so desperate for 'whitestuff'...you became a milkmaid!! Sry bout being late........ P.S-I wrote my verse last night. |
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ok nigga uppin for some votes will return an honest vote |
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god damn vote
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ima have to give this battle to dawgfatha his flow was better n his punches hit harder
Ghost had some good ideas but his structure wasa lil off so he came offa lil weak v= Dawgfatha return the favor yall http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136610 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650 |
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yea DawgFatha had more punches and they hit a lot harder....his flow was alright and he had some good wordplay and metas
Ghost....your verse was ok....i agree with the other dude who voted you were getting good ideas and your structure was bad....so it threw you off a lot....work on your stucture a bit and it will sound better RETURN THE FAVOR ON MY BATTLES |
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dawg weak ending and weak personals and punches plus your flow was stretched to far your struture was horrible
ghost good struture and vocab your ending was stronger as was your beggining not your best verse but still a strong couple bars iliked the you speeding to ya death bar and the reverse phsycology bar those was slick you need to use more personals but you aint need um to win this vote-ghost vote on my battles honest votes are returned niggas that dr get banned along with haters and those who cant take critisizm |
uppin 4 votes...
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Ghost better harder punches Avanish your verse was good too but not as hard hittin punches. return da fav. honestly http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982
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vote chumpz
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ghost is gonna get this one from me because he had a lot of harder punches than the second, more creativity. I nearly didnt get some of the lines, the second and third. you lost me for a second. and this hurts a verse.
ghost get this for better structure and puches. |
ok congrats on the vote....uppin...
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ghost-ok drop. ok punches, ok wordplay, ok structure just basically everything was ok, u had some parts where it was a lil better but it was mostly just another average verse...6/10
dawgfatha- ok drop.ur punches and wordplay were ok but that structure was horrible. try somethin diferent. some of ur lines werent hot at all tho so i give it...4/10 both elevate v//ghost354 |
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O Shit My Boi Dawgfatha_13 Is Comin Up Nice On Yo Part D// U Know Who Dis Is The Infeckta Pm Me If U Dont Know Who Dis Is
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dawg....took it in my opinion..... his punches hit harder and werent as played....his structure was easier and i just thought his was better....i will break down more....no beef honest vote
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yo mah bad i got yall mixed up my voe goes to ghost mah bad i fucked up.....
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Was pretty close.... but I didn't like the fact that dawg had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to Ghost... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho..
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