SixX vs Complex Illness (Peep dis HOTT!!)
 

iight yo i gave you time drop in 10 mins

house rules son
good luck
~1~

checkin in...

well im droppin...

ayo...
1~kid please, ur shyt is far from complex or ill/
but wen i speak, it makes ya fuckin heart stand still//
2~u dissin in the cyphers, but on tha battleground/
im dodgin ya punches, n im jus playin around//
3~u weak dawg, 4 letter words wont cut it/
tryna rap wen u soundin like a baby Ruben Studdard//
4~Ima end dis shyt quick so u wont embarrass urself/
all ya punches keep sayin is "im bad for ya health"//*
5~im smokin dis herb while actually smokin sum herb/
n bytch, im spittin fire so u bound to git burned//
6~u new up in the shyt wit sum unkown crew/
git all ya bois up in here, i grill dem too//
7~u cant touch me if i were to try-n-git-hit/
got sum banana clips im jus dyin-to-split//
8~im trashin dis wack rapper like no-good leaves/
but my punches leavin u stiffer den Christopher Reeves//

*Complex Illness:u try to act hard when u like dickz ya self
I might not of told u yet but my skillz bad fo ya health

My verse is winning so nigga u need to Read-it
Dont Tell me Good Luck when u really Need-it
Man i forgot that im so sikk why u dont like Chick
You got that in ya name cause u allways come in SixX
Man this is like a war and ur shitz about to Fall
The Best "Shot" u got at me is shootin a Basket-Ball
Can't Beleave u accually tryed to beat me son
Skill Callibur for u iz like from 0-10 u got a 1
4 wins compared to u niggaz thatz a Lot
U Spit that whack shit and thatz all you Got
IM Nice Wit a Mic Divice right Fuckin Ass
Breakin ya bonez and shit nigga leavein ya hole body in a CAst

I say Sixx had it cuz he had better punchez ,flow, and structure. Complex was good too.
Punches-sixx
flow-sixx
structure-sixx
opener-sixx
closer-illness
personalz-illness
v/sixx

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vote honestly on deez battlez

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137788 me vs. ibraheem
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137782 me vs. amayze

Weak battle, simple wordplay and multis/

Flow: Tie
Wordplay: Tie; weak wordplay though
Punches: SixX
Multis: SixX
Structure: Tie
Metas: SixX
Personals: None
Overall: SixX

Vote= SoxX

He had stronger punches, and he had multis to help them/
Also helpin his whole verse out thas all, good battle/
Keep elevating both of ya/

aight...

Six: shit was decent, nuthin hott...

Strong points- rubben studarrd line, had some creativity, and nice structure.

Flaws- dont talk about christopher reeves that way, have some respect.

Complex: verse had some landed punches.

Stong points- you had a few personals, keep that up.

Flaws- too basic, elevate, its ok...im trying to elevate too.

vote: Sixx

return the favor.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

Fuckin Pussy ass Cheater D.A. aNd SixX da FinIsh Same IP Adress how ya feel ya fuckinb Cheatre

I am not the Sixx man, you can even check my e-mail account you dumb bastard/
dont blame shit if you dont kno anything/

yo sixx:overall i think you had da better verse in cludin punches n content,/creativity..
nothin real great in this battle but it was fairly close,complex your verse needed ta have a better ryme scheme n try ta stretch those lines a lil more to get ore complex...alright battle...
vote/sixx
return da favour
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136831
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...059#post1440059

ayo jus cuz im smokin u dont mean shyt son i aint fuckin cheat i was owt all day yesterday n if u wanna be a dick u should be dq'ed for not droppin or checkin in on time

so fuck u!

I say Complex cuz he was more witty wit it. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393

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dick rydin ass vote^^ plz kid get ya self checked theres no competition here i killt him. uppin

i Bust ur ass fuck u nigga u pure ass and u kno it i spit in 2 minutes cause i got Rushed Come see me in a Real battle if it was 10 votes it whould be 10-0 me bitch so goo fuck yaself get a Real person a Vet or somthin to vote i get it bitch 1

lmao uppin dis battle.. o i mean slaughtering.. against this little fuckin bitch... mad cuz im killn him lol lets get dis shyt closed...

~1~

YO U COCKEY BUT WHN U DOWN IN DA VOTEIN ITS IIGHT UR MOM WILL BE ASIDE U THA HOLE TIME SO cOmE SeE mE WHEN I HAVE TIME iT WONT BE CALLED A BATTLE NIGGA

lmao yo dis dude is so funny yo.... he bytchin dat i was cheatin.. got busted for it.... n he STILL TALKN SHYT!! lmao UPPIN

FLOW.. TOSS UP
PUNCHES.. SIX
WORDPLAY... SIX
STRUCTURE.. TIE
METAS.. SIX
OPENER.. COMPLEX
CLOSER.. SIX

SIX CAME HARDER WITH THE PUNCH LINES AND THE CLOSER.. COMPLEX YOU NEED TO ELEVATE A LITTLE, ALSO SIX HAD MORE CONTENT.. MY VOTE GOES TO SIXX


RETURN THE FAVOR WITH A VOTE IN MY BATTLE...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136955

ayo lets get dis shyt closed peepl... cmon yo UPPIN

ill stop itz all good Good shit Uppin to get this CLOSED

We good

iight son no hate jus tryna get my battle closed... UPPIN

cmon peepl 1 more vote damn jus close dis shyt stop sleepin! UPPIN

sixx man what happened you was doin good but that closer is what lost it for you im a big eminem fan i know most of his shit inside out and that last line you use em spit it in a battle so sorry as my sig says plagerize and die complex illness dont be strutin like you the shit cuz sixx woulda had this had it not been for that line

v/ sadly complex illness

fuck dat dawg i hate eminem n i only listened to the d12 shyt.. fuck dat i aint plagerize shyt so chack ya shyt.. wack ass votes wat the fuck

the only shot you got is with a basketball and a few other good bars gave this to complex.sixxs only hot bar was the first line and then he was all down hill.
flow-sixx
wordplay vocab punches and disses-complex
personals-tie
vote to complex with a much stronger verse





check my battles out and return a honest vote and i do the same

i think sixxX had a good opener but then end went to c.illness
sixxx's flow was great. . . overall it was easy to identify wid the flow. . . i didn't really see the personal. . if there was one. . . i donno
but i saw a reply to what illness said "bad fo yo health" and there was a good reply to that. . .
illness did good, end was god, opener was ok, structure could have been a little better i think. . . i saw one personal i think . . . and it was a punchline. .
it didn't hit that hard though

i definetely liked the part about "rubben studdard"
so "i'm Sorry" . . . .lol
but i'ma vote Sixxx
v/sixX (well done)
:laugh: