raw killa vs Da Jokah
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
u drop first bitch lets go

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-28-04 at 04:30 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Da Jokah has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 04:01 AM.

las i heard it was me n u n ruff tuff thug n sum 1 else as in me n ruff against u n ur friend so fix it rite dumbass

na b they got there battle me vs u lets go bitch,,wun

ayt w/e no fuckin feedin though holla back good luck peace out 1 luv

raw killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 04:11 AM.

iight e.z lets go 10 mins no feedin dont worry...

Yo Waat Tha Fuck Drop Yo Shit Bitch Now>>>10 Mins

ayo fuck this bitch Raw Killa fuckin bitch..lets goo..


ayo i slay niggas wit ma mi-cro-phone//
and ma wheels spin and might-go-crome//
so watch out fo tha blindin light wen i pass//
got yo momma i grind it light wit dat ass//
u look like a bitch that i took to the bar//
couldnt read ur mind till it was all over the car//
Blood up crips down a thug gon stalk on u//
raw-meat hangin out the side of his neck//
cut out his tounge and use that shit to wype the deck//
this bwoi is selfish...he eastin but tell me no feedinn//
fuck it..
ill cut his stomach open eat tha food and leave him bleedin//
iam a nasty nigga that take shit i want and keep needin//
bloods up crabz down..dont know wen a thug chalk on u//
nigga ill knock u out then ill blood walk on u//

e,z nigga nuff said

"GET DA FUCK OUT HERRE BITCH...u a lil cracka Jack bitch nuff said dont say nigga less u lookin for problems bitch made wun..."

who dis nigga tlkn 2,betta shut yo lips b4 i make a belt wit U,ima continue sayin NIGGA,NIGGA,stop frontin onlt thing u pullin is a water gun TRIGGA these words goin b
rapin U/
each VERSE,my keyboard DISPERSE,gets WORSE,than a haitain vodoo CURSE,got u
sweatin buckets so bad ur fear quinches yo THIRST,capable of smokin yo mind once
these 3 rounds BURST,yo rhymes so weak they flat LINE,n leave front LINE in a HURSE/
at least he got sumtin rite n called himself da JOKAH,but u got da wrong table we aint playin POKAH/
i spit these lasso's in BATTLE'S,like these victims my CATTLE,throw they bodies ova da horse n make'em my SADDLE'S/
my bullets like yeast up in NIGGAZ,til they soul rise up out they FIGGAZ,blow da smoke clear from da barrel once i squeeze these TRIGGAZ/
i got lyrical burial GROUNDS,where lie beneath da cryin SOUNDS,of battles lost stacked by POUNDS,where ur lost n forgotten writins can b FOUND/
"u a lil cracka Jack bitch nuff said",well i guess dis cracka preparin ya death BED,leave yo body stuffed wit LEAD,leave message's on mirrors wit ya blood RED,"dont say nigga less u lookin for problems bitch made wun",yet da only bitch is U,say nigga all i want bitch fuck U cuz i dont give shit wut u SAID/
so ima leave dis wit a"GET DA FUCK OUT HERRE BITCH",n get da fuck off my DICK"

and u cant say i was feedin cuz nigga dat aint shit u said from yo verse but yo reply in my mug shots peace out homie good luck 1 luv holla back

iight hahaha ok uppin this hahah

how u goin 2 up a battle n u aint drop yo verse yet dont make much sense feel wait til u drop than up it peace good luck

ayt didnt see ur verse las time b4 u posted so u blood nigga? didnt no dis was gang wars but dude ur a fuckin moron da niggaz i runned wit back in jersey were all bloods i aint tlkn out my ass or nuttin dawg but ive always liked bloods over crypts.since dis 1 crab ass nigga decided 2 rape my girl(ex-fiance)while i was locked up.good luck nice drop uppin uppin uppin 4 votes holla back no hatin or crew votes jus honesty n rememba dis shit music not death threats so dont take it 2 heart n fuckin have fun peace^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^

what the fuck is this

Voted For: raw killa

yea u did enough wit da personals come see mine http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393

Voted For: raw killa

First verse:punches were ok but could been about any1, gotta have more personals,used self-glorification too often,lack of multis,didnt really like first verse...

Second verse:multis were pretty good,punches were nice,personals ok...u need some work on ur structure but overall nice drop!

So my vote goes to second verse...(raw killa)

Voted For: Da Jokah

jokah had tight personals and hard punches...ur lines werent streatched and were tight....u busted in a few lines which made it cool....word play(9)...structure was decent too....gd job

Voted For: raw killa

raw won dat shit, Joker wanna talk about crips an bloods raw jess eat his ass up plain an simple

yes sum1 who finally agrees wit me dude(dis@da jokah)dis a battle not a gang war cuz 1 i aint crip i told u i hate them n support bloodz back in jersey i aint in it i jus support them the rest of ya thanx 4 da votes xxxtasy i kno u messed up on ur vote but its kool still love ya holla back more votes c'mon peace uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: Da Jokah

it was ok up to, got yo momma i grind it light wit dat ass//
u look like a bitch that i took to the bar//
couldnt read ur mind till it was all over the car//
Blood up crips down a thug gon stalk on u//
raw-meat hangin out the side of his neck//
cut out his tounge and use that shit to wype the deck//
this bwoi is selfish...he eastin but tell me no feedinn//
fuck it..
ill cut his stomach open eat tha food and leave him bleedin//
iam a nasty nigga that take shit i want and keep needin//
bloods up crabz down..dont know wen a thug chalk on u//
nigga ill knock u out then ill blood walk on u//

i did'nt understand you jokah at all ,maybe u need to fix that.

iight mayne no doubt..uppin this.....

sry nigga no hatin but fo real those 2 votes u got were mistakes yo verse tight n all but so far every1 who pm'd me bout it who made da mistake's said they wanted 2 really vote me cuz ur verse well more gangsta rap than battle rap 4 1 2 i was jus sicker all love though good luck nigga blood in blood out homie 1 luv peace out holla back

uppin this

uppin this shit

Voted For: raw killa

Punches- Raw
Flow- Raw
Wordplay- Tie
Meta- Niether
Structure- Da Jokah
Originality- Da Jokah
Multis- Raw

Final Vote Raw Killa

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...77&page=1&pp=15

thank u peeps of rb 4 da replies n votes jus need 1 more n ill finally get a fair win since my las battle wit eye turned out 2 his win since da las vote i needed couldnt have been made since da dude who said wut he did bout dunno who was but w/.e n e ways w/e good battle eye we both kno we good but deep down ya kno i had dat battle but yea w/e good job.....uppin dis shit holla back^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: raw killa

nice verse a bit off in structure but ya had better punches n more of them,good vocab overall ya had a stronger verse not really much more ta say it was a clean sweep in my eyes....