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MONSOON Vs. J Roc
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fuck it heres my verse
i'll easily rip you cause you're weak like one-ply toliet tissue...and slice you into itty bitty pieces smaller than fish food// you couldn't produce a "tight product" if you "multiplied virgins"...you're just mad at me i'm da one who "pop" your girlfriend// imma leave your head spinnin worse than a tropical whirlwind...you're full of more shit than da toliet you hurl in// to me Monsoon is like a dumb jock...i know for you "pain sucks" cause you suck on numb cocks// you get rolled on more than airplanes on runways...like LL said "you can't touch me" on "any given sunday"// Monsoon-ya-wack, you're gettin pop worse than bubble wrap...imma leave da spot hotter than a NASA shuttle blast// imma slap you so hard you'll forever have crooked teeth...and if you were my genetic clone you still wouldn't be as good as me// i burn brighter than light Magnified a million times...it's like your verse is covered in novicane, i just don't feel your rhymes// i possess a brillant mind so my attack is thought out thouroughly...you act like da average bitch so you're just another girl to me// so after i'm done you need to take a step to da sidelines...and do like you always been doing, just continue to ride mine// |
PREVIEWS PREVIEWS READ ALL ABOUT IT !
J GOT STRUCK WITH ABOUT 10 VERSES PREVIEWS PREVIEWS READ ALL ABOUT IT ! J GOT STRUCK WITH ABOUT 10 VERSES I payed the money hungry nurses, to keep you meditated with drugs your peeps in the hospital......... givin me kisses and hugs while you stuck strung out, layin on your belly with your butt out its that happy shitt you need to cut out, this cats bugged out felt ya wrist yea he gone,this ni99az lifeless indeed hes in the state of mind where he won the fight in his dreams call it a wrap, cause with this rap, you down for the count 1--5--8 fuk it hes down for this round, fukin wit monsoon youll get slapped wit the crown rewind: this is what finished this m.c, lets back up to the first round They say every punch I give it will come back to me how is that, when im hotter then 2 gay dudes in a sausage factory... PREVIEWS PREVIEWS READ ALL ABOUT IT !!! J GOT STRUCK WITH ABOUT 10 VERSES PREVIEWS PREVIEWS READ ALL ABOUT !!! J GOT STRUCK WITH ABOUT 10 VERSUS |
Well Folks You Know What To Do
Vote Ill Vote On Your Upcomin Battles This Battle Was A Battle (between A Journey With Words) Read And Enjoy Im Out Oh Yea Shoutouts To Cell Block 13, I Aint Forget About Yall |
come on yall lets see some votes dont sleep an props to monsson for showin up
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damn i gotta up thyis one to come on yall we need some votes in here
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damn still no votes what a man gotta do to get some votes round here shit
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holy shit yall be sleepin to much i gotta up this battle almost eryday
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i give it to jroc his shit was good except for '' pain sucks' thats why you suck numb cock.numb is the absence of pain you fucking idiot!!!!damn rappers is getting dumber and dumber anyways jroc still gets it with harder punches.moonson was ok but his shit was hard to follow and it rhymed but it was hard to tell it did and his punches were lacking.
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jroc had this one becuz he had harder punches and monsoon had terrible punchlines.
Unexplained vote -Cprogress |
yo mann uppin votes
shitt im stil representin, it aint done yet creative shit, i let you pic this m.c fall |
yea uppin for some more votes i want these battles to be done already
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J Roc
i'll easily rip you cause you're weak like one-ply toliet tissue... and slice you into itty bitty pieces smaller than fish food// first lines played, fish lines blahza you couldn't produce a "tight product" if you "multiplied virgins"... you're just mad at me i'm da one who "pop" your girlfriend// No imma leave your head spinnin worse than a tropical whirlwind... you're full of more shit than da toliet you hurl in// PlaYeD to me Monsoon is like a dumb jock... i know for you "pain sucks" cause you suck on numb cocks// pFFt you get rolled on more than airplanes on runways... like LL said "you can't touch me" on "any given sunday"// 'runway' lines ok, 2nd was ugh Monsoon-ya-wack, you're gettin pop worse than bubble wrap... imma leave da spot hotter than a NASA shuttle blast// Nah imma slap you so hard you'll forever have crooked teeth... and if you were my genetic clone you still wouldn't be as good as me// Hoo Hum i burn brighter than light Magnified a million times... it's like your verse is covered in novicane, i just don't feel your rhymes// pLaYeD i possess a brillant mind so my attack is thought out thouroughly... you act like da average bitch so you're just another girl to me// Yeah your cool so after i'm done you need to take a step to da sidelines... and do like you always been doing, just continue to ride mine// Whut eva Obviously got some talent, BUT 99% of your verse was pLaYeD or indirect(talking bout his girl?c'mon) Monsoon I payed the money hungry nurses, to keep you meditated with drugs your peeps in the hospital......... givin me kisses and hugs Umm yeah, I'm sure your havin fun while you stuck strung out, layin on your belly with your butt out its that happy shitt you need to cut out, this cats bugged out fiLLeR felt ya wrist yea he gone,this ni99az lifeless indeed hes in the state of mind where he won the fight in his dreams pLaYed call it a wrap, cause with this rap, you down for the count 1--5--8 fuk it hes down for this round, fukin wit monsoon youll get slapped wit the crown rewind: this is what finished this m.c, lets back up to the first round Umm yeah, the crown... They say every punch I give it will come back to me how is that, when im hotter then 2 gay dudes in a sausage factory Now thats jus homo... Mostly filler, flow was alright... but no punch to be seen V/J Roc;it's sad... full of pLaYed lines, yet still wins, how?Cause Monsoon didn't take the opportunity handed & dropped some wack shit. Follow my links, I wasted time on your verses, now waste some time on mine. |
uppin this for some more votes
come on yall lets get some votes so this can be over wit |
J Roc because he had harder hittin punches wtf , Monsoon had less personals
return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043 |
mon good ender and flow but thats it really.no personals for either of you.j good flow also but you won because you had super hard punches that i was feeling and monsoons punches were too weak to stand up to you
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dang this battle still goin to come on yall lets get some votes
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this 1 still goin to shit, uppin it neways
holla wit some votes |
id have ta say jroc won dis his flow was nice as shyt n his rhymes were tight
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J Roc won this piece hea...punches were harder, tha flow was 'ok', and tha structure was a pretty decent...
MONSOON yo shit was ok...tha punches could've been a little harder and you would've gottin' my vote..and tha flow was pretty decent too... |
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