J Roc vs. WillNova
 

10 lines
no need fo time limit (be decent)
u kno the rules
lets do this

iight im checkin in ill post somethin in a few minutes

yo youre "destined to die in battle" like pilots of kamakazee "fighter-jets",
Will gets "eatin" like a verse a "biter-gets"..
watch me "decipher-text", "give a purple heart" to this so called
"cypher-vet", cause "Will cant really fuck with me" like "cyber-sex"..
"destroy everything you know" leave you wonderin where you "wisdom-is", with
you "lacking knowledge" its no wonder your punches "didn't-diss"..
you're the only "e.s.l. member whose talent level" "isn't-rich", ill "have
you so abused" and "trapped by bars" youll think youre my "prison-bitch"..
ill make "your immature words cut out" like a "rapist with a knife" does a
"virgins-cries", make you "lose the point" like kids that are "circumsized"..
weve "heard-ya-lies", "are you important?", no its time for me to
"turn-the-tides", "who have you beatin fairly?" no one so howd you
"earn-ya-stripes?"..
"make you be-come bloody" u cant believe how "red-ya-sperm-is", "dog" your a
"female" will the "bitch" die? is what the "mans-concern-is"..
you know the truth of course you will and i "bet-ur-nervous", youve
"discovered" my "disses" completely "cover" you like your "epidermis"..
"repeated punches" "hittin-absurd", till your "skull-explodes", watch your
"soul get elevated" "victim-of-words", instead of "bullet-holes"..
"howd you even make it this far?" did you "pull-a-hoax?", you are wack youve
got "no flow or multis, weak punches" and the "dullest-jokes"..


iight kid ur turn

u should of listen, pussy like kittens, why u use prewritten//
u'll write no more after this, leave u fingerless like mittens//
u tea bag more than lipton, I reign more than Great Britian//
I burn Roc let u boils in pots wit bakin soda in kitchens//
u as real as fiction, u try ro compare but were two different//
I drop bars that'll leave u hangin like blacks after lynchins//
not to mention, u scared of beef, u sprint like cellies//
the only style u got is a gansta and a gentleman LP//
wat u fail to see is I prevent kids to exist like Trojans//
I'm like a runnaway train on it own, I spit wit locomotives//

yoyoyoyo, u the one that told me to spit ten lines and I posted it at the beginnin... that should be a automatic win, rules is rules, but u still did good nigga, u held it.....
lets get these votes in

Now this is wat I call a battle, about time i faced sumone of this sature

thanks kid much respect u came correct to holla at me sometime

Uppin fo votes, lets get them in.... hahahahaha.... lets get 'em in

both had good flow even though it took me awhile to catch will shit i got it now.j shit was alright but the punches were weak.dog mittens got fingers!!!that killed it for him.will was too long but he had harder punches and he dissed j better so he gets mt vote.


yall niggas go vote honest on my shit

this was a hot ass battle. I think both spit a great verse. J.. win or lose, Ur good enough to be in the crew now. keep elivating, I was feeling ur shit for real. Nova fixed his structure and flow again to his regular hard style. punches were both on point. str8 battle ya'll. Im interested on who gets the win for this one. lets get some votes in for any of these two ill kids.

J Roc- Flow Was Good, Multis Were Decent, And Punches Were Hittin

Will Nova- Structure Was Better, Better Multis, Punches Didnt Hit As Hard Though

Punches- J Roc
Flow- J Roc
Multis- Will
Wordplay- J Roc
Metaphors- Will
Structure- Will
Originality- J Roc

Final Vote J Roc
Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077

aight lets get these votes in..... hahahaha, uppin as usual

J Roc had more lines..therefore more punches therefore better flow...wich add to personals, multis, and structure..nah mean?!...homeboi u set ya self up..should of had a set amount of lines/bars....

J Roc.....flow was good...and I liked ya shit...u get my vote.Overall.


Hit up my battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1463552

both had nice flows
but i give it 2 WILL
he had a better structure
n i like his metas
J Roc's was tight 2 but work
on ur structure it was shitty it
fuck up ur flow
v/WILL
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i gotta give this to willnova cause j roc's flow was decent, and handlin, but his structure as poor, and it sounded like he kept tryna keep going on some rhymes when he shouldve just ended it..nice flow tho, uppn to willnova...elevate on that part roc, u woulve took it...nova's flow was decent...nice battle, neck n neck


good flow people

dropped votes=returned HONEST favor

ok thanks for the vote but im still uppin this for some more

weak ass battle
my vote Will
evathin cold and good
flow good
structure good
rhymes- pretty

dang yo this battle still open i forgot bout this shit lol i guess imma up it neways

will no j roc took it i think better punches and stuture and vocab:
Punches 6/10
metas 7/10
stucturre 9/10
flow 2/10
vocab 6/10
v/j roc.
pretty much he lost for all reasons but not flow he won that part but tough luck
return the favour in my battle verse schrema in my sig is the link thanks peace

both were good

Punches- J Roc
Flow- J Roc
Multis- Will
Wordplay- J Roc
Metaphors- Will
Structure- J Roc
Originality- J Roc

my vote goes to J Roc

1 more vote dog an this will be over bout time lol uppin this neways

j roc you had hjard punches yo...9/10
nice flow and structure...10/10
it was very creative... whole thing 50/50
will nova you had pretty good punches as well...10/10
your flow was good....10/10
so was yo structure...10/10
whole thing 55/50
v/will nova...