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Da Prodigy vs Intro`
Battle Rules:
10 Lines Reg rules Blind spit Must checkin. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-28-04 at 10:23 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Intro` has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 09:54 PM.
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Da Prodigy has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 09:55 PM.
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checkin in
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So, Da Prodigy, when did ya become a spy yo? ..
Heard you were snoopin for personals in my bio .. Bad move, now you die, better call the morgue-kid .. Cus you bout to 'hit the streets'.. ... faster then kennedy's vital organs .. Freeposts in threads, uh.. need the rules in the mail? .. Dude should just 'rollout' like a giant carpet sale .. His rhymes couldnt get blessed, even if he spit 'Ah-choo' .. Prolly cant even 'back his shit' walkin backwards in poo! .. Kinda sad to see how fast this new Prodigy falls .. Its like the sunset.. we're witnessing the knight-fall! .. Peace. |
His "intro" is wack...an so is his name...
he's insane if he thinks he's anygood in the rap game... i'll spit hard at this loser..leavin him curled up in uh ball... pimp slap him in da mouth his "spit" will get smacked against the wall... he'll get thrashed by the hand....leavin "5" finger "bar" imprints on his cheek... he's uh noob but this is the start of his "5" bar losin streak... i only need 1 but i'll embarris him with 5... hot lines leave em grilled an burned alive... his face is grilled now an hot from da burner... he'll get "beat" in this battle..im Ike he's Turner...(tina turner) his "intro" is gettin bruised an made joke of... he calls it "child abuse" but i say its tough love...(cuz he's a noob..he's still uh kid) |
Voted For: Intro`
Well, seein as this says the other verse was 'checkin in'...I give my vote to Battle Verse # 1 for havin a verse. |
what da hell. u cant vote if i havnt spit yet u idiot
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Ill break down my vote more though.
Intro' structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was good...most of ur punches connected...good personals... Da Prodigy strucuture is good...flow is good as well..u had some multis...wordplay wasnt very good...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall Da Prodigy had more multis...both had a good structure...both had a good flow...Intro' had the better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Intro' gets my vote... VOTE - INTRO' Please return the favor with an honest vote on one of the links in my sig. Thanx. |
u alreay voted u dumb ass..dont try ta act like u can change it...u voted before i even spit
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an how does he win on intro when it doesnt make sense...i wasnt on his bio so what are u talkin bout
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No, i didnt.
You werent supposed to type 'checkin in' into the 'Verse' box. That made it show up like that was ur verse. Everyone else who votes will see the same exact thing. We dont see ur verse when u first vote, because ur dumbass typed in 'checkin in' into that box. dont a bitch about it, it was ur own faggot ass decision to declare to everyone u were checkin in, so now, thats all u see when u first get here. but i re-did my vote with ur verse, and the end result is the name. motherfucker. |
i wuz declarin 2 everyone?ur the only dumb fuck who voted..any one can see that wasnt ma verse...thats y u were the only one
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This was feedback posted for Intro`
good shyt doog i like ur rhymin shyt was real tite 1
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sry wrong thing ma fault
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Voted For: Da Prodigy
lol da prodigy fucked up yah needa re do this lol... his verse was his check in |
^-- only voted for da prod cuz i didnt know i could post on bottom lol... doesnt matter have mods close this.. and post it up agian
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thanks 4 vote...uppin this shit
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Up Up and awayyy..
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lets get this shit closed
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Explaination To My Vote----
Intro- First 2 Lines Werent Nothing But An Ok Flow, Ya Next 2 Lines Kennedy, Concept Was Played But Flowed Good, Ok Metaphor There, Carpet Sale Line Didnt Hit Hard Wasnt An Effective Punch..Next 2 Lines First Part Acho Wasnt Good But Second Line Was Good... Decent Punch... Last 2.. Ok Closer Tho Punch Has Been Used Agianst Him In Other Forms So Kinda Played.. Da Prod- Structure Was Off But.. First 2 Lines, Started Off Ok, But Second Line Was Eh, Not To Good Punch... Second Set Of Lines Wasnt To Strong, Filler...3rd Set Was Decent You Played Off The 5 So You Made It Decent And An Ok Punch...4th Set Ok Beggining Ended Alright Not To Great....5th Concept Was Played But Was Ok... And Last Bar Was Decent... Punches- Prod Flow- Tie Wordplay- Prod Metaphor- Intro Multis- Niether Originality- Niether Structure- Intro.. Final Vote-- Da Prod Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077 |
This was feedback posted for Da Prodigy
Shit This System Sucks When Its Not Done Right....
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uppin...................................
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This was feedback posted for Intro`
WOW.. way to bite your opener off of Intro... against TroyK
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This was feedback posted for Da Prodigy
wow...couldnt even see flow, post in the right spot
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uppin
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get this shit closed.......................................
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can we get some damn votes in
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uppin this shit
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vote on this battle
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can i get some votes on this
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Votes Ppl
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uppin
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uppin
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