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...Superior... vs $ Wordman $
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting check in you drop first Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 07-28-04 at 09:59 AM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
$ Wordman $ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 09:17 AM.
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...Superior... has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 09:17 AM.
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Aight Yo... Here I go!!!
imm'a Rip this kid up like another Inferior-Wack-Opponent This Kids just a Netcee, Superior-Lacking-Rap-Component Lay Yah Stanza Down Bro, Then Tell Us who wrote it?? damaging this Groupie's Credit, For Calling me out Ta battle Stuck in a fierce State of Regret, Of Trying to jump on a real emcee's Saddle I Speak the Trueset Shit , Spitting about Myself Only way your Lyrics would get bought, is if you were a Toy On da Store Shelf. Beating this Kid Down Faster Then a Summer Fling The Only return* he witnessed was Lord Of the Rings * under his name it says THE RETURN OF |
well just got back and Key'd it In.. .
Peace.... Waiting on the Reply.. |
O shit....lmao sorry forgot you cant see the verses till we both drop
i'll drop in like 10 15 mins.. |
You're probably shook, asking for votes from anonymous peeps
You should just stick to postin your favorite rap song of the week Rip this kid to shreds and leave his big ego trampled So I can drop Wordman like clumsy doctors with piss samples I’m putting a stop to wordman like my bladder was clogged, closing the gate Come on Your punches are wack, like lazy lovers their never up to date Why’d you accept I said I need to battle someone who’s a worthy foe Didn’t need this battle to show your more washed up than a toilet bowl |
Voted For: ...Superior...
I was likin da punches and metas. return da fav. y'all http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399 |
Yo... Ok... I want Explained Votes... I fucken Hate it when People do that
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This was feedback posted for ...Superior...
This verse got it in my opinion...the stucture was better & also he had better wordplay, rhyming and overall a better verse...it was entertaining to read and the rhyming was better overall...flowed nicely and on point so battle verse# 2 gets it...
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uppin this shit make sure you vote
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Voted For: ...Superior...
yo even though we beefin ur punches connected and ya shit flowed more all about even no personals like the 1st verse but i think superior took it by alil punches: sup personals: v1 multis:v1 metas: sup flow:sup creativity: sup vote: sup |
uppin this ish
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Voted For: $ Wordman $
this battle goes to superior definetly his punches were better and it just all around flowed. the other guys shit was not on point and it was too simple he need to up his game up and he'll have some good structure goin v=superior return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136612 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648 |
This was feedback posted for ...Superior...
i vote # 1....
blah: #2's toy shelf line needs to be voided, ppl buy toys off the shelf any ways, its not likes its abnormal. this verse had good flow, nice structure, and landed punches. return the favor, seeriously' http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136635 |
Voted For: ...Superior...
coo wordings and rhymin...verse #2 need to learn how to rhyme better. close battle, coo flows. v/verse 1, because better punches and rhyming |
Voted For: ...Superior...
Better overall verse. Better punches and just flowed better. Testing this shit. |
uppin this ish
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up up up and away....lmao
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Voted For: ...Superior...
ok verse...u had good witty punches...steady flow...nuttin bad in your verse...except for the blatter one...that was wack. |
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