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Spotlight match- Shadow(2-0) vs. Vango(2-1)
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 20line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!! |
checkity chckness..good luck vango...
vote... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1443306 |
check. good luck.............................................. .........................................
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is that nigga even Vango lol
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ahhahahahaha lol ur right
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check, cats trying to impersonate me now. ha ha.
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your rhythmatically repugnant and ur flow is off track.... just like ya crew it must be a fam thing blueprint is also wack.... just how DML merked u il give u a blast from the past.... and revoke only gassed you up so u think u got a chance... quit rappin...take a hint even jesus tryin to give you a sign... yes they predicted you but your skill dont match half of mine... raps not ur thing..just like O'J's glove son...it just dont fit... but you are an artist...... known for creating complete shit.... you winning? wouldnt happen try 2 wish uppon a shootin star.... post ur verse in a golf course and it still couldnt be up to par... i dont have to punch hard son you couldnt take the blunt of it... ur an easy win.. and im doing it just for the " pun" of it.... ill beat you like a hillbilly's spouse..trap and squash u like a mouse... u call people wack..dont throw stones if u live in a glass house..... u fooled me..i thought u were good but u aint. u think thats cold..?.... .......give up now and admit to ur crew how their leader....... .......... got merked by a 14 year old.......... |
Let's get this battle started Shadow and commence with the realness
Even if your computer had a virus you wouldnt have Textual-Illness I heard you were good at topical, wake up Shadow this is a battle You couldn't even come original your like Shadows Edge's Shadow This site needs to stop gassing you kid cuz you need no encouragement Don't worry about anyone feeding your lyrics dont provide any nourishment I've merked half your roster kid and yes that includes your Leader Sent Limited Edition home crying and Revoked membersip from the cheater The other half of your roster well they tried to get in my crew Simply put we don't take rejects thats why your not wearing BLUE Two leaders in your crew do you even really know whose in charge This battles like your alias, Shadow you've been officially "Discharged" Lots of personals in this battle so if you don't get them don't vote. And just so you know Shadow used to be Discharge. |
fyi i just edited the text size.
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Vango got this clearly......
Let's get this battle started Shadow and commence with the realness Even if your computer had a virus you wouldnt have Textual-Illness I heard you were good at topical, wake up Shadow this is a battle You couldn't even come original your like Shadows Edge's Shadow ^nice & personal...also funny stuff aswell with the shadow line. Shad had a decent par line but the rest didnt stand out. Vote VanGo...good verse man. |
Shadow
your rhythmatically repugnant and ur flow is off track.... just like ya crew it must be a fam thing blueprint is also wack.... ok just how DML merked u il give u a blast from the past.... and revoke only gassed you up so u think u got a chance... lool alright quit rappin...take a hint even jesus tryin to give you a sign... yes they predicted you but your skill dont match half of mine... this was alright raps not ur thing..just like O'J's glove son...it just dont fit... but you are an artist...... known for creating complete shit.... lmao you winning? wouldnt happen try 2 wish uppon a shootin star.... post ur verse in a golf course and it still couldnt be up to par... nice wordplay here i dont have to punch hard son you couldnt take the blunt of it... ur an easy win.. and im doing it just for the " pun" of it.... lol cool I'll beat you like a hillbilly's spouse..trap and squash u like a mouse... u call people wack..dont throw stones if u live in a glass house..... Ok... u fooled me..i thought u were good but u aint. u think thats cold..?.... .......give up now and admit to ur crew how their leader....... got beat by a 14 year old pretty good closer alright this was a decent verse i expected you to come harder but overall good drop you had some good punches and a few i didnt like Vango Let's get this battle started Shadow and commence with the realness Even if your computer had a virus you wouldnt have Textual-Illness lol alright I heard you were good at topical, wake up Shadow this is a battle You couldn't even come original your like Shadows Edge's Shadow LOL yeah personal This site needs to stop gassing you kid cuz you need no encouragement Don't worry about anyone feeding your lyrics dont provide any nourishment LOl funny I've merked half your roster kid and yes that includes your Leader Sent Limited Edition home crying and Revoked membersip from the cheater lol damn keep the personals coming The other half of your roster well they tried to get in my crew Simply put we don't take rejects thats why your not wearing BLUE lol ok Two leaders in your crew do you even really know whose in charge This battles like your alias, Shadow you've been officially "Discharged" OO! lol old school research lol nice verse i got to admit you take this with hella personals and nice punches..nice drop v/Vango |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=135411
shadows no good at topical, look at all the d/r and swayed votes. Shadow: your rhythmatically repugnant and ur flow is off track.... just like ya crew it must be a fam thing blueprint is also wack.... just how DML merked u il give u a blast from the past.... and revoke only gassed you up so u think u got a chance... quit rappin...take a hint even jesus tryin to give you a sign... yes they predicted you but your skill dont match half of mine... raps not ur thing..just like O'J's glove son...it just dont fit... but you are an artist...... known for creating complete shit.... you winning? wouldnt happen try 2 wish uppon a shootin star.... post ur verse in a golf course and it still couldnt be up to par... i dont have to punch hard son you couldnt take the blunt of it... ur an easy win.. and im doing it just for the " pun" of it.... ill beat you like a hillbilly's spouse..trap and squash u like a mouse... u call people wack..dont throw stones if u live in a glass house..... u fooled me..i thought u were good but u aint. u think thats cold..?.... .......give up now and admit to ur crew how their leader....... your vocab obviously tells us your a topic head, so why are you doin text? you lack the key componenst of a text battle, lines were streched like topicals, punches were no where to be found, no personals rele. garbage. vango: Let's get this battle started Shadow and commence with the realness Even if your computer had a virus you wouldnt have Textual-Illness I heard you were good at topical, wake up Shadow this is a battle You couldn't even come original your like Shadows Edge's Shadow This site needs to stop gassing you kid cuz you need no encouragement Don't worry about anyone feeding your lyrics dont provide any nourishment I've merked half your roster kid and yes that includes your Leader Sent Limited Edition home crying and Revoked membersip from the cheater The other half of your roster well they tried to get in my crew Simply put we don't take rejects thats why your not wearing BLUE Two leaders in your crew do you even really know whose in charge This battles like your alias, Shadow you've been officially "Discharged" you had nice structure, lines were a lil long...but great personals, no comedy but it was a good verse, you got this one. favorite line: I heard you were good at topical, wake up Shadow this is a battle You couldn't even come original your like Shadows Edge's Shadow let the topical heads stay topical, and let the text pros keep up wut their doin. vote: vango |
Shadow: i thought you would come good in this match, but you did OK. no personals and th punches weren't that good. your vocab is good and yup... you do topical
VAngo: Nice verse, nice drop. Structure was good, nice and good personals, very good punches nice flow and wordplay V/ Vango |
Shadow
your rhythmatically repugnant and ur flow is off track.... just like ya crew it must be a fam thing blueprint is also wack.... 6/10...weak opener just how DML merked u il give u a blast from the past.... and revoke only gassed you up so u think u got a chance... 6.5/10...ok personal quit rappin...take a hint even jesus tryin to give you a sign... yes they predicted you but your skill dont match half of mine... 5/10...no raps not ur thing..just like O'J's glove son...it just dont fit... but you are an artist...... known for creating complete shit.... 6/10...meh you winning? wouldnt happen try 2 wish uppon a shootin star.... post ur verse in a golf course and it still couldnt be up to par... 7/10...good punch i dont have to punch hard son you couldnt take the blunt of it... ur an easy win.. and im doing it just for the " pun" of it.... 6/10...blah! ill beat you like a hillbilly's spouse..trap and squash u like a mouse... u call people wack..dont throw stones if u live in a glass house..... 3/10...no, why bite off 50...especially with that u fooled me..i thought u were good but u aint. u think thats cold..?.... .......give up now and admit to ur crew how their leader....... 7/10....good line, dont worry about the other part gettin deleted overall - 5.8125...go figure...weak verse son..shouldve stepped it up. Vango Let's get this battle started Shadow and commence with the realness Even if your computer had a virus you wouldnt have Textual-Illness 6.5/10...good, but this is gettin played.. I heard you were good at topical, wake up Shadow this is a battle You couldn't even come original your like Shadows Edge's Shadow 7/10...word. This site needs to stop gassing you kid cuz you need no encouragement Don't worry about anyone feeding your lyrics dont provide any nourishment 7/10...dope. I've merked half your roster kid and yes that includes your Leader Sent Limited Edition home crying and Revoked membersip from the cheater 6.5/10...ok personal The other half of your roster well they tried to get in my crew Simply put we don't take rejects thats why your not wearing BLUE 5/10...no Two leaders in your crew do you even really know whose in charge This battles like your alias, Shadow you've been officially "Discharged" 7/10...good closer overall - 6.5...ok drop, had some decent lines...so yea.... v/Vango. |
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how did i have strecthed lines and he have good strcture if my lines were shorter.. and u say i had no personals..but if u werent such a hater u would realize.. DML line was a personal..ur just mad..cuz im merkin you horribly..VA.. but vango nice verse man..i admit you won... |
I think Vango got this quite easily...overall...he won on the flow, the structure (i dont like it when people edit their font size...personals and wordplay...also the discharge line was good research and props to that.
Shadow i was left dissapointed by ur verse to be honest...i expected u to come harder in this but clearly u werent...not a bad verse but not a winning one sorry dawg. V/Vango |
vango takes this........
vango- gud structure n flow throughout, hit with some nice punches n personals liked the shadows edge line, original and funny, thought ur verse was gud... 8/10 shadow- you had a few gud lines but i felt some of ya stuff was abit filler, some lines were attemptin to punch but not really hittin that hard, gud structure n flow but not enough hard punches... 7/10 v/vango peace |
Shadow-You Came Pretty NiCe Your Verse Was Good It Didnt Match Up To Vangos He Really Ripped It....You Had Personals But Failed Punches....Your Deop Had A NiCe Flow
8.7/10 Vango..That Tha Hardest I Seen You Came As The Battles I Looked At..You Had Some Tight Punches And Personals And A NiCe Drop..Just Shorten Yo Lines Unless You Do Multis.... 9/10 Winner-Vango... |
Shadow:
your rhythmatically repugnant and ur flow is off track.... just like ya crew it must be a fam thing blueprint is also wack.... ^^good personal nice opener 7/10 just how DML merked u il give u a blast from the past.... and revoke only gassed you up so u think u got a chance... ^^ehh decent 5/10 quit rappin...take a hint even jesus tryin to give you a sign... yes they predicted you but your skill dont match half of mine... ^^basic 5/10 raps not ur thing..just like O'J's glove son...it just dont fit... but you are an artist...... known for creating complete shit.... ^^good meta decent punch 6/10 you winning? wouldnt happen try 2 wish uppon a shootin star.... post ur verse in a golf course and it still couldnt be up to par... ^^ehh Ok 5/10 i dont have to punch hard son you couldnt take the blunt of it... ur an easy win.. and im doing it just for the " pun" of it.... ^^nice 7/10 ill beat you like a hillbilly's spouse..trap and squash u like a mouse... u call people wack..dont throw stones if u live in a glass house..... ^^too basic 4/10 u fooled me..i thought u were good but u aint. u think thats cold..?.... .......give up now and admit to ur crew how their leader....... got merked by a 14 year old....... ^^closer weak 3/10 overall : 42/80 Vango: Let's get this battle started Shadow and commence with the realness Even if your computer had a virus you wouldnt have Textual-Illness ^^seen something like this before but good personal 7/10 I heard you were good at topical, wake up Shadow this is a battle You couldn't even come original your like Shadows Edge's Shadow ^^lol good shyt 8/10 This site needs to stop gassing you kid cuz you need no encouragement Don't worry about anyone feeding your lyrics dont provide any nourishment ^^decent 6/10 I've merked half your roster kid and yes that includes your Leader Sent Limited Edition home crying and Revoked membersip from the cheater ^^ehh ok 4/10 The other half of your roster well they tried to get in my crew Simply put we don't take rejects thats why your not wearing BLUE ^^weak 4/10 Two leaders in your crew do you even really know whose in charge This battles like your alias, Shadow you've been officially "Discharged" ^^good closer nice personal 8/10 overall : 37/60 vote: Vango He Obviously Came Harder And Put Some Effort Into This Battle Both Of You Need To Work On Harder Punches And Better Personals ~!1!~ |
Vango Wins 9-0
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