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another noob vs 708
yo i aint tryin 2 battle noobs 2 get wins they challengin me... its fuckin annoyin...
yo i dont care who go 1st... i know u gonna be wack neway so u gonna want me 2 go 1st 2 play of my verse... yo just check in so i can spit already.. 10 lines like u said |
bwahaha. i don't care who go first, you out the water either way.
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fucka newbie shit mayne, i be rippin ya apart b. if you was even remotly close to my skills, i'd try, but no use wastin a verse and time on ya pathetic ass.
i'll even give you two the same words, you still couldn't rhyme it.... . . they say you get what you look up to...for you it's the heaven... .................i aint even good at dice and craps, but i'm rollin on 7 you from the u.p. kid, don't ever try to fuck with the dirty Italy... ................and when he says "you can't see me"...take it literally ................cause your lines are left-out, sort of like this alignment you far from the hood, more like the trunk, strapped and seated... .................cause your pun died along time ago...right after he did yeah, everyone thinkin gio the big underdog at this wack fight?!... ........but cause of me, this thread have more feedback than ya mic |
my verse
iight let me shut dis nigga up cuz he gettin full of hisself WAY 2 early
underlined words means there connected in some way bold words mean they rhyme since when did noobs know who got skillz nobody PAY attentin too you, you just like BILLZ he said in bitch slapped dat i talk, 2 much shit if skillz was money homie, then you sure u aint rich u act like u the noob superhero, savin noobs from me noobman is what they'd call ya, but u still just a noob 2 me 20-minus 20 equals you, dats an equation (20-20=0) watch dis nigga feed of my verse like birds re-gurgitatin giovoni from italy and still aint got no spice in his verse if i have 2 i'd battle him twice 2 make him work |
:laugh: ^^i was so right about u man, yo structure was off and everything^^^ y u say i aint worth yo good shit when u barely got enough post 2 vote and ima flyweight? don't try 2 make niggas take it easy on you man :laugh:
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bwahaha @ this...staight outta the dr. suess dictionary..bwahaha! |
aite due, you piss me off too fuckin much. structure aint mean shit b...when you on stage, they be judgin ya structure?! fuck outta here...and watch how ya get blown out the water.
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ummm.... are we even on stage? we're o da computer nigga lol o well uppin 4 votes...
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708 sucks his raps are corny so the way he trys to beat he goes by some corny ass strucer shit thats why i say 708 lost like usal cuz in person 708 is garbage all he is is a shit talker and he bit off my shit just used different words so i say giovanni won
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nah, fuck that vote b. good looks takin ya time and shit, but i can't accept that.
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hell naw dats a fuckin hate vote i just beat dat peice of shit like 5 min. ago
im rportin dat as DR |
joel reckless~i saw ur battle~dat shit was all fucked up~~i bet dis nigga and me can take yall 2 in a tagteam battle~
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damn, lemme end this right quick.
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uppin 4 votes...uppin.... and yo joel reckless i know in yo sig it said u wanna die hard.... u betta get an erection 1st..... uppin 4 votes....
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uppin 4 sum uthafucka votes!!!! lol 4 real tho lets get some votes.... im da only one uppin dis battle and niggas still not votin so help me out plz
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up this shit mayne! fuck yall, this shit been up since yesterday, and still no votes.
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[size=1]bwahaha @ this.
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lol^^^^niggaz iz sleepin wit da votes..i cant vote..
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they say you get what you look up to...for you it's the heaven... .................i aint even good at dice and craps, but i'm rollin on 7 Not really a thrown punch at ur opponent...wasnt feeling the concept either..weak 3/10 you from the u.p. kid, don't ever try to fuck with the dirty Italy... ................and when he says "you can't see me"...take it literally Ok..i didnt like that at all..again weak..wasnt feeling that 3/10 i'll even give you two the same words, you still couldn't rhyme it... ................cause your lines are left-out, sort of like this alignment Actually i was feeling the punch a bit..was creative set up was kinda weak though..ok 5.5/10 you far from the hood, more like the trunk, strapped and seated... .................cause your pun died along time ago...right after he did i was feeling the concept also again..punch could ov been thrown better..ok again 5.5.10 yeah, everyone thinkin gio the big underdog at this wack fight?!... ........but cause of me, this thread have more feedback than ya mic again this was ok..best punchline of the whole verse aswell..ok personal 6/10 This was an ok verse nothing really outstanding but ok..punches got better as the verse went on..seen some good potential in some bars..flow and structure were aight.. since when did noobs know who got skillz nobody PAY attentin too you, you just like BILLZ Wack..course ppl pay attention to bills..other wise we all be homeless 1/10 he said in bitch slapped dat i talk, 2 much shit if skillz was money homie, then you sure u aint rich Basic as fuck..up the creativty..2/10 u act like u the noob superhero, savin noobs from me noobman is what they'd call ya, but u still just a noob 2 me How many times u gonna use the word noob..weak 2/10 20-minus 20 equals you, dats an equation (20-20=0) watch dis nigga feed of my verse like birds re-gurgitatin wheres the rhyme scheme gone mmm...2/10 giovoni from italy and still aint got no spice in his verse if i have 2 i'd battle him twice 2 make him work LAUGHS wtf was that..seriously need to elevate any ways..elevation is needed ..there was no witty/creative punches or personls in thsi verse..flow went off at the end.. v/ Giovanni..y'all drop a vote on my battle..link under my sig..no hate pz |
no bitch, fuck ya what ya thinkin. tell everyone they lines wack? nah b, get the fuck outta here.
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up...again.
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Giovani- Flow Was Good, Structure Was Good, And Punches Were Good, I Liked That Pun Died Line... Nice Flip...
708- Structure Was Ok, But If It Wasnt Centered It Would Be Off, And Make It Look Wrong And Prolly Throw People Off, Plus Bolding Words That Rhyme Are Stupid lol.... Punches Werent Really Hittin Hard To Me.... Punches- Gio Flow- Tie Wordplay- Gio Metaz- Niether Multis- Niether Originality- Gio Structure- Gio Final Vote- Giovanni Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077 |
obviously sparadic aint no hood nigga and thats why he aint get 708 bar.in the hood niggas throw bills out and dont pay shit till we forced maybe in suburbia you pay madd attention to bills in the hood landlords be there on the first and 3rd so no niggas aint homeless.damn you wanstas is stupid.gio good verse i liked both yall shits but 708 in my crew so i cant vote.good luck niggas.
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yo uppin dis battle.... get dis shit ova wit ppl :)
plz no DR choose who had da best verse not who has da most friends 2 vote.... |
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whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa thats a recycled verse you bum you spit that in a battle already you aint no mc giovanni :cussing: |
i wasnt feelin giovani it was a bit confusin but i lked how you used that off like my structure line
708 did pretty good he had some wordplay and actually made an effort but the noob thing is played out but you still beat him v/708 |
they say you get what you look up to...for you it's the heaven... .................i aint even good at dice and craps, but i'm rollin on 7 5/10 you from the u.p. kid, don't ever try to fuck with the dirty Italy... ................and when he says "you can't see me"...take it literally 5/10 i'll even give you two the same words, you still couldn't rhyme it... ................cause your lines are left-out, sort of like this alignment 7/10 you far from the hood, more like the trunk, strapped and seated... .................cause your pun died along time ago...right after he did 6/10 yeah, everyone thinkin gio the big underdog at this wack fight?!... ........but cause of me, this thread have more feedback than ya mic 6/10 since when did noobs know who got skillz nobody PAY attentin too you, you just like BILLZ 6/10 he said in bitch slapped dat i talk, 2 much shit if skillz was money homie, then you sure u aint rich 5/10 u act like u the noob superhero, savin noobs from me noobman is what they'd call ya, but u still just a noob 2 me 6/10 20-minus 20 equals you, dats an equation (20-20=0) watch dis nigga feed of my verse like birds re-gurgitatin 7/10 giovoni from italy and still aint got no spice in his verse if i have 2 i'd battle him twice 2 make him work 7/10 this came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay my vote~~~~~~708 |
uppin.
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uppin 4 some vtes plz
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708 jus cuz hes betta punching and he raps like a true g
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uppin da battle yo...... uppin uppin........
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Giovanni
they say you get what you look up to...for you it's the heaven... .................i aint even good at dice and craps, but i'm rollin on 7 ->>decent you from the u.p. kid, don't ever try to fuck with the dirty Italy... ................and when he says "you can't see me"...take it literally ->>I didnt really get the second line i'll even give you two the same words, you still couldn't rhyme it... ................cause your lines are left-out, sort of like this alignment ->>cool idea i was feelin it you far from the hood, more like the trunk, strapped and seated... .................cause your pun died along time ago...right after he did ->>tight flip on this yeah, everyone thinkin gio the big underdog at this wack fight?!... ........but cause of me, this thread have more feedback than ya mic ->>ehh...decent 7*0*8* since when did noobs know who got skillz nobody PAY attentin too you, you just like BILLZ ->>how did dude not get this? its decent he said in bitch slapped dat i talk, 2 much shit if skillz was money homie, then you sure u aint rich ->>pretty weak u act like u the noob superhero, savin noobs from me noobman is what they'd call ya, but u still just a noob 2 me ->>too many noobs for one bar 20-minus 20 equals you, dats an equation (20-20=0) watch dis nigga feed of my verse like birds re-gurgitatin ->>pretty good wordplay here giovoni from italy and still aint got no spice in his verse if i have 2 i'd battle him twice 2 make him work ->>decent closer ->>Giovanni got it here. He had better wordplay and his hit harder. |
vote goes 2 7*0*8* cuz he had me laughin a lil wit da research he did and diss on ur home,....
gio ur verse was tight too but i overal like 7's better and ur structure was off vote~7*0*8* |
Yo what the Fuck man, 7*0*8* yah shit was aight but it was nothing special, nothing even close to vets style, you still on the Newb wagon bro... anyway had some good Rhyems, yah Punches were weak, and You had i personal, Overall i rate yah Verse at 3.5/10
Yo gio, yah verse was pretty weak as well, yah gotta keep elevating, should have re-aranged yah punches to have more effect.. My vote goes to GIO... Peace |
Dis was a good battle
708 u had da punches goin and his flow was good U had some cut off linez though ur structure was decent Nice rhymes also 8.5/10 Ginovi had a pretty good rap also Nice puunch linez flow and structure U had one stretched line dat I couldnt quite understand Overall I think G did more damage Not to say anthing was wrong wit urs 708 but somebodys gotta win v/G |
G had a 9/10 overall
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