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Restricted 07-28-04 09:56 AM

R-Rated Vs. Anxiety
 


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Restricted 07-28-04 09:58 AM



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anxiety 07-28-04 03:17 PM

Check...

anxiety 07-28-04 03:46 PM

My bad R... I got to go to the movie (lets see if that is in his verse)... Dont drop yet if you dont wanna... Im gonna meet the deadline though... Peace...

anxiety 07-28-04 08:10 PM



R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...
Cant Impersonate the Impersonator? Restricted lately has been angry...
Since you failed to Impersonate, seems the impersonators Slim Shady...
Your tellin people that saying you lost to DR votes is a whack excuse...
Refresh my memory, but isnt that what u said when you lost to looch...
You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...
Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Re$TricTed
It Was 5-4...You Got Rode Plus I Barely Spit...

You Wanna Go Again Dats Straight.....How About Audio? Or You Can't Do That Yet?

~R~

Restricted 07-28-04 08:15 PM



Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb..
This Dude Was Meant To Be Sonned Since Birth..Ya Mom Bothered and Wild..
I Would've Had My Child Aborted Before I Ever Fathered Your Style..
By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..
Watch The Pixels Scream As I Make Your System Bleed Glitches..
I Hope Your Pussy's Trimmed And Clean..Cauase I Tend To Eat Bitches..
Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..

~R~

anxiety 07-28-04 08:18 PM

Lets get some votes... Nice spit...

Ca'lam 07-28-04 10:24 PM

hmm..

anxiety:i thought this was a good simples verse.. no wordplay, but personals were there.. flow was the same, but a little stretched..just tiny bit.. Overal pretty good...


~R~: hmm its dragged at the begginging.. it picked up a lil bit in the middle.. i thought this verse didnt do you justice compared to the others.. but its was definatly less stretched then i normally see you come.. flow was actually pretty good in this.. no personals.. some ok metas.. is say a decent average verse...


my vote gotta go to anxiety for making it more personal...
holla back if you need me to further explain or do a verse break down.. im kinda tired right now

Restricted 07-28-04 10:43 PM

He Had No Personals LOL...Just Assumptions..

Wow..Get OUtta Here Your Wack...

~R~

PoLiFicK 07-28-04 10:51 PM

This Was A Dope Battle Straight Up Feeling Both Of Your Verses

Anexity-You Came NiCe You Had Some Good Personals Couple Lines That Made Me Laugh So Pretty NiCe Drop....

Opener..R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...

Laughter LOL Nice 9/10

BestLine..You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...

9.3/10 Good..

Closer..Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...

^^ NiCe Personal But Didnt Finish It..7.6/10 Kinda Weak

~R~NiCe Drop Verse Was Sick Made Me Laugh On And Off Hott Shit....

Opener..Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb..

Nice Open..9.1/10

Bestline..By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..

Laughter ^^ NiCe Punch...9.4/10

Closer..Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..

LMFAO...^^ 9.7/10 Funny Shit...

Winner~R~....Anxiety Props On Your Drop playBoy....

anxiety 07-28-04 10:55 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Re$TricTed
He Had No Personals LOL...Just Assumptions..

Wow..Get OUtta Here Your Wack...

~R~


Yo im done with this beef so dont mistake this for dragging it on... But how did i have no personals? You once nominated yourself for almost every award... You were once considered the best... You once impersonated shady... You told someone that DR votes is a whack excuse, and then said what is in that quote to looch... You talked about making a thread to see if people want you out of phase one... Hmm... Seems like pretty much every line has one... No beef dawg... Just saying...

Ca'lam 07-28-04 11:15 PM

~R~, i aint got shit against you.. i just wont ryde you.. he did have personals.. your a panzy for lashin out just because i didnt vote for you.... stop that girly shit.. be a man and except votes when they dont go your way, and enjoy them when they do.. tired of lil bitches whining aobut hate votes and shit.. my votes are fair and deserving.... Get over it.

For$akeN 07-28-04 11:57 PM

Anxiety's Drop:


R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...
hhahaha liked the pikachu line 2nd line was good
but not as well done as the 1st lines 7.5/10

Cant Impersonate the Impersonator? Restricted lately has been angry...
Since you failed to Impersonate, seems the impersonators Slim Shady...
hhahhaha nice its pretty good you got ill flow mayn.....7/10
Your tellin people that saying you lost to DR votes is a whack excuse...
Refresh my memory, but isnt that what u said when you lost to looch...
wow....personals good good..........8/10
You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...
it hit him but not that hard it was simple but
complex I can't even understand myself lol 6.5/10

Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...
nice nice personals true I believe??????8/10

OVERALL: 8.4/10 ILL FLOW


Re$tricted's Drop:


Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb..
a personal nice nice opener 7/10
This Dude Was Meant To Be Sonned Since Birth..Ya Mom Bothered and Wild..
I Would've Had My Child Aborted Before I Ever Fathered Your Style..
wow I like it 7/10
By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..
not feeling this one much because you know
disease lines are played mayn.....6/10

Watch The Pixels Scream As I Make Your System Bleed Glitches..
I Hope Your Pussy's Trimmed And Clean..Cauase I Tend To Eat Bitches..
haha pretty good mayn liked the punch 6.5/10
Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..
whoa!!! this was hott 8/10


OVERALL: 7.5/10 GOOD FLOW ASWELL


VOTE: ANXIETY NICE BATTLE HERE MAYN...

For$akeN 07-29-04 12:01 AM

oh ya forgot do a vote on my battle link in sig going in circles.....

Sir Cedrych 07-29-04 12:24 AM

good battle one of the best i actually read on this site

anyways

anxiety u had some hard punches incorporated within ur verse
nice concepts and a few personals
ur font size is gay tho and i had to wear glasses for it
ur structure is decent but the quoting is quite gay

r-rated
u concepts of punches were alil better
some quotable lines but i wont get that in depth
ur personals were nice too
and ur color is gay

in the end i think r took this his punches were more direct and the structure was better

avoid the elipsises yall

anxiety 07-29-04 01:01 AM

Elipses? What... You mean... dont put three periods after everthing...

Da Vinci 07-29-04 02:46 AM

Anxiety's Drop:


R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...

- You should have maybe posted a link or somthing just so there is not confusion, just a suggestion this was a funny ass opener
8/10

Cant Impersonate the Impersonator? Restricted lately has been angry...
Since you failed to Impersonate, seems the impersonators Slim Shady...

-This had nice wordplay, but the punch seemed a little distant,
7/10

Your tellin people that saying you lost to DR votes is a whack excuse...
Refresh my memory, but isnt that what u said when you lost to looch...

This bar is a nice personal, and a consistent punch, nothing overly surprising just a straight up punch.
6.5/10

You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...

-This was one of my favorite just cause it's a very creative personal,
8/10

Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...

This was a strong closer, and a deadly personal no question why I'm give'n this bar a
9/10

OVERALL: 38.5/50 This was a tight knit verse the personal's were hitting hard, you could tell there was some static getting brought to the surface.


Re$tricted's Drop:


Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb...

-Nice punch, this I thought started a little slow, you seemed to really build off each bar after this, I didn't see a lot of your creativity comming through on this bar,
7/10

This Dude Was Meant To Be Sonned Since Birth..Ya Mom Bothered and Wild..
I Would've Had My Child Aborted Before I Ever Fathered Your Style..

-Nice wordplay this really enhanced the punch, and creativty was there as well
7.5/10

By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..

The first bar was kinda plain, and second finished the punch off, okay,, probably average,
7/10

Watch The Pixels Scream As I Make Your System Bleed Glitches..
I Hope Your Pussy's Trimmed And Clean..Cauase I Tend To Eat Bitches..

- I like the wordplay on this bar, it seemed to enhance the flow which as you are aware, tends to make the punch hit harder,
8/10

Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..

-Damn, ya dont make it easy this was just as good as his finsher, when you come this fresh it's easy to see why ya get a 9 on this bar.

Let me add this up...

37.5/50

Damn, I hate it when they end up that close I think it makes the loss tougher to take, maybe it's just me but it's a pretty good example of just how close this battle was haven't seen the voting yet but I bet this one is gonna go down to the wire, it was just to close to call.


Vote removed.. both add up to 38.5

Tempa 07-29-04 02:56 AM

Anxiety - Nice verses....you had some good punches in there and ya structure was on point...easy to read all tha way through...the impersonator punche was good and ur closer his...overall a nice drop...8/10

Restricted - Real nice drop on ur part also.....good structure...your best punch was tha one bout eatin bitches......impressive work there.....but i'm goin wit anxiety....you both had hard hitten punches but he had more....hot drop....7.7/10

Vote: Anxiety

Restricted 07-29-04 09:25 AM

Aiyo Divinci....

How Da Hell YOu Gonna Vote But Not Even Add The Tallies Up Right...

My Score Equalled Up To 38.5....LMAO....

So You Need To Edit Ya Vote On Da Poles Or Whichever...

I'll Just Have It Removed Myself..

~R~

SPuLâ„¢ 07-29-04 10:07 AM

yea, this was a real dope battle here. I agree, it is one of the best on this site so far.

Anxiety, dope drop, man. You had some nice sick punches. Some hti hard, but some didn't hit hard too. But overall you did a tight job in this category. For your flow, it was pretty tight man. I don't think it ever went off. Tight shit. But you didn't really have that many personals. But overall, you still had a sick ass verse. I give you a 9/10

R-Rated, dope drop to you too. You also had dope punches. But I feel yours hit way harder than his. And you really had none that hit weak. You did a tight ass job here. Your flow was sick too. It didn't go off either. But damn, this was a hotv ersee. 9.5/10

v/R no hate. sick ass battle

anxiety 07-29-04 11:26 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by SPuL
yea, this was a real dope battle here. I agree, it is one of the best on this site so far.

Anxiety, dope drop, man. You had some nice sick punches. Some hti hard, but some didn't hit hard too. But overall you did a tight job in this category. For your flow, it was pretty tight man. I don't think it ever went off. Tight shit. But you didn't really have that many personals. But overall, you still had a sick ass verse. I give you a 9/10

R-Rated, dope drop to you too. You also had dope punches. But I feel yours hit way harder than his. And you really had none that hit weak. You did a tight ass job here. Your flow was sick too. It didn't go off either. But damn, this was a hotv ersee. 9.5/10

v/R no hate. sick ass battle


Lol... I had a personal every bar homie... Its straight though... Lets get some more votes... And... Feel free to nominate this shit :thumbup: ...

KillaCamFlow 07-29-04 01:06 PM

I gotta think R won this battle i think his multies and wordplay wasgood in this verse..it was not as strong as he normally comes but ti was enough to win....anxiety ur verse was good but i think it slacked wit a few of the punches....Re$ had some good Punches and....but had no personals but i think the puncheslines picked up with them......an u need to work on doing the personals and wording...a littel better....but nice battle though

Willa 07-29-04 02:19 PM

R was up in the awards thread, only saying his own name like Pikachu...
But from the opinions other vets have, seems no one agrees with you...
ok opener i wasnt feelin the pikachu part 7/10
Cant Impersonate the Impersonator? Restricted lately has been angry...
Since you failed to Impersonate, seems the impersonators Slim Shady...
ok ive never seen this a link would b nice ok very good punch if its true? 7/10
Your tellin people that saying you lost to DR votes is a whack excuse...
Refresh my memory, but isnt that what u said when you lost to looch...
nice personal dawg thats better 9.5/10
You were once considerd the best, no one here could take you down...
Now when people put u at the top, cant explain how sad that sounds...
kinda basic pretty good punch 8/10
Interesting how u offered to make a poll to get you out of phase one...
And after a few of our members bitched at you, you never made one...
he made it didnt he? 8/10
flow no flaws 10/10
complexity 8/10 wasnt the average verse u c around here lol but there were a few lines that were pretty basic
u had great personals id like 2 c work on multis
57.5/70

Changed Ya Name..You're Signed In..But What You Trying To Prove?
Cause You Was Getting Disresepcted Back When I Was A Newb..
good personal a did get disrespected cause he liked to talk shit lol 8/10
This Dude Was Meant To Be Sonned Since Birth..Ya Mom Bothered and Wild..
I Would've Had My Child Aborted Before I Ever Fathered Your Style..
tight punch 8/10
By The Way You Ducking..It's Obvious You Need Protection..
Cause The Illest You Ever Got Was Coppin A Yeast Infection..
that was hella funny dawg lmao 9/10
Watch The Pixels Scream As I Make Your System Bleed Glitches..
I Hope Your Pussy's Trimmed And Clean..Cauase I Tend To Eat Bitches..
lmao 9/10
Your Bitten Pre-Write's Are Ripped With Vicious Heartlessness..
Sorry Kid but You're About As Live As Abortion Clinic Garbage Is..
1 again funny 9/10
flow good 10/10
complexity 8.5/10 seen better from u
u need more personals and multis
64/70

so im given it to r no disrespect cause ur both my bois anxiety ive seen much improvement by u nice verse


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