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For$akeN vs phatinum
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-31-04 at 07:40 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 07:41 PM.
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For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 07:42 PM.
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yo punk ill eat you 4 lunch fell the crunch yuor dat wossy on da side line wid a 4 inch pussy ill crumble you like a cookie i might still b a rookie but im still that leathal kid on the block and ya times runnin out yourll b gone in sixty seconds tick tock ill put 9 shots like tupac but straight to your jaw im gonna take da left to the exit door understand you lost this battle stunned i take a gulp of air wen i spit just before i run look around this aint no fun you betta think twice before i get a gun
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self-glorification lines is how this damn kid was a made...
this boy couldn't blow up on the scene if he was a grenade... phatinum....you ain't phat you couldn't rap if you tried... you rhymes couldn't be in my "division" if you could divide... wouldn't let you re-cord in a studio if he remade a string... you can't add up to me even if you were fuckin' "A-Ccount-Ing"... *a string is a cord fam..... remade a string=re-cord and I hope you are can see my last line was wordplay on counting... |
Voted For: For$akeN
Battle Verse 1: Good Structure Flowed Ok, Punches Hit, The The " " Dont Make Ya Verse Any Better..... Battle Verse 2: Your Structure Was Bad, And You Punches Were Weak And Wordplay Was Played.... Punches: 1 Flow: 1 Wordplay: 1 Metaz: Tie Multis: Niether Originality: 1 Structure: 1 Final Vote: Battle Verse 1 Return Favor With Honest Vote Tourn Vs KroNuz (2 Bar Punchline) |
This was feedback posted for For$akeN
Who is Who how am i suppose to tell!!!!!!
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you are supposed to vote for the person you think did better
and you can tell if you saw my structure before................ |
uppin 4 votes............................................. ...................................... |
Voted For: For$akeN
fors$aken had this one cuz he came wit harder punches. thats all Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin sleepers im getting pissed mayn............................................
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uppin 4 votes again............................................. .......... |
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Voted For: For$akeN
Dis battle is straght up obvious For$aken took this one beacause of wordplay,punchlines,structure, and flow All of which phat did not have or at least not visible itcould have been a little longer though 8/10 (no offense ofcourse) Phat ur structure was messed up Im just sayin dat it would have been a pretty good verse if u had a good enough structure STRUCTURE MEANS ALOT!!! 4/10 A could yall hook me up wit a vote da website is in my sig or else its on the first page of Font Lines Black Pantha vs. Toon |
Voted For: For$akeN
This verse was much stronger- Stronger wordplay- better punches - all around on a MUCH MUCH MUCH higher level than your opponent and thats the just the truth... 1 - Vote For$aken |
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Voted For: For$akeN
For$aken, hands down. Bro, before you even explained your raps at the end of your drop I understood fully, and that was some raw shit. I like you wordplay, but Phatinum, you just really need to work on your style and come with better punches next time. Either of you wanna battle holla at me. Vote-For$aken Yo, return the favor y'all: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139283 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138907 |
Voted For: phatinum
I was feelin Phatinum on this one. His flow and structure was on point I could fuck wit it. His punches was hittin hard I was feelin them. For$aken ya flow was on point too but in my opinion ya flow was kinda tired. Ya punches aint hit that hard to me. |
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Voted For: For$akeN
i had to give it to forsaken. betta flow and punches. platinum you need some more personals and ya structure is f'ed up. overall good battle but i had to give it to my man forsaken. Yo could yall show me some love in my battles Me vs Helter Skelter http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139991 Me vs Sin http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139911 Me vs Robkilla http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139783 Good battle |
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