Datruth29(1-0) vs. Com (1-0)
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
20line max.
REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!

ch-ch-ch-check

com wins although he checked in late the other dude didnt even hceck in

?? word.. :)

yup^^^

Since He Checked In Late, We Both Should Just Battle.. Check

Vote COM Datruth29 naughty naughty yes you are late..
pz.

this will now become a punchline battle...both do you verses now....!!!!
both checked in late so both best write NOW

they still gotta battle.. both checked in late.. late is late

I'll Pm them JPoll Look in the Beef thread

I'm about to merk this bitch."COM", just Watch him get Dissed On
Coz when I get "Pissed Off", bitches like him gets "Pissed On"

When I drop personal on this bitch.. the fag hits tha roof
No need to get proof........coz com always drops datruth

ok pretty decent battle:

DaTruth: Opener: I'm about to merk this bitch."COM", just Watch him get Dissed On
%^meh. Pretty decent don't got no punch. But pretty tight.

Closer: Coz when I get "Pissed Off", bitches like him gets "Pissed On"

^ :shocked: sick shit. Rhymed wit yo opener too. good job on flow too.

COM: Opener: When I drop personal on this bitch.. the fag hits tha roof

^blah. ok

Closer: No need to get proof........coz com always drops datruth
^pretty good. Not as good as DaTruth though

DaThruth had better verse, even though it was 2 lines, so I give it to him. Weak ass VERSES though. I expect more than 2 liens for a verse. :nono: :cool:

^are you a fuckin moron?? they asked us to drop a punch each... so thats why we did... and his was weak as fuck.. you know nuthin,,, you cant mark a bar seperately... the "opener" as you put it, is the SETUP... the SETUP must run in conjunction with the PUNCHLINE ie.. setting it up.... and how can you mark ONE LINE on flow?? flow means how well it goes with the rest of the verse/bar... so you cant possibly mark one line on flow...... someone with a brain and a knowledge of anything textual please come in and vote please..... and i dont care if you vote for the other guy... just please show me you actually know what a punch....

just the fact ive seen a pissed off pissed on line before within front lines makes me vote for COM & also the fact that DaTruth's punch was not direct. He could take that line & use it on anyone on the net wheras comes was aimed at truth.

Vote/COm

this was easy
even though Com didnt put much effort into his punch it wasnt played
and it was a punch..to me the othere kids was more filler
oh yea hmmm...they should have just posted a verse
the 1-2 punch thing was kinda gay, but its your league
run it how you want to..

anyway

v/com

sO HIS WASN'T PLAYED?.. DO YOU WANT ME TO SEND YOU A LINK TO MY BATTLES.. IN LIKE EVERY BATTLE SOME SAYS, "DATRUTH HURTS", OR "DATRUTH IS", OR YOU'RE "DALIE", I'M SICK AND TIRED OF PEOPLE JUST PLAYING OFF OF MY EASY ASS NAME AND GETTING VOTES BECAUSE PEOPLE THINK IT'S CLEVER, EVERYONE DOES IT, READ MY BATTLES. HE DIDN'T EVEN INSULT ME EITHER.. AND MINES WAS A PUNCHLINE, DO YOU KNOW WHAT A PUNCHLINE IS? PLUS I DOUBT THAT YOU'VE EVER SEEN THIS LINE, AND HOW IS MINE NOT DIRECTED TOWARDS HIM WHEM I SAID..

"I'M GONNA MERK YOU DOT COM, FOR THE SET UP.. PLEASE, BE PROFESSIONAL, MAKE SENSE IF YOU VOTE..

Damn it..I said no freepost do you read, one more time and a DQ

-Superior

Dq Me Then.. I Don't Want A Bunch Of Idiots Voting On Me Anyway.. I'm Out Of The League, Plus I Won This Battle.. Motha Fuckas Are Just Idiots, They Don't Have Any Taste For Punches And Can't Understand Wordplay And Play Offs..a Bunch Of Teens Tellin Me That My Shit Was Filler, Fuck That..so I Refuse To Put My Record In Their Hand.. I Quit! Now..

Peace

To Make Sure You Dq Me.. Heres Another Freepost..