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Justify vs Katastrofe
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No d/r, crew, or hate votes No feedin, bitin, or recyclin verse due 45 min after checkin Any rules broken auto DQ I'll post my drop first |
check it, im checkin in...........................
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Aight.
Ok I'm checkin' in.4sho......1
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yo, r u droppin 1st. or are we doin it a the same time.
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you can drop nah if you ready...I could so mines like 5 min after that.
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I'll lyrically abuse you're weak punches n flow
Your lines more wack than a child on dope It's a "Katastrofe" that they let you on rb fuck you bein a emcee, your a cracka on extacy Kept PMin me, tryin to get me ta set up this shit Wastin 3 credits to hear a fake eminem spit You gon be takin more hits than a pot heads bowl Drop rap, maybe youd have a better career in soul cuz your raps got more holes than swiss cheese Think you can beat my drops? bitch please |
You dont wanna battle me, you must be lost like Fido/
You bound to loose, like the chinese dude, off American Idol/ To much time fuckin around should of een at the recital/ Now you screwed, can't even be saved by Jsus or a bible/ Nigga you aint on top of shit, you stay fallin' like "Niagra"/ Yo ass couldn't get up wit ten pounds of viagra/ Waited after the check in, this niggas bound to chocke/ And if not from the battle its fromLE dick in his throught/ Tryin to rip ya quick, so I'ma change the pace/ And before you start talkin shit, wipe the cum off ya face/ Already started the battle so theres no time to run/ The best advice I can give you is to put ya mouth on a gun/ I bet you the type of nigga to drop the soap in jail/ And when I'm through wit you, you gonna be the only one in heaven wit a wheelchair/ Damn. |
damn my comp. fucked me up.....2nd line should say "been" not "een"
and the 3rd should say "Jesus".....not "Jsus" Nah mean. |
Justify
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...alright personals... Katastrofe dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is tight...a few of ur punches connected...personals were ok... Overall Katastrofe had the better wordplay...both had a good structure...both had a good flow...both had ok personals...Justify had more multis...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Justify gets my vote... VOTE - JUSTIFY PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the second link in my sig against ruff_tuff_thug...thanx... |
Uppin, and i'll return wit honest votes if ya dropa link
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uppin
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uppin, lets get some votes, ill return the favor with honest votes on ya battles..come on dont sleep on this
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uppin...............
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Break Down I
Justify- Structure Is Good, Punches Could Be Better, Flow Is Ok, Wordplay Played.... Overal Ok Katastophe- Structure Was Ok, Flow Was Ok, Punches Hit Harder Than Justifys..... Overal Ok... Break Down II Punches- Katastrophe Personals- Niether Flow- Justify Wordplay- Niether Multis- Niether Metaphors- Katastrophe Structure- Justify Originality- Tie Vocab- Tie Final Vote- Katastrophe Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726 |
uppin
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vote on da prodigy vs troubledinocense an i'll return the favor..only need 1 more vote
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Nice lil battle here between ya peoples/
Heres my vote/ Flow: Tie Punches: K Multis: Just Wordplay: Tie Structure: K Enjoyment: K Overall: K Katastrophe won this, cause his rhyme was better strucutred than Justify's/ Also even thought wordplay was a tie, K had better punches which help him win more/ But Justify had nice multis in his verse, keep elevatin both of ya/ |
vote on da prodigy vs trouble dinocense an ill return the favor
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JUSTIFY:YA VERSE WAS 2 SHORT,SOME GOOD IDEAS BUT YA DID'NT GET PERSONAL ENOUGH,ya punches n vocab was simple n you lacked in content for ya verse...
kat:content was good but your punches were bad,some wordplay was good but that was'nt enough 2 get my vote... VOTE:JUSTIFY RETURN THE FAVOUR:http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...059#post1440059 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136831 |
Return the favor for me too man, Vote on my two battles/
DA Vs Ibraheem DA Vs Chalk Clorox |
Pretty Good Battle......both Had Good Flows And The Structures Were Ok.......katastrofe Had Overall Better Multis And Punches.....
Justify.....starter Was Good All Tha Way To Tha Middle And Kinda Dropped Off At Tha End.... Katastrofe...good Throughout....final Vote Goes To Katastofe Please Return The Favor Honestly At: Non Stop Vs V Non Stop Vs Macattack Non Stop Vs 2h2l |
DA, dont tell me to elevate kid lol...thanks for the honset votes everyone, when i get back to my computer ill return the favor
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uppin...thx for the votes yall. I'll hit up Prod, and D.A's pretty soon. Holla baq.
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uppin
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Katastrofe had more punches return da fav.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin...........................dont sleep on this.
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Katastrofe, your last vote gave inadequate feed back, he just said "Kat had better punches" vote DQd and that non stop guy must be dickridin cuz you had no multis
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Aight kool wit me...juss DQ DV8's vote to....I wasnt gonna say nothin but he down you the most and he still gave it to ya. nah mean. But I understand that E. didn't say shit. holla.
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Kats got this with bettah flow bettah verse cause his wordplay was killin and a little more complex then Just's, punches was aight too.
Just your drop was decent simple and yet not so sweet but had some hits fosho and a little flow but overall kats gotta get this his drop was just up and the end of the battle. Vote Kats |
uppin.......juss a few more votes yall.
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Punches- Katastrophe
Personals- Justify had one i think but it wasnt workin Flow- Justify Wordplay- Niether Multis- Niether Metaphors- Katastrophe Structure- Katastrophe all though ya last line was a lil strrreeettttcccchhheeeddd Originality- Katastrpohe Vocab- Tie 4-2 Katastrophe justify ya lines was just comin off a lil short if u wre to put more into it you wouldve had a better chance i think at winning this one katastrophe tha main thing i liked about your verse was ya personals thats maily why i gave this one to you.....keep elevatin one |
*****PUNCHES NOT PERSONALS^^^^^^^^^^^^it wouldnt let me edit my post lol
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Justify - Not really a good verse......You had maybe one good punch, "You'll be takin more hits than a pot heads bowl".......You had decent structure but tha rest of your verse was lacking good lyrics.....tha swiss cheese line is played.......And personals are good but no when they're fake.....how do u know he is white???......Aight drop...4/10 Katastrofe - Ya closing bar didn't really rhyme....but ya overall lyrics was better than Justify's and you had more punches that hit......The bar wit niagra and viagra wasn't necessarily a good punch but the two lines fit together perfectly some decent wordplay.......Both of you need to elevate and consider multi's and vocabulary next time.....Aight drop......5/10 Vote: Katastrofe |
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