Tourn vs Femcee
 

2 lines
due 30 mins after check in
no d/r,crew,hate votes

Representin Blue Print, Check.

checkin in........................................

poor bitch..havin high dollar hopes..but her skills spent
cause i'm stompin bruises on her frame, so she'll really rep blue-print

its legit, uppin for votes.

a leak, mouth droolin's a hoax?..

...him just spittin's a joke.

why you need 30 minutes to post?..

...when your just gonna follow up with prewritten votes.

the frist line was preety good decent flow and decent set up,
but u'r 2ed line made no sense to me??
pre-written votes??? how u have prewritten votes?? so the punch aint really make sense or do much for me... so the creativeness lacked basicly in other words...

3.5

poor bitch..havin high dollar hopes..but her skills spent
cause i'm stompin bruises on her frame, so she'll really rep blue-print

now this was better the hit was understandable and better more hard hitting in my eyes and was more creative and also a personal....
7.5

vote: tourn

im gonna have to go wit intensity effect, it was selfexplanatory the way he typed it
femcee dont give up though


hey check out this battle, this shitts contriversal

monsoon vs ghost

when you chek it out, ask your self, is there such thing as gettin too personal

Dumbass... It's between tourn and femcee.

rofl^^^....uppin for the people who arent blind...

your in herb if you cant understand my punch, and you need to get the fuck out.

uppin, for votes and links.

uppin............................................. ...

uppin/..............................................2

need votes, i will return the favor.

uppin.............................................

femcee:-


a leak, mouth droolin's a hoax?..
...him just spittin's a joke.

why you need 30 minutes to post?..
...when your just gonna follow up with prewritten votes.


idk what intense effect is bitching about, thats a hot line.

its creative ( b/c usually ppl are takin bout prewritten verse, but your dissin him with a line about prewritten votes, thats creative and hot.)
structure was good, punches were good, first line was a good opener for the finishing punch. nice bar........9.3/10.......thats vet stuff.


tourn:


poor bitch..havin high dollar hopes..but her skills spent
cause i'm stompin bruises on her frame, so she'll really rep blue-print


nice punch, good structure, but femcee had a lil more word play and her prewritten vote line killed you. but it was a nice match up, good competition.

vote: femcee

return the favor on one of my battles.. ill be bac with the link.

tourn had a better punch that line was gansta and slick but femcee line was slick too just in a puchline battle you gotta have that mike tyson swing and for that you need to disrespect hard and tourn did that and gets my vote

your wack, uppin.

i give this to feemcee cos her opener was better and her punches hit harder than the other dude's.....and hey rhymes were better.........but feemcee avseen better drope of urs...

vote feemcee

return favour in my 2 battles thanx....link below

i'll take femcee's line on someone who voted against her..."your wack, uppin."

wow femcee fukn knocked out tourn hands down my votes for her. Tourn had two lines to write and they didnt even rhyme

return the favour honest on my battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138127

^this dude's a fuckin joke...spent/print..doesn't rhyme...rofl shows how femceee is gonna win this shit newbie voters..uppin

uppin........................................again ....

need votes, i will return the favor...just drop a link.