Scriptive vs. BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
 

ok the ruls are... no feeding... no biting... no d/r votes... no hate votes... ou know thw uaual... you spit first ill spit right after your good luck... your gonna need it lol.... :thefinger

are you posting your ahit or what???????????????????

im counting this as a no show ive waited over 3 hours so mods plz close this thread and add a win 2 my record plz....... thnx

I'm gonna make you into a shake, After im threw with you, We cruise into a tree, Now im free trying to stay away from the crazy cree, Cuz I wear red dont tell them i spread words about fred, Its just a little tred that scares you in your bed. my freinds led them to my house, I threw them out, later at 12 I screwed um up man i wish i rolled with kurupt. Its for sure i rap damn, go have a knapp, I made you mad, Now lets scrap, It starts with a slap and end with a snap. I clap and laugh, Cuz you need to go have a bath, If you understand my wrath. Its over i made you cry, You ran away shy, I ask my self why, You try to be like that guy. Peace Out

ok you go sry i couldent see where you set it up at but you go now thats mine

its not a no show i didnt no what to do ok here i sent mine now check that out ok you spit or thats a no show ok go!

yoy yo add some wins to my name he aint replying its been 2 hours? waiting for a reply

this is not a no show, you never checked in brother and he didnt set a check in time, he needs to drop now

but your verse sucks so horribly bad brother, he should have no problem beating it

oh ok better late than never for the both of us eh???? imm a drop right now

scriptive check in asap on our battle and drop ur verse after its dropped we need votes so holla bak

this guy can't be serious.....

ok great verse, now lets see whos bubbles gonna burst,
im quenching your thirst, your wounds will be nursed,
who do you think you are steppin up to me twat,
i can't believe they put me battling against this brat,
with no skill, no wordplay, fuck it this guy can't rap,
if he got by ja rule i bet this guy couldn't clap back,
this guys gay, he told me he doesn't like pussy,
ookie, brotherp.a.r.a aint even a rookie,

fuck it thats all i need with you its over...............

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Scriptive you cannot call for a no show when
1.He hasnt checked in
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2.You never set a time limit

Actually sinner, that was weaker than his...he didnt have a structure...you didnt have punches.....weak battle both of you guys really need to elevate...brother more than you cuz he has wack structure

scriptive verse was better

the structer took it
the open and close was better tooo

i really didnt see multies and per. that much so

v/ script

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Brother.... that was just terible.... Scriptives got my vote allout on this baby!!!..

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i vote for brother he didnt have punches but he had a better flow n vocab to me but ya thats mine.

6/10 para and other cat 5/10 no battl e

para took it to you S you need some better punches man para 5/10 sciptive 2/10 lol good shit guys

man para got you honest plus you were a little late para 5/10 sciptive 2/10 wack battle for both

ya'll both was horrible jesus christ oh my god dat junk was bad yo brother you have no flow man i was reading it like what the f what is this guy talkin about scriptive u was alright i liked the ja rule clap back line alright man i said what i gotta say but ya'll both need to step up if ya'll wanna be the best

gotta go wit scrip, im mean, bro claims he's a punchline master or some shit, but i dident see kno punchs really, maybe a slap, but scrip had better, structure, better flow, better pretty much everything, but it aint hatin on my part on bro or nothin but im guessin he might be able to spit better ionno, bro should space his bars out n shit, hard to kinda follow, ionno thats my vote

if u got honest votes holla

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brotha sht didnt realli make sence it didnt seem like he was n a battle n hiz first few lines so mah vote goes wit scriptive

i give it to my man brotherpara peace bois

bro...barely took this wackest battle ive voted on today ,,,,both bad structure ,bad flow...get this outta here
v/brotha