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ghost354vs a bitch name J_Trooper
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lol my fault didnt even see it
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i didnt u check in so heres my check
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Im the best kid, get It in Perspective swing on u till i knock out ya best Senses send 3..' 5.. ' 4.. bullets thru ya Chest that'll put you in Texas's Rememberance Ya Sufficiency would never Compete wit me these "3" pistols? Ya Fool Mix and Flip.. ya insides into "Skittles" bulletz hit you taller than Ja-Rule Look Ghost... lettin them "three five fo" bitches Justify and Critique ya Approach i see now u Sensitive i notice'd ya Ignorance like Advil i stay down ya bitch Throat Im the best discovery since Penicilin sent to fix the "Sick-Less" Come Dare Me Im Established.. you not Lavish.. Ghost catch more back shots than Halle Berry Rb's Most.. Deadlist... Possession... Equipped with Lyrical Def Defying Pedigrees Im Biligerant with a 7th Sense im usein u by lettin off my seeds on ya Baby Seat |
i wont need a master splinta to send out some shells...
how u exspect to flow when u was offbeat doin karaoke to jingle bells dis dude stay online for like 3DAYS STRAIGHT... bags under his eyes..in socks and sweats talking bout “EBAY’S GREAT”(LMAO) now i'm postin J Troop on milk cartonz like vitamin D... you like Tysons trainer you just warm-up the Mic for me realisticly i see ya verse an think u must be stoned like Jesus... an ya gunz nobdy ever seen'em blow like breezes u still a fetus you only get balls over the net an not when u play tennis... i'll bl0w his brains in his hands and say HOLD DAT thought u diminished |
uppin 4 this shit lol this ni99a stinks let the people talk
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nigga look at your lines they like kevin garnets sneaks they so stretched out with a bunch of words that dont even belong together
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Yo Ghost Had A Harder Verse That Line-you Must Be Stoned Like Jesus/noone Ever Seen Ya Gunz Blow Like Breezes You Just A Fetus That Was Hard And He Had A Few More I Was Feeling J Was Alright But After I Read His Verse I Forgot About It Cuz Wasnt No Bars Really Eye Catching But He Was Alright.i Gotta Go With Ghost.
I Always Vote Fair So No Hard Feelings Vote Fairly On My Shit Only Hos Hold Grudges |
Alright, Ghost, you need to work on your game on vocab...and, everything.
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That could have been a sick rhyme, but you fucked it up. You're best line was this: Quote:
Work on more like that. J_Trooper, nice. Wordplay was awesome, vocab was like that of a muse, I was feeling it. Best line to me: Quote:
I felt some lines were a tad confusing and too lengthy with vocab, but better more than none. Don't know what caliph is smoking, but vote J_Trooper. |
damn i knew something was wrong when this nigga started dring but now i see hes a white boy.j trooper stop intimadating these white boys with that pic you got up now i see why you un defeated :nono:
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thats why he cant poll i knew he would send pussys to vote for him
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J Trooper
aight first off let me say this...No fucking contest...Troop took this hands down...He had better flow, multies, punches, tha whole 9...Ghost ures was aight though...you could have came harder wit everything...u was mostly jus talkn out ya ass...my opinion...but troop took this battle hands down...it was just overall better...
Vote/ J Trooper |
uppin for votes poll this shit so this bitch can get whats due cuz i told ya this ni99a sucks
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troop stop scaring all the white boys and making them vote for you thats fucked up nigga.lol
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uppin lol
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lol~vote goes to j troop hands down for better punches better flow better structure~~he had da personals wit cha name and shit...
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Im the best kid, get It in Perspective swing on u till i knock out ya best Senses
send 3..' 5.. ' 4.. bullets thru ya Chest that'll put you in Texas's Rememberance ~i liked this......had a personal here wit da 354... Ya Sufficiency would never Compete wit me these "3" pistols? Ya Fool Mix and Flip.. ya insides into "Skittles" bulletz hit you taller than Ja-Rule ~didnt really understand da last part of da 2nd line~~i know wha u was sayin but it could have been worded deffierent. Look Ghost... lettin them "three five fo" bitches Justify and Critique ya Approach i see now u Sensitive i notice'd ya Ignorance like Advil i stay down ya bitch Throat ~think this is funny...had me laughin...nice punch addin his bitch in it.. Im the best discovery since Penicilin sent to fix the "Sick-Less" Come Dare Me Im Established.. you not Lavish.. Ghost catch more back shots than Halle Berry ~lol...good even tho halle berry and ghost should not b n da same sentence Rb's Most.. Deadlist... Possession... Equipped with Lyrical Def Defying Pedigrees Im Biligerant with a 7th Sense im usein u by lettin off my seeds on ya Baby Seat ~i think dis is the nicest line in your verse..complex..vocab..and still had they sylabels matchin... NOW THE OTHER GUY i wont need a master splinta to send out some shells... how u exspect to flow when u was offbeat doin karaoke to jingle bells ~dont know what jingle bells has to do with a rap battle..but had good lenths dis dude stay online for like 3DAYS STRAIGHT... bags under his eyes..in socks and sweats talking bout “EBAY’S GREAT”(LMAO) ~could have came a lil harder but it was a nice line now i'm postin J Troop on milk cartonz like vitamin D... you like Tysons trainer you just warm-up the Mic for me realisticly ~funny line..nice punch..wit da milk carton and everything i see ya verse an think u must be stoned like Jesus... an ya gunz nobdy ever seen'em blow like breezes u still a fetus ~wordplay wit da "stoned" you only get balls over the net an not when u play tennis... i'll bl0w his brains in his hands and say HOLD DAT thought u diminished ~didnt really feel this line..could have came harder overall vote...J Trooper |
Uppin this shit so i can get this bitch off tha charts |
J trooper: man you realy have a good verse, punches were better, wordplay and the personals were better j trooper has an overall better verse
Ghost: naw some lines were good, but the punches were kinda weak,ok personals butr not good enough V goes to Ktrooper for an overall better verse please J Trooper and Ghost retrun the favore by voting in my battles i only need one more vote on this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137238 kintaro vs me please vote |
J_Trooper
structure was ok...ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little due to the stretchnes...u had tight multis...wordplay was also tight...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... Ghost354 structure is alright...u werent very consistent with ur line lengths though...flow fell off a little due to the lack of consistency...u had some multis...wordplay was decent...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall both had an ok structure...both flows' fell off a little...neither had any punches connecting...neither had good personals...J_Trooper had more, and better multis..as well as better wordplay...so basing off of that...J_Trooper gets my vote.. VOTE - J_TROOPER PLEAE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx... |
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vote on da prodigy vs troubledinocense an i'll return the favor
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troop took dis simply cuz his rhymes hit harder beta punches even tho ghost had some iight metas.
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im given this 2 j-troop cuz of the better punches
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