manipulation vs king_lucif
 

house rules
im spiitin first
ur drop due withi 30 mins of mine
or its a d/q.... :nono:

Ok Dawg Hurry Up And Spit Though Cause I Am Leavin Soon

ok................
 

on rb im the queen..n ur ugly ass aint my king..
u said it yourself...this should be an easy win...
this clown weel illiterate!.. awh my heart sobs..
took the words outta my mouth..im a fukin knob!..
i dont hve to pull that hard on ya lil bow-wow chain..
and u chokin like an afghan..wen givin false names..
your spits couldnt be elevated..if u sang like a soprano..
structure cudnt b strong if u switched from lego to mecano!..
havin 3 n 6 posts the only time you ever seen a nine..
so quit fakin..you aint even tough enough for front-lines!..

ok dawg u got 30 mins............

n voters if u cnt understand my metas then dnt vote......gud luk

DAMN YOU ARE GOOD ok then..

yo hoodrat sit back// or ya gonna catch my pimp slap
youle get bent back//ill sell your filthy ass to pay my rent slack
yes i am, bitch its hoes like you that provide my money stacks
bitch i may be new but i aint gonna lose to some whack hoe like you
if theres one thing ive learnt from you its that it never hurts to try
while your squelin like the hoe you are im yellin thug life till i die
you may enjoy gettin your brainz fucked out but then again maybe not
whether its my glock or my cock//cause you aint got no grip
you cant spit for shit // so knuckle up bitch
cause you aaint nuttin but a trick hoe and this battles a sinch
look at me girl these raps perfection// if good raps were votes id win the election
bitch ill kill u, u dont need to pay me back//its for free to one BANG rest will die for fun
see beacuse when the sun go down // and gods gone i take the crown
im satan me and my crew rule beacuse im a dangorus man//
nigga bigga than the bloods, crips and the wutang clan
bring homies toghether and unite as a whole//an army to rule beatin others 3 fold
oh and by tha way i hate lil bowwow//but thats no need for you to act like a cow now
ok bitch i had more but fuck it im done// and dont think im payin child suport cause that kid aint my son

wow the is a no brainer
KING_LUCIF through the punches if this was a fight fist punch is a sleeper

MaNiPuLaTiOn keep papin u wasen t bad u through some punches

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LMFAO///////..wot woz that!
this site real funny sumtimes........


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Break Down I

King Lucif- Your Structure Was Horrible, It Flowed Ok, Punches Werent To Good, And You Said Hoe And Fuck More Than Punches You Had In Your Verse... Anyway... Wordplay Metaz Niether.... Overal Ok



Manipulation- Structure Was Good, Punches Were Ok, They Connected And Actually Had A Meaning To Them.. Had A Personal Or To.. Overal Decent Verse...


Break Down II
Punches- Tie
Personals- Manip
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Niether
Multis- Niether
Metaphors- Niether
Structure- Manip
Originality- Manip
Vocab- Tie

Final Vote- Manioulation

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

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good battle

breakdown

Manipulation

Flow- 5/10
Rhymes- 5/10
Punches- 4/10
Structure- 6/10
Total- 20/40

v/manipulation

King_Lucif

Flow- 5/10
Rhymes- 8/10
Punches- 6/10
Structure- 6/10
Total- 25/40

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sry bout dat i made a mistake

v/ King_Lucif

weird voting..........................................lm fao

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Lucif ur shits all over the place...
Punches-Man
Personals-Man..way better
Structure-Man
Flow-Man

K Manipulation took this...Lucif's wasnt even a battle verse...wasnt feelin it completely one sided in my mind....those votes were wierd

hit these up honestly:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137383

does that mean im gonna win my first battle...cool
yo i aint much of a battlerappa im more of a songwrite rappa

Good Shit Minip Comes away

King u fuckin sukk that was like 150 and 1/2 linez shit nigga

Break Down

King LUCIF

Flow 2/10
Rhymez 3/10
Punchez 1/0
Structure 0/10
7/40

Manipulation

Flow 7/10
Rhymez 8/10
Punchez 8/10
Structure 730/40
/10

vote/Manip

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king lucif,manip definitely made more sense with her lyrics than you did and she had more personals and better punchs,but you were definitely on the offence although you didnt really make sense so ima voting for....manip,sorry king lucif,im an honest voter

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matw u punk bitch im gonna fuckin hurt you cockhead.
mufafuka didnt i tell you not to come to my battles faggot stop tryin to act nice
u aint welcome to my battles and i aint welcome to yours
fuckin bitch ass white chump
remeber fool we go to the same skool
and we live in tha same district biatch ha ha ha ha ha
im gonna hurt you

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MaNiPuLaTiOn
on rb im the queen..n ur ugly ass aint my king..
u said it yourself...this should be an easy win...
blah, straight diss
this clown weel illiterate!.. awh my heart sobs..
took the words outta my mouth..im a fukin knob!..
blah times 2
i dont hve to pull that hard on ya lil bow-wow chain..
and u chokin like an afghan..wen givin false names..
okish. Iraq contents different from usual
your spits couldnt be elevated..if u sang like a soprano..
structure cudnt b strong if u switched from lego to mecano!..
wordplays blah, decent idea, but no
havin 3 n 6 posts the only time you ever seen a nine..
so quit fakin..you aint even tough enough for front-lines!..
blah, 3 n 6 lines, was ok idea, worded awefully

Bars were below average

KING_LUCIF
yo hoodrat sit back// or ya gonna catch my pimp slap
youle get bent back//ill sell your filthy ass to pay my rent slack
Boooo, that sucked
yes i am, bitch its hoes like you that provide my money stacks
bitch i may be new but i aint gonna lose to some whack hoe like you
pffft, & stacks/you do not rhyme
if theres one thing ive learnt from you its that it never hurts to try
while your squelin like the hoe you are im yellin thug life till i die
That sucked times 2
you may enjoy gettin your brainz fucked out but then again maybe not
whether its my glock or my cock//cause you aint got no grip
you cant spit for shit // so knuckle up bitch
cause you aaint nuttin but a trick hoe and this battles a sinch
look at me girl these raps perfection// if good raps were votes id win the election
bitch ill kill u, u dont need to pay me back//its for free to one BANG rest will die for fun
see beacuse when the sun go down // and gods gone i take the crown
im satan me and my crew rule beacuse im a dangorus man//
nigga bigga than the bloods, crips and the wutang clan
bring homies toghether and unite as a whole//an army to rule beatin others 3 fold
oh and by tha way i hate lil bowwow//but thats no need for you to act like a cow now
ok bitch i had more but fuck it im done// and dont think im payin child suport cause that kid aint my son
Wack wack wackidee wack, from the election to the child support line, all that crap was played the fuck out

Wasn't feeling anything you wrote, structures horrible, contents blahza(I'll beat you, kill you, choke on my small cock).Need to read how vets drop a dime, or quit, cause you seriously suck

V/MaNiPuLaTiOn;The less wacker of the two

Follow my links & do your thing

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ok king lucif ur verse was alright. it looked like u more focused on tha multis than dissin ur opponent. ur punches were horrible. manipulation basically had it all. although her punches werent that great they were better than tha other dude. and her verse flowed better than his

vote-manipulation


return tha favor and vote in my battle with marvelous J
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137508

Either of you going to vote on atleast one of my battles?

I spent time breaking your verses down, I expect you to do the same

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FUCK YOU AMOK YOU PUNK BITCH ASSHOLE

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lucif had easy simple rhymes and fake punches...manipulation took it wit a all around better flow, from start to finish...her punches were better and her rhymin, wait...rhymin was aight, there were a couple of bars that dint rhyme, and some things dint make since, but it was still better

v/manipulation

Mani you win wit betta metas tho' your punches aint as hard as usual Lucif you threw no punches and you bwere really repetitive and don't put tha '//' in your rhymes it's newbish I used to do it. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

Why can't I vote who's afraid of da truth? muthafucka

not u myster e you fuckin faggoty ass nigga i was talking too matw
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manip got me on her blacklist so i cant vote............damn

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