lost and confused
 

Lost and confused
no longer know what to do
don’t know what to say
I still wake up everyday
and realize I’m not with you
baby I do still miss you
I want u back in my arms
so we can laugh together
just be together
girl I miss you ain’t nothin the same
day after day it hurts to know
that things had to change
it is ok now though
because we are now best friends
and I can go on with my life

feedback plz...leave a link n i'll get back at ya

feedback please

Yo dat was real. I like da fact dat ur letin ur x know you still love her. keep doin tha damn thing

thass nice...keep it up cuz ur good

ay thanks fa da feed...uppin peace

feedback plz

thanks fa da feedback...uppin

Word man - I wasn't feelin the depth, but at the same time im goin through that right now. Was goin to do a track very close to this - and am still writing it... Emotion was real dun. Watch for Phenom in Songs, cause i got a track coming like this. Good lookin though

iight kidd i'll be lookin fa dat...thanks fa the feed...peace

uppin

I'm feelin this...Lyrical Artist
 

Yo dawg, thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it..Yooo, I'm feelin ya poem joint though..I guess it's because I can really relate to it cause I felt the same way...I just wanted to say keep being focus and keep writing cause ya lyrics are good..Peace............Lyrical Artist..

I feel like u could have went more into depth with puttin more emotion into it....short but i was feeling it....i Could actully relate to it pretty well so i can undersatnd where u coming from, nice

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ay thanks fa da feedback...appreciat it...uppin peace

yo mex...you battle..?

man how da hell u gon ask me if i battle an u ain't even gon leave some feed??w/e tho...no beef....but ya i will....feedback plz

nice, i like this one....i cant judge on what u need to get better on cus i dont kno what and if u do....

but sounds alot like what i feel now lol...nj

uhh this is pretty cool

its not tha best poem ive ever seen but pretty good still

u should go gimme some feedback on my poem called "your pain is my pain"

thanx

thanks fa da feed...ya i'll hit ur drop...more feed plz...peace

thanx

while ur at it u should hit my latest drop

"turn for tha worse"

iight kidd i'll hit dat up...uppin dis shyt...peace

feed plz

feed plz

damn yall need 2 quit sleepin on dis shyt...feedback plz