!Riff Raff! vs $ Wordman $
 

Aight you.. Rules:

- 8 Lines MAx!!!!!
-No Feeding, Crew Votes, Swaying....
First to 5...
3-0=K.O

2 Hour Max.. iam at work... LMAO
You spit first, concidering you called me out....



Peace..... Check in First...


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 09:06 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Wow, this shit is all changed around... ...............

Aight Checking In........................one More.

$ Wordman $ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 09:09 AM.

yo you gotta accept the battle....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I Accept..........................................

yeah i agree to them rules and accept them....so check me in

How The Fuck Do You Accept.....
This New Sytem Sucks Big Time.....
I Aint Droppin Untill I Know The System's Accepted Me Otherwise I'll Be A Waste Of A Verse..

amma beat you quicker than a techno beat
 

FUCK IT IM A DROP ANYWAY........

The death penalty is back for a limited time only; with Riff Raff handing out the sentence
Wordman, with a verse like that this judge will show you no kind of repentance

Use independence, I peeped some verses that you robbed from the legends brain waves
You’ve bitten n chewed so much you’ll have BIG and Pac spazzin out in their graves

If this battle was a real brawl, my punches would leave you FAR past bumps and bruises
I hope you seen Vanilla Sky, coz ill leave you face just like Tom Cruises

Ya whole life's bland, g'head no show. You winnin is sad to see
U posted, it's just the system invalidated your post for lack of character...
...in ya personality

aight yo,

Here we Go again,

Verse Like what? This Kid Spits like His Severly Mental
Imm'a a Beat You Son, 120 Bpm like an Instrumental
I've already out Did your Verse with my second Line
Sending Fears up your Back, worse then the Guys a Call-imbine!
Re-aranging yah Mind, With Everyline, Worse then Interior-Design
Never Bit a Thread In my Life, This Guy Got More Fillers Then Punch-Lines
I would say, Juging yah Lasts battle, You need a Life Redsign
On Behalf Of RB, Imma Put my Middle Finger in the Air
Close this Browser, and Continue Playing Solitaire!!!


PEace.... Sonned...

Uppin For Some Votes now!.........................

Uppin... Lets get some Votes in here people.. Leave a Link.. and yah Know i ll vote..

This was feedback posted for $ Wordman $
 

i liked the structure of your verse. need to focus on puttin rhymin words together with rest of your rhyme. overall flow was coo, and creative

Voted For: $ Wordman $

uhh i vote #2... horrible structure.
- decent punches.
- creative.
- and a lil wordplay.

return the favor, seriously.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136635

This was feedback posted for !RIFF RAFF!
 

FUCK IT IM A DROP ANYWAY........

The death penalty is back for a limited time only; with Riff Raff handing out the sentence
Wordman, with a verse like that this judge will show you no kind of repentance
decent,

Use independence, I peeped some verses that you robbed from the legends brain waves
You’ve bitten n chewed so much you’ll have BIG and Pac spazzin out in their graves
i wasnt really feeling this one right here lacked creativeness n hard hit....

If this battle was a real brawl, my punches would leave you FAR past bumps and bruises
I hope you seen Vanilla Sky, coz ill leave you face just like Tom Cruises
that was preety good and best hit so far...

Ya whole life's bland, g'head no show. You winnin is sad to see
U posted, it's just the system invalidated your post for lack of character...
...in ya personality

preety decent ending all around not a bad verse..

7.0 outta 10

since i notice that was feed back for riff raff

my vote was for wordman

he had better hits aka better punches was more creative and all around i thought had a better and tighter verse..

vote: wordman

BUT HOW DO I VOTE NOW??? I CANT SINCE I HIT FEED BACK WELL MY VOTES FOR WORDMAN ANYWAY u look at it...

but preety good battle here....

Voted For: $ Wordman $

wow...........tight verse......ur multis were tight and ur punches connected i give you a 8...ur personald and wordplay were decent and interessting....i give you a 8....and ur last 2 lines were hella hot!!!gd job

Thanks for the Votes guys... But None of yah polled it... Uppin for more votes

Uppin.............................................

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

Wordsman- Your Structure was Good, Flow Was Ok, Though Your Last 2 Lines Were A Horrible Closer, You Stared Good Though.. And Some Wordplay Was Played

Riff Raff- Structure Was Ok, Flow Was Good, Wordplay Was Played In Some Parts, Punches Were Ok...

Punches- Riff Raff
Personals- Niether
Flow- Riff
Wordplay- Riff
Metaphors- Wordman
Originality- Tie
Multis- Wordman
Structure- Wordman

Final Vote---Riff Raff
Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077

Finaly Someone Who Knows Talent When He See's It

Uppin... For some More votes.......................

uppin///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

Voted For: $ Wordman $

riff raff just gon dun now u need 2 do my battle son

fucking herb.
you only gave him that vote coz i just kicked your ass you fucking herb.......

Voted For: $ Wordman $

this battle was one sided.
wordman ripped riff raff.
he had better and more creative punches.
better structure, and his style wasnt played out a year ago.
riff raff had some really played lines, I mean REALLY played.
and I liked wordman's opener, truthfully, thats what really won the battle.
pz

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Voted For: $ Wordman $

Verse Like what? This Kid Spits like His Severly Mental
Imm'a a Beat You Son, 120 Bpm like an Instrumental
ok opener, decent flow. 6.5/10.
I've already out Did your Verse with my second Line
Sending Fears up your Back, worse then the Guys a Call-imbine!
streched. flow is getting suspect. 5/10.
Re-aranging yah Mind, With Everyline, Worse then Interior-Design
Never Bit a Thread In my Life, This Guy Got More Fillers Then Punch-Lines
good, but again, stretched. ok punch, good flow. 7/10.
I would say, Juging yah Lasts battle, You need a Life Redsign
On Behalf Of RB, Imma Put my Middle Finger in the Air
Close this Browser, and Continue Playing Solitaire!!!
ok closer, better lines although I dont see how the first of three fits here. 6/10.

24.5/40. ok flow few lines stretched and one that didnt belong. decent though.

The death penalty is back for a limited time only; with Riff Raff handing out the sentence
Wordman, with a verse like that this judge will show you no kind of repentance
good line to open. good flow, although it's stretched. 7/10.

Use independence, I peeped some verses that you robbed from the legends brain waves
You’ve bitten n chewed so much you’ll have BIG and Pac spazzin out in their graves
stretched. played punch. give it a 4/10.

If this battle was a real brawl, my punches would leave you FAR past bumps and bruises
I hope you seen Vanilla Sky, coz ill leave you face just like Tom Cruises
sounds like the second line was 'kind of' bitten from Kanye West through the wire.....but anyways....an ok line, played punch again, good flow holds it at a 4.5/10.

Ya whole life's bland, g'head no show. You winnin is sad to see
U posted, it's just the system invalidated your post for lack of character...
...in ya personality
horrible closer. played right out. 2/10.

17.5/40.

decent battle. my vote is for Wordman.