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Heavyweight Championship- Apotheosis(3-0) vs. Polifick(2-0-1) vs. Spul(2-0-1)
Fuck off yes i know you guys had a weird battle, i decided it was i tie...don't bitch in here...do it in the beef thread...p.s. goodluck and fuck off...
deadlines: battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 20line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!! |
U did a good descion with this JPoll. & Polifick put ur picture back up so I can diss it :)
good luck 2 both http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1449079 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1448928 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1447627 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1443213 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1444658 |
Check check Its Still Up Apo... ....Voted.... 1.http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137691 2.http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137666 3.http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137667 4.http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137679 5.http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137689 6.http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137688 |
im just lettin u guys know...i contacted JPoll & its now 32 lines max from each. Did I get u guys excited then coz u thought I had posted ;).
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So 20 Lines apiece On Both Opponents...
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nah, lines are 32 max. So you can do 16 each or whatever you want.
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*Looks at Apothesis' name, and decides to diss that fag first*
You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion :shocked: Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact :nono: We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself :laugh: You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis *After finishin' off the fag, he moves onto Polifick* I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries :shocked: If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!! *Decides to wrap this shit up* Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy :shocked: Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide *drops mic and leaves stage*
*Poetry In Slow Motion= Apo's old usertitle *Genocide=destruction of whole race or somethin' like that |
Polifick
 Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread, Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head. Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit, & kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip. Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving, It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in. Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine, Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline. Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame, The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame. As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp, But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp. & your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny, coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney. Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this, Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB………….. …………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’ Spul...  Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage, & you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage. Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say, Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way. Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about? & I don’t mean u & polis games………………………………… ..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth. Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse, Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388 ^April http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg ^June Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date, So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate. I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging SPuL would suit the swat team………………………………….. ………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging. That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it, What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it. This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red, you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….…………………. ………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head. I dont care if I lose but PLEASE read the punches & check the appropriate links. Good luck to both |
ApoTheSis
Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary...
Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ... Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight... Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape... Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly.... Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly.. Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks... Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks... Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight... Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight...... Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"... Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords... Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board.. Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par... Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star...  Spul-S/n Mo2Va8ted4life
Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated... Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted... If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin..... D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing.... Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone.. You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome.. Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You... Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You.... Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy.. Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey.. Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac.. Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets) Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting.. Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion.. Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately.. Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe... |
Spul You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion LOL this shit was funny Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you nice.... This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact decent We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated lol decent But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay OO...lol ok So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want I though you said you didnt have any?..lol decent But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden LOL...1st line ok 2nd nice We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks ummm....kinda gay Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself lol wtf at that pic....decent You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis alright *After finishin' off the fag, he moves onto Polifick* I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries this was hot...good personal If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could umm not feelin it Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick lol ok Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!! 1st line is Gay but a setup..ok *Decides to wrap this shit up* Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy ha ha....good Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide stretched but decent good drop had a lot of persoals..some of your punches could've been better overall:7.5/10 Apotheosis Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread, Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head. LMFAO..Dope shit Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit, & kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip. Lol nice Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving, It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in. This was good Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine, Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline. decent Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame, The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame. Alright this was decent As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp, But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp. decent & your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny, coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney. LOL…. Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this, Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB………….. …………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’ Decent right here Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage, & you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage. LMAO…Personal right here nice Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say, Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way. Ha ha…good Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about? & I don’t mean u & polis games………………………………… ..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth. Lol..decent Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse, Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388 ^April http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg ^June LOL damn..personal Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date, So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate. Nah not feelin this one I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging SPuL would suit the swat team………………………………….. ………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging. Lol nice wordplay That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it, What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it. Lol decent This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red, you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….…………………. ………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head. Lmao…..Lmao…nice Nice witty verse solid punches nice personals tight verse….I was laughing All throughout.. Overall:8.5 Polifick Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary... Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ... Lol nice Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight... Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape... Lol…good Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly.... Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly.. Lol good Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks... Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks... Nice personal Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight... Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight...... Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"... These were decent could have been better Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords... Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board.. alright Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par... Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star... Decent but stretched Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated... Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted... LMAO…Personal some people might not get it…Damn.nice If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin..... D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing.... Decent metas nice punch Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone.. You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome.. Lol decent bar Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You... Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You.... Hmm…could of done better nice concept though Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy.. Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey.. Lol nice personal… Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac.. Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets) Nice multis good bar… Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting.. Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion.. Decent strechted Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately.. Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe... Ha ha ha nice personal…. Good drop some lines were stretched but decent others were like damn..lol Overall:7.6 Good battle…props to all v/Apotheosis |
SPuL:
You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion ^^Decent Opener Good Punch 7/10 Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you ^^ LOL Good Personal Was Feeling This 8/10 This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact ^^Decent punch good personal good w/p + Multies 8/10 We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated ^^LoL Another Good Personal Hot Shyt 8/10 But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay ^^Personals Keep Coming 8/10 So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want ^^Hott but dont admit you got d/r's lol 7/10 But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden ^^Good meta decent punch 6/10 We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks ^^wow that was gay 3/10 Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself ^^decent 5/10 You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis ^^ehh ok 6/10 *After finishin' off the fag, he moves onto Polifick* I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries ^^your hottest bar 10/10 If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could ^^kinda basic 5/10 Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick ^^ehh decent 5/10 Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!! ^^played concept 5/10 Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy ^^LoL Hott Shyt I Was Feeling This 9/10 Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide ^^Decent Punch But Its Stretched 6/10 Overall : 106/160 Apotheosis: Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread, Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head. ^^LMAO Hot Shyt 9/10 Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit, & kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip. ^^Fire 9/10 Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving, It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in. ^^decnet stretched 6/10 Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine, Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline. ^^LoL Hot 7/10 Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame, The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame. ^^decent 7/10 As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp, But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp. ^^LOL good personal decent punch 7/10 & your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny, coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney. ^^ehh OK 5/10 Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this, Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB………….. …………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’ ^^hot finisher good punch 8/10 Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage, & you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage. ^^lol good personal 8/10 Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say, Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way. ^^Ehh decent 7/10 Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about? & I don’t mean u & polis games………………………………… ..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth. ^^LMAO Nice 7/10 Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse, Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt. ^^good personal wasnt feelin it tho 6/10 Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date, So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate. ^^Decent meta not feelin it 3/10 I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging SPuL would suit the swat team………………………………….. ………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging. ^^nice meta not feelin this either 4/10 That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it, What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it. ^^decent punch 5/10 This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red, you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….…………………. ………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head. ^^lol good personal 7/10 overall : 105/160 Polifick: Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary... Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ... ^^good multies decent punches 7/10 Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight... Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape... ^^good meta decent punch 6/10 Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly.... Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly.. ^^good meta's personal and punch 8/10 Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks... Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks... ^^lol another good meta nice punch 7/10 Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight... Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight...... Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"... ^^weak And forced 3/10 Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords... Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board.. ^^bad use of multies destroyed this bar 2/10 Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par... Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star... ^^lines are too long 3/10 Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated... Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted... ^^DAMM Pure Fire 10/10 If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin..... D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing.... ^^lol decent punch and metas 6/10 Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone.. You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome.. ^^1st line played 2nd line hott meta decent punch 6/10 Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You... Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You.... ^^stop using multies you havent mastered the use of em yetr 4/10 Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy.. Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey.. ^^good personal but damn stop with the multies 4/10 Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac.. Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets) ^^that was good ude of multies hott bar 8/10 Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting.. Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion.. ^^ehh decent 6/10 Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately.. Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe... ^^good closer hot personal 9/10 overall : 89/150 vote: SPuL...He Came Harder Than Bot Apo And Polifick...Apo Almost Had This Battle A Couple Harder Punches And You Would Have Won ~!1!~ |
SPuL:
You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion ^^ Good Punch 7/10 Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you ^^ Good Personal 8/10 This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact ^^good person wordplay and punch wit a multi 8/10 We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated ^^LoL Another Good Personal 8/10 But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay ^^good personal 8/10 So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want ^^good but you say you got d/rs 7/10 But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden ^^Good meta 6/10 We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks ^^bad line 2/10 Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself ^^decent 5/10 You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis ^^ok 6/10 *After finishin' off the fag, he moves onto Polifick* I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries ^^your best bar 9/10 If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could ^^kinda basic 5/10 Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick ^^decent 5/10 Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!! ^^played concept 5/10 Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy ^^HOTT 9/10 Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide ^^Decent Punch But Its Stretched 6/10 Overall : 105/160 Apotheosis: Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread, Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head. ^^Hot Shyt 8/10 Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit, & kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip. ^^nice 8/10 Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving, It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in. ^^ stretched 5/10 Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine, Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline. ^^ Hot 7/10 Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame, The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame. ^^decent 7/10 As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp, But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp. ^^ good personal decent punch 7/10 & your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny, coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney. ^^ OK 5/10 Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this, Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB………….. …………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’ ^^good punch 7/10 Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage, & you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage. ^^ good personal 8/10 Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say, Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way. ^^ decent 7/10 Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about? & I don’t mean u & polis games………………………………… ..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth. ^^ Nice 7/10 Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse, Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt. ^^good personal 6/10 Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date, So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate. ^^ not feelin it 3/10 I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging SPuL would suit the swat team………………………………….. ………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging. ^^not feelin this either 3/10 That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it, What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it. ^^decent 5/10 This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red, you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….…………………. ………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head. ^^good personal 7/10 overall : 100/160 Polifick: Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary... Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ... ^^good multies decent punches 7/10 Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight... Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape... ^^good meta decent punch 6/10 Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly.... Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly.. ^^good meta's personal and punch 8/10 Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks... Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks... ^^lol another good meta nice punch 7/10 Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight... Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight...... Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"... ^^weak And forced 4/10 Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords... Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board.. ^^bad use of multies destroyed this bar 3/10 Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par... Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star... ^^lines are too long 4/10 Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated... Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted... ^^DAMM Pure Fire 10/10 If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin..... D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing.... ^^lol decent punch and metas 7/10 Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone.. You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome.. ^^1st line played 2nd line hott meta decent punch 7/10 Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You... Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You.... ^^stop using multies you havent mastered the use of em yetr 5/10 Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy.. Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey.. ^^good personal but damn stop with the multies 5/10 Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac.. Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets) ^^that was good ude of multies hott bar 9/10 Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting.. Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion.. ^^ehh decent 7/10 Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately.. Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe... ^^good closer hot personal 10/10 overall : 100/150 v/polifick cause he got 100/150 and that is 10 better then apo and 5 better then spul |
^yea, Flash, you gave me 105. How come you voted for Polifick? :huh:
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Apo: 1 Spul:1 Polifick:1 Come on this is for the Champ..... Votes |
yo, but who is Flash's vote too? he voted for Polifick, yet he gave me more points?
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^^ 105/160 Mines was 100/150 So I Got it By 5 Points....
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oh, my bad. I thought they were all out of 160. Uppin' this. 1-1-1
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yo fo real , i got spul , cuz personally like his lines betta , spul got madd flows yall... HOLLA
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Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in. ^^ stretched 5/10 Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving, It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in. ^^decnet stretched 6/10 ^ it flowed perfectly. Just because the txt isnt even doesnt mean shit. Anyways...decent battle |
spul i gave it to poli becuase 100/150 is better then 105/160
so that is why i gave it to him |
sorry i stopped reading the battle after i saw a "cum line"
i was highly disappointed i will be back later to break this thing down *shakes head* |
^haha
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Good Explained Vote
SPul verses
Diss to APotheosis: Nice drop, Nice lines. Your punches were very good and so are your personals, most of your punches and personals are good and some were really funny. your punches hit hard and so did your personals. I loved your starting and closings for your verse to Apo'. No multis. Structure was good liked it. Flow was very good. I thought some verses could have been better Re-Wording, only 2 lines though... had little flaws in some parts of the lines. your verse was also good and complex, which makes it more hard hitting and gives you a better chance of winning, you had some good metaphors. Personals: 8/10 Punches:8.5/10 Structure: 7.2/10 Flow: 7.5/10 Opener: 7.0/10 Closer: 9.6/10 OVerall: 7.9 Verse to polifick Not as good as you verse to Apo' but i found this rather funny. NIce strong punches. It was good. Your personals umm yea it was ok but you kept talking about how ugly he is. No Multis. they don't even count. Structure again very good stucture there. even your flow is good nice job. you really need some re-wording on this verse... but it was good. Best lines was the first 2 lines Personals: 6.7/10 Punches: 7.9/10 Structure: 8/10 Flow: 8/10 Opener: 8.9/10 Closer: 7/10 Overall: 7.75/10 Closing lines: rating: 8/10 OVerall verses put together: 7.8/10 ------------------------------------------------------------------ Apothoesis: verse to Polifick Nice verse, good drop. your punches were good here and your personals were awesome. All heard hitting puches and personals. your verse was funny as well... your links that you posted up there were all funny and good. Flow is good, and so is your structure. nice drop best lines last 2 lines Personals: 8.1/10 Punches: 7.6/10 Structure: 7.5/10 Flow: 7.5/10 Opener: 7.1/10 Closer: 7.1/10 Overall: 7.4/10 Verse to SPuL Better drop tha your last, i liked this better than your diss to Polifick. Nice punchess here still... i also like your personals, very nice and dope. Structure was very good and flow was great. favorite line is the first 2 lines. nice punch. Personals: 8.2/10 Punches: 7.4/10 Structure: 8/10 Flow: 7.7/10 Opener: 8.1/10 Closer: 7.5/10 Overall: 7.8/10 OVerall verse combined: 7.6/10 -------------------------------------------------------------------- Polifick lines: Verse to Apo' Nice drop nice lines... nice wordplay you have there good vocab... your punches are OK i'd say mid-heavy hitting... you personals where good though flow was good nice job... structutre nice job too... your opener was very good nice punch and closing was good but i didn't like it much... Personals: 7.4/10 Punches: 8.3/10 Structure: 8/10 Flow: 7.3/10 Opener: 8.1/10 Closer: 7.1/10 Overall: 7.7/10 Verse to SPuL I loved your verse... nice Dope drop and your lines are good... Nice wordplay and vocab.. nice punches all hitter and very cool personals... your structure was very good here i liked it... your flow was good here too. opening was very good and closing was good to favorite lines is the last 2 lines=DOPE Personals: 7.7/10 Punches: 8.7/10 Structure: 8/10 Flow: 7.2/10 Opener: 7.5/10 Closer: 8/10 Overall: 7.85/10 Overall verse combined: 7.77/10 ----------------------------------------------------------------- TO all: ALL verse you guys made was DOPE AS FUCK 1st: SPuL 2nd: Polifick 3rd: Apotheosis this is a close battle so i have to pick SPuL for a better verse Vote/SPuL |
thanks for votin'. 2-1-1 me. Uppin' this dope battle.
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^slow down all the dope battle talk man...i cant believe what i saw in this battle
lets start with U Mr "cum line".. You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion never ever, under any circumstances is it ok for anyone to use a cum line..i cant believe people are sayin this was dope.. i honestly stop reading your verse after reading that.. i was completely dissapointed...i thought this was a heavyweight championship match and u use a cum line, i am sorry dude but that is completely unacceptable..as far as i am concerned u lost the battle right there...please dont argue with me.. thats how i feel.. Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you weak...didnt do it for me, might be personal, but it was still weak This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact wtf...u are diggin yourself n a deeper ditch..that wasnt good man We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated another forced personal with horrible wording...blah again But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay forcin personals make the verse look bad...didnt like this either So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want wording was off here too, and punch didnt land But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden weak. nuff said We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks lmao..this really sucked, this is a heavyweight match, throw a punch for please Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself how is this a diss, really...its doesnt seem like a punch to me You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis C'mon man, thats not a diss...just forcing a words that rhyme nothing in this portion of your verse gave me the impression you should be in a heavy weight title match moving on.. can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries ok..this was a little better, coulda been worded different but i will atleast give u credit for attempting to throw a punch here If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could sucked..wording was horrible...read your setup again, its so forced its not even funny Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick stop with the D/R lines, they are almost as played as the cum line, pretty much downhill from here Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!! ok...the setup sucked, i see what you tried to do but failed...dont do this ever again.. by the way the little comments between your verses was very cute, it was the best part of your battle.. *Decides to wrap this shit up* Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy i stopped reading after the word "cushy", your word selection is horrible... Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide played... i used this concept in like May ....... 2003 and your flow was fucked up cus your lines were too stretched.. ok Spul, before this battle i had never read any of your shit i expected for you to be among the elite..whereas so far you wouldnt make it 5 min amongst the elite at original RB... u gotta a lot of work to do man... but before u bitch about how i dont get none of your lines.. read them again and please read the comments a left... i have nothing against you, i just expected more.. but we'll see what the other guys dropped and move on from there.. |
Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head. not bad, but nothing special either.. as far as i am concerned you have already beat Spul...unless you go on a completely wack vengence Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit, & kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip. no...doesnt really make sense, read it again.. didnt like this at all Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving, It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in. ok... this was a little better, still nothing special Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine, Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline. decent personal, better punch here Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame, The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame. nope, too elementary..didnt like..it was played too As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp, But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp. nope...to simple..need a more complicated rhyme scheme too elememtary....my nephew can rhyme these words.. & your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny, coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney. no..seemed forced..didnt like this either you are going downhill Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this, Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB………….. …………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’ not that bad...decent concept...it wasnt dope but it was better than most of your other lines moving on Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage, & you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage. this was the best punch of the match so far...thankyou for throwin a punch that actually landed.. Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say, Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way. didnt like the BOOM in the setup..took away from your verse..the punch wasnt bad though... Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about? & I don’t mean u & polis games………………………………… ..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth. i really didnt get this one, might be some kinda personal so i wont comment on this one Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse, Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt. no..forcin your persoanls...and by the way..links in your verse is played as hell..they are not necessary, if you need a link to use a personal, don t use them..i never click links they take too much time...i wanna read the dam battle and be done with it http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388 ^April http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg ^June Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date, So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate. this was aight i guess, nothing special..i did get the punche though i still didnt think it was that dope I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging SPuL would suit the swat team………………………………….. ………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging. no...didnt like the concept, never heard of flash bangin either loss me there bro That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it, What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it. not a punch here, you are just statin the obvious not really dissin him to me iunno. maybe i missed it again This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red, you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….…………………. ………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head. i saw this coming, the only thing worse than a played punch is a predictable one...not a good closer i have to say after reading your verse, you did have a few sparks followed by some horrible lines... it was about ten times better than Spul's verse because u actually connected on a few of your punches.. nothing great though..keep droppin verses...dude, you'll get there one more to go .. |
like it or love it
honestly no diss but all three of yall didnt not come hard like yall do in one on one battlles
spul... good shit son you wanted this i could tell.... structure and wordplay A+ vocab and flow A+ punches and metas A intensity and personals A overall A like i said good shit,you was hungry apoth.. diissapointed me the most...you know you didnt bring fire just heat structure and wordplay A+ vocab and flow A punches and metas B+ personals and intensity C overall B you wasnt hungry lack of intensity brought it down polifick... good shit very impressive structure and wordplay A+ vocab and flow A+ punches and metas A- personals and intensity A overall A- good shit ,you came a milimeter bettah than spul, vote for Polifick Please dont tell me you call THIS a breakdown..i will ask jpoll if it stands -Superior |
^^^wtf
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Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary...
Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ... no this was horrific...doesnt make sense..sorry Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight... Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape... hmm...i will give you an ounce of credit here even the concept is played as hell.. in other words it wasnt complete trash Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly.... Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly.. u lost points for sayn "Worster" that is not a word if you find that word in the dictionary please show me.. even if you meant Worser..guess what thats not a word either i stopped at the made up word by the way..so i have no idea what the punch was, cus it really doesnt matter Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks... Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks... no..nuff said, i just didnt like it Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight... Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight...... Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"... first of all i dnt like the three line rhyme scheme.. some people can do it but you cant... sorry Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords... Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board.. nope..lines were too stretched..didnt like the punch anyway Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par... Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star wtf was that, that was a sad closer man,jsut sad too stretched.. Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated... Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted... wordplay attempt failed If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin..... D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing.... nope...not much here either Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone.. You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome.. nope...i am gettin tired of this Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You... Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You.... thats was bad man...not feelin this one either Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy.. Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey.. forced wordplay....didnt like this either Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac.. Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets) nope...what is going on..this is a championship match remember Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting.. Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion.. Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately.. Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe... lets wrap this up.. sorry man , i wasnt feelin your verse too much either your lines were stretched, too many links...thats -played and the punched just didnt do it for me ok all in all this was not a good battle... Spul spoiled it for everybody with the cum line and the rest of his verse didnt make up for it.. Apo..was a little better which is why he gets my vote.. Poli wasnt good either now go ahead, bitch and complain about my vote and my comments but thats the only way you are going to get better, by reading criticism... anyway i will stop here.... V/Apothesis |
2-2-2
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v) Apotheosis
he actually didn't come mad played like all the rest.. Spul - played Pol - played |
3-2-2 yeh?
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^that can't possibly count as a vote. If it did than that lawless vote for me would count. Also, Boston Lyrcist's vote goes to me. Cuz he gave me and A overall, and Polifick an A-.
So I think it's 3-2-1. But I don't kno. |
A- Is Better Than A
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nah, it goes A-, A, A+ <from lowest to highest
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Spul
You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion Decent Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you Funny.... This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact ok... We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated aight..But... But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay funny..... So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want Good But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden Decent We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks Not that Good... Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself lol ..Shit funny You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis decent closer *After finishin' off the fag, he moves onto Polifick* I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries hot...good personal If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could Not Feeling It...Either Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick Not really feeling either But decent Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!! Decent Closiner *Decides to wrap this shit up* Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy LOL Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide umm GOod COmplexity.... Decent Drop and Pretty hott overall:8.5/10 Apotheosis Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread, Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head. Lol Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit, & kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip. Decent Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving, It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in. alright..... Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine, Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline. decent Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame, The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame. haha As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp, But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp. decent & your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny, coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney. Good Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this, Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB………….. …………………….THEN WE ARE ANARCHITISTS's Coo...... Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage, & you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage. ok personal Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say, Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way. Ha ha Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about? & I don’t mean u & polis games………………………………… ..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth. decent Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse, Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388 ^April http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg ^June alright Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date, So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate. Umm No I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging SPuL would suit the swat team………………………………….. ………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging. haha That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it, What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it. Lol decent This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red, you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….…………………. ………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head. coo Pretty Good... Overall:7.5 Polifick Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary... Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ... Umm.. Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight... Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape... Dope.... Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly.... Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly.. Not feeling Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks... Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks... Nice.. Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight... Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight...... Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"... Decent Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords... Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board.. Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par... Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star... Decent Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated... Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted... Nice good Wordplay and COmplex..... If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin..... D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing.... Decent Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone.. You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome.. ummm not feeling Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You... Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You.... could of done better Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy.. Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey.. hahaha Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac.. Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets) Nice Complex...Hard punch haha Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting.. Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion.. Decent Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately.. Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe... coo... Decent Drop Overall=7/10 Close battle but v/Spul Took it |
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spul-3 po-1 apo-2 a couple of the votes didn't count...only the well explained votes counted...not bl's...willys...etc |
damn what yall want a novel and shit....what we need is an outline for voting that way all votes count and people cant bitch about nothin,d qin votes makes this whole match bullshit,cause that gives someone an advantage
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what we want is a fucking break down of the fuckin verses...you should know this...idiot...this is the fucking championship for fuck sakes...
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