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delinquint vs. blackdragon
1:00-2:00
due tuesday holla |
www.soundclick.com/nobeakadelinquint This is gonna be a fast battle, get rattled and ripped with enough power that you cant fathom the shit black dragon, a fat-faggot wit no brain you can tell cause he excepted a battle wit me, hahah insane demolish ya insides, divide ya intestines you can call me mr. faukner, cause ill teach ya a lesson not to mess wit me, like a pussy wit aids after this diss, kiss the dirt you'll be crying-for-days whinning-wit-pain, going out the kobe brant-way strangle-ya-throat, damn you suck i heard-a-ya-joke even if ya engraved ya wrimes wit a nine, couldnt be murder-ya-wrote futher-i-soke, you in ya own blood, man and your ass couldnt blow up if you was afghanistan to let you smoke, ill let you borrow-the-dutch black dragon like will farell in starsky-and-hutch bottom-line, i wont bother-wit-rhymes, doddle-in-crimes i commit against you, biter needs to bottle whats mine punk ass ill leave you wet up like fuckin p vizor and under the dirt, like fertalizer kuniver, otherwise known as the poisonous needle bitch ya raps belong in the trash like homeless people i own this mic, and i rap to destroy better run for cover or develop a decoy dont mess around, and definitly dont push-me cause you cant fuck wit me like a gurl witout a pussy |
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ight yall we uppin votes on this battle
come on yall |
Come on yall vote please.....................................
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black Dragon I thought you were studderin in some of ya parts and were talkin bout guns to much. Delinquit had a few multies and some good punches. So my vote goes to ......
Vote=Delinquent |
aiite then thanx fo da input.....uppin dis peice..
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yo we uppin
uppin on these votes yall holla wit em |
yea ya'll VOTE uppin.....................................
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ok black dragon dog lemme give u some advice man...
you got potential iight... u remind me of me a few weeks ago but u got to get a better beat. i kno dat was a dre one but it was more of a freestyling beat. you need to turn yo voice down. your voice is a bit one turn and u sound like u arent pumped... get pumped dog!!! like nas before he dropped ether then it'll be tight. drop the gun talk and get some funny punches in there and it will be tight, good job pm me in you need any more help delinqent - why post the fuckin lyrics? yo shit was clear anyway, nice multis u need a bit more emotion nice voice overs and effects n shit but yo punches and delivery won this for u vote deliquent |
hit this up yo......http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=135436
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aiite i return da fam and we gotta do our battle it's due today thanx fo da advice...........
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Both were clear. Quality wasnt bad on either side.
Black's flow was boring. Punches were ok. delivery was what killed you. and you say the same thing after each battle. don't. Delinquint rode the beat better an had better flo. I think Dragons punches were better but not in the audio because Quint had better delivery and feelin behind his. No Hate Vote/Delinquint. Don't forget Audio tourney Drops due friday. |
strate thanx fo da feedback 'preciate it so i guess i lost this one..........
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Yo this is tha breakdown.......Black Dragon u have a better voice for rappin than Delinquint.....you sound better on tha mic....but you didn't in this particular case cuz you sounded dead on tha mic....nigga make me believe what you are sayin.....say it like you mean it.......and delinquint yo verse was iight......tha outro was gay as fuck tho....lmfao....don't do that again.....and don't post ya lyrics...that's pansy.....but you had a decent drop.....it was enuff to beat black.... Vote: Delinquent |
yo thanx fo da feedback and advice 'preciated it.........
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uppin more votes on this battle
holla whatchyall think |
lol dawg i think i lost this one......................
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Black Dragon I thought you had a decent flow, but the beat is what killed you I think it almost sounded like you wanted to bust out on the track you know but you hadda keep time....you need ta find a beat that is more ya flava.
Del you had a nice beat that worked well for your flow. you delivered well on the mic and I was really feelin ya flow. remind me of N2Deep kinda. You had some nice punches and did a good job with your voiceovers and track editing. nicely done. A pleasure to hear both audios I'd like to hear Black Dragon on a bit faster of a beat, maybe a Wu beat of some sort, I dunno....... Vote: Deliquint |
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