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Rascal Vs. Maku Jaiiliin
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..normal voting.. ..you set up.. ..YOU SPIT FIRST.. ..3-0 Ko.. ..3-1 Tko BY YOUR REQUEST YA VERSE IS DUE BY NINE PM TOMORROW CHECK IN FIRST. Win by KO |
sorry about the you set up part, i copy/pasted his rules and shit, and he said i set it up.
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:laugh: nice copy and paste.
i said do dinner time 12 o'clock. but whatever its GMT anyway. G'luck and Pz. |
Forget about the win.you shouldn't even bother checkin-in.see the point is..
why do you set your verse up....................for the crowds dissapointment.. Dont run circles round this n00b... it is more like a figure of eight.. My Sig and avy are dope.. when yours are just a pair of self portraits.. this kids late to spit his verse.. probably tryin to find sumone to ghost it.. You gonna pm roun some friends askin for them to come and vote on this.?. "Iam what you cant be" well i will never be like you.. wack as fuck then..* People said i would Ko you.. and be honest your verse will prove it to them.. your are your custom.. not fit to hang with this super heavy weight.. verse's were due 3hours back bitch.. atleast i spit a no-show.. sorri and no-hate.. Quick no-show verse.. *His Sig says in the "".. |
Forget about the win.you shouldn't even bother checkin-in.see the point is..
why do you set your verse up....................for the crowds dissapointment.. Dont run circles round this n00b... it is more like a figure of eight.. My Sig and avy are dope.. when yours are just a pair of self portraits.. this kids late to spit his verse.. probably tryin to find sumone to ghost it.. You gonna pm roun some friends askin for them to come and vote on this.?. "Iam what you cant be" well i will never be like you.. wack as fuck then..* People said i would Ko you.. and be honest your verse will prove it to them.. your are your custom.. not fit to hang with this super heavy weight.. verse's were due 3hours back bitch.. atleast i spit a no-show.. sorri and no-hate.. The way i outshine you, it's illegal, i drop criminal floss// I will forget about this easy win, but you'll remember ya loss// Each time you start a battle line, i'll stop it, and leave you a slain bastard// so ya verse is full of new deaths like abortion clinic waiste baskets// Tell me why i'm like this, rascal, what nut could've mothered this sick shit?// Better question: Who else from england is nice other than slick rick?// English emcee? you'll go from the best shitty rapper// to an oscar award winning, homosexual actor// It's funny all this disrespect that you got fam// when you said. Quote:
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The way i outshine you, it's illegal, i drop criminal floss//
I will forget about this easy win, but you'll remember ya loss// Each time you start a battle line, i'll stop it, and leave you a slain bastard// so ya verse is full of new deaths like abortion clinic waiste baskets// Tell me why i'm like this, rascal, what nut could've mothered this sick shit?// Better question: Who else from england is nice other than slick rick?// English emcee? you'll go from the best shitty rapper// to an oscar award winning, homosexual actor*// It's funny all this disrespect that you got fam// when you said. Quote:
*the fact that every other british, english, or whatever actor is gay. |
I say Maku real personal return da fav.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin 4 votes on this one, let's keep it movin....
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my flow is sometimes hard for people to read, because a lot of the time lines may bleed into the next bar, or a line starts sooner than usual. it's not a regular, straight set up, it vomits all over the beat. I should do more audios show an example.
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ima have to give this battle to Maku cuz his was just flowin together "the English Bloke" had bars that were really strained n sounded forced
v= Maku return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137900 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648 |
MAKU:YOUR PUNCHES N RYME SCHEME WERE way better..some stretched lines but i still dint find it hurt your verse in the end,rascal,your ryming wasway off.good idea's but ya did'nt capitalize on them,overall it was a good battle alot better than i normally see in front lines,,,props ta both mc's....
vote/maku please return da vote: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...059#post1440059 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin this battle....thanks for the votes, let's keep it movin.
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maku good drop but.....not good enough.good personal at the end but punches were lackin and you borderline bitting on that abortion clinic shit.ras good fucking drop your shit was dope official opener and closer hard punches good disses and your only flaw is no personals but your verse was overwelming so you aint need them good drop vote ras :thumbup:
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Uppin this it realy does need votes..
Leave a link and i will hit it up for you.. pz. |
rascal had better word play(7)...and his structure was better..he came up with better punches and personals(8)...but the other guy had a gd verse..but not as good as rascals....his structure wasnt gd at all(5)....this battle was ok tho...aand rascal i have seen better drops than this...but keep it up:thumbup:
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Thanx and Uppin this..
God Front Lines Is Dead Thanx To That Wack Ass New System. Pz. |
ok.
maku-structure/flow i thought was ok.# punches were average,nothin really hard hittin i think your personals were weak...coz i found them to be played/n not very hard hittin. rascal.all round beta verse really.u came harder with the punches.u had some gud meatas as well..n ur wordplay/creativity was jus a notch above maku vote rascal return tha fav.links in my sig |
You guys gotta be shittin me!!! There is no way that Ras verse was better than Mak's.
Ras forced his *ahem* "flow" through the whole battle... the shyt didn't rhyme properly (also forced), and if ya ask me it was very elementary. EX: figure of eight and self portraits doesn't rhyme... period! I don't care where ya from or how you twist ya accent... that shit's a no-go! wack as fuck then/prove it to them... another forced couple of lines/rhymes. I agree that he had personals but that was about it. It means nothing if you have to force ya flow and ya rhymes. MAKU: Tell me why i'm like this, rascal, what nut could've mothered this sick shit?// Better question: Who else from england is nice other than slick rick?// English emcee? you'll go from the best shitty rapper// to an oscar award winning, homosexual actor// It's funny all this disrespect that you got fam// when you said. Quote: Originally Posted by Rascal do you wanna batle?you got good potential and could help me Elevate alot man This killed Rascals whole verse. The opener was weak but he picked up momentum as he went along... and there's nothing worse for an opponent than when you use his own words aginst him. I don't know if my vote counts or not but if it does I gotta say Maku got this hands down! Better structure, flow, and the main thing was that it actually rhymed. No hate Ras, but ya got more than enough time to elevate ya game... keep at it. |
aight, uppin 4 votes on this one...Leave a link to your battle and i'll vote on yours, to return the favor.
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yo maku u took it, dat shit was a good battle but wen it came to structure u took it man, rascal ur punches were ok but maku hit harder
v/Maku |
Good Battle but it went to 3-0 then 3-1 so i won By KO hen by TKO..
pz. Uppin anyway. |
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