phatinum vs Ice Pick
 

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phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 01:06 PM.

ice pick more like a tooth pick y u sucking dick instead of shit your meant to spit you make me sick you wereing a sweater gettin betta o but i i meant you gettin crazy by the minute you spit like a chicken heres the stir up weres da noodles
u look like a fckin poodle wid dat tooth pick sticking out your ass i can c my sons growing up fast im gon leave you broken an half wid ya body crumbled like a biscut u gettin so hyped you jacking off like a criketyo im out go fck your mum tink bout it while u get nightmares while i spit

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 03:19 PM.

My ryme scheme is absolutely flawless//
Your so weak i could kick you in tha ass and you'd be jaw-less//
Insert a revolving crain into your solar plexus//
I travel threw your mind to smack you up cause im mentally ambidextrious//
My attacks are monsterous,Your weak minded cause it hurts to ponder this//
I know your a pussy, but your not Ill just cause you got syphallis//
First post cat wants me,seems mysterious,got me kinda curious//
But once i saw his verse I was like is this kid serious//
This tremendous usage of vocabulary strikes ya membrane//
When i apear in front of you,you turn whiter with fright than Cain(cocain)//
Drill a hole in your chest and spill out your entire essence//
A bunch of X chromosomes proving your male sex preference//(hes gay)
I resume to rip you to shreds of little pieces like conffete//
Slice open your arteries with a paper machete,I enter your mind thrue dreams like freddy//
You think just cause your pore your ghetto//
Nah, the only time you been in the hood is when u had on a sweatshirt//
Your pussy curves when fingered under your skirt,dic in ya ass and u say it dont even hurt//
Your a oddity a fuckin mockery of a species//
Suicidle,so you spitt wack rymes just so i release these//
Hairy an beastly,I hunt you down with extreme ease//
If malaria infected your body with its deadly disease..you still wouldnt be ill//
Hounting you with my torturing visions,my name stays in your mouth like a cavity fill//

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Voted For: Ice Pick

this was a weak battle, both of u need to elevate, and practice

ya'll both came out hard, but ya'll was on each others level...*elevate*, my vote goes to ice pick, cause the structure of the flow was better and the punches hit me harder...

phatinum: nursery rhymes and didnt see anything in your flow to make me want to give u the vote

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get this battle closed

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Voted For: phatinum

man ice pick took this 1 all the way phat man u need too land harder punches and finish the rymes u started other then that ur not bad but i gotta go with ice

v/ice-pick

ahh wtf i wanted to vote for ice pick ice just go report this and say i made a mistake theyll fix it bro

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Voted For: Ice Pick

not a pretty verse but you took it with punches n better structure,your punches were straight,need more complexity in them,yes your structure was better but still looks terrible..work on that.....pc......phat....still need ta elevate alot kid..your gettin better i suggest you battle noobs ta elevate your skills..
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Voted For: Ice Pick

this wasn't even close...

phatinum... straight garbage... no structure, no punches, no meta's, no multi's, no style what-so-ever! don't even bother elevatin'... just quit while you're ahead.

Ice... it didn't really take much to beat this guy... structure alone would have done it. punches were better, structure was cool, shyt rhymed, no personals (except for saying his rhymes were wack and he chose you for his first post)... hands down... v/ice

Voted For: Ice Pick

hold the fuck up.did phatinums verse make any sense or rhyme at all?n e ways vote for ice for being twenty times better in every category. ice work on the structure a lil more and you shouldnt be battlin herbs like this, u got a good record. no hate cuz im sure every body else felt the same. hit up the links in the sig. one!