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State Capitol Vs Raw Material
alright.....let's do this..good luck fam..respect
10-14 lines no d/r cv or biting no feeding blind spit 2 hours to spit after check in good luck |
So let's just say two hours from now, at about 3 Eastern time, sound good, so we eliminate the tempatation to feed? Respect back at you fam, let's do this
-CJ- |
alright lez do this............................................
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Raw Material?..Please...I've seen harder shit in my left out soggy cerial..
You makin noise? Like A def person at a club, your music is not hearable.. Battlin Chryme Sindicates Water Boy, This is an easy Target.. Couldn't "make it big" even if you took enhancer pills and "enlarged-it".. chances of winnin is like his chances of getting a girl, it aint gon happen.. Heard this kids audio, i thought it was Mariah Carey Rappin.. Kid aint Got Skillz....I mean....Look who he Lost-too.. Wait, if halloween's past, then y's raw ova dere in that hooker costume.. fuckin Drag queen..wait-a-sec..he jus stepped inside n-sight's automobile.. your reputation slippin, like a fat bitch walking towards a banana peel.. RB's been plagued, with a fag, Have him datin' this "male" mag.. Punches knock you out have you seein more stars then the american flag.. When you see the "red light" beaming over your head, dont be thinkin stop.. Cause once these hollow's bust..you'll be sure to Drop.. |
fuck...yoo i pressed a button and my whole verse got deleted...thank god i some how remembered it and typed it again LOL...i was bout to get pissed LOL........
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uh oh........its passed 2 pm. eastern time...........................
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Ok, here we go
State Capitol, well at least now I won't hafta Killah Bwoy, Your Skills do more dissapering acts then Sigfried and Roy, Naming yourself like Chris Rock, but you ain't no head of state, Look, this is what happens when Ja Rule and Lil' Bow Wow mate. Your vocabs strugglin', you should ask Vana to buy a vowel, Talk so much shit, thought you was tryin' to move a bowel. I said no recyclin', so now you can't use your most famous quote, Everyone gettin' Pms sayin' yo dogg, help me out wit an honest vote. State Cap, so whack, everyone here knows that shit for a fact. Hit you like I saw a punchbuggy, ....................then did everyone a favor and called no punch-backs. -CJ- |
Dogg, I said 3 eastern, that's why I was wonderin' why you dropped so soon, then I had to drop that shit quick, by the way, nice fake personal wit the audio dogg, since no one here has ever heard my shit, cause I ain't got a mic.
-CJ- |
Yo, it is alright to vote on this, you won't get like banned or some shit, y'all niggaz on this site piss me off, it takes like 5 years for a fuckin' battle to close. Don't sleep on this shit, fuckin' vote.
-CJ- |
i know..........fuck................................ ................
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i would and all... but im in the crew... :)
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Vote goddammit......................................... .........Uppin'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-CJ- |
o.k raw good struture flow and a good drop.you had a good vocab and your second bar was mad funny and your ender was funny also.you had no personals though and a few bars was slacking.state you had a kinda streched struture but good personals and punches hit hard in a few areas only your ender was weak so with better punches you take it and the 3rd bar was funny as hell.
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uppin this ya'll...got dayum....is there some anthrax surrounded around this battle mayn..ya'll niggaz scared to vote..duckin n dodgin this thread like you gettin shot at...VOTE
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ What that nigga said. Fuckin' vote niggaz. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-CJ- |
lol nice battle fellas.
state-good punches and shit. nice wordplay and all that but i hate hate hate hate when people put fake personals in their verse so that lost you major points. other than that, nice drop. fav line Battlin Chryme Sindicates Water Boy, This is an easy Target.. Couldn't "make it big" even if you took enhancer pills and "enlarged-it"......5/10 raw- nice punches and everything was great. main reason you won this was that he fucked around and put a fake personal and because that fuckin remark at how he looks was hi-fuckin-larious...fav line Naming yourself like Chris Rock, but you ain't no head of state, Look, this is what happens when Ja Rule and Lil' Bow Wow mate....7/10 v//raw material |
State Capitol, well at least now I won't hafta Killah Bwoy, Your Skills do more dissapering acts then Sigfried and Roy, 6/10 Naming yourself like Chris Rock, but you ain't no head of state, Look, this is what happens when Ja Rule and Lil' Bow Wow mate. 6/10 Your vocabs strugglin', you should ask Vana to buy a vowel, Talk so much shit, thought you was tryin' to move a bowel. 5/10 I said no recyclin', so now you can't use your most famous quote, Everyone gettin' Pms sayin' yo dogg, help me out wit an honest vote. 5/10 State Cap, so whack, everyone here knows that shit for a fact. Hit you like I saw a punchbuggy, ....................then did everyone a favor and called no punch-backs. 6/10 Ya punches were played and didnt really connect not really one of your best battles i figured u would of dropped alot harder than this really but u had ok wordplay but ya punches didnt get the job dont in this one Raw Material?..Please...I've seen harder shit in my left out soggy cerial.. You makin noise? Like A def person at a club, your music is not hearable.. 7/10 Battlin Chryme Sindicates Water Boy, This is an easy Target.. Couldn't "make it big" even if you took enhancer pills and "enlarged-it".. 6/10 chances of winnin is like his chances of getting a girl, it aint gon happen.. Heard this kids audio, i thought it was Mariah Carey Rappin.. 5/10 Kid aint Got Skillz....I mean....Look who he Lost-too.. Wait, if halloween's past, then y's raw ova dere in that hooker costume.. 7/10 fuckin Drag queen..wait-a-sec..he jus stepped inside n-sight's automobile.. your reputation slippin, like a fat bitch walking towards a banana peel.. 6/10 RB's been plagued, with a fag, Have him datin' this "male" mag.. Punches knock you out have you seein more stars then the american flag.. 6/10 When you see the "red light" beaming over your head, dont be thinkin stop.. Cause once these hollow's bust..you'll be sure to Drop.. 6/10 Not really ya best drop but it got the job done ya punches werent that hard ya personals was ok not many tho and ya wordplay was average i also figured u woulda dropped alot harder than that but it still got the job done with the overall better wordplay and somewha harder punches |
State Capitol- yo punches were decent..they landed..tha structure & flow was good..and u had a nice vocab..(eazy 2 read)..
raw material- yo punches were good to..not hard enuff tho..an ok structure..and a nice flow too.. Overall- State Capitol (Decree Wun) gets my vote cause..he had harder punches than raw..a better structure..and a nice flow to it.. |
uppin ill return the favour..........................
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vote state capitol or decree but verse was more entertaining didnt stick to the same old shit... more creative
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ok vocab flow and structure as well as wordplay was even disses also but state had a better punchline throughout the battle raw had them 2 but they fell off towards the ened so state gets my vote
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