graceful flow vs Word processor
 

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graceful flow has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 12:21 AM.

Word processor has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 12:37 AM.

here i go

i seen sum of your batlles and they all weak//
im beat you just like you do your meat//
your degree of losses can only be measured in sub-zero feet//
i was built ta run niggaz over like ricky williams football cleets//
you must be drunk cuz you cant even type straight lines//
wen u saw me ask yo ta battle you should hit decline//
i dont know where your from,but you'll i tha new york times//
front page, about you get kilt over dumass ryhmez//
when people hear you flow they pull out tha wrap-it-up box//
about as graceful as lil jon and his dreadlocks//

in his profile under krew its says lookin
betta keep tryin..but unlike ya booty your not gonna b tooken

say u live in~THA MIND OF A EVIL GENIUS~
well tell y u don't KNO wut pussy look like...he only seen penis

do u even kno ya age...y u leave dat shit blank
get his~WORD PROCESS(OR)~from skunk...so dats y ya rhymes stank...

thinkin u fire when u ain't...u really just hot
from a FEVER...so dats y u think u~SICK~when u not

but u tryed...n dat not da way u UP ya game
u couldn't even if u had a ELEVATOR...aint dat a shame

shoulda got outta diss battle when u had da chance
n do da~RUNNIN MAN~outta her so u can SAVE YA LAST DANCE

yo lets get sum honest
feed back on diss battle
uppin 4 votes

Voted For: Word processor

You had better punches, structure, flow...everything really, just a tip Word, dont use the //'s very noobish my man

Graceful, stretched out lines which fucked wit da flow, need to come harder with punches, focus on the battle, dont ramble off about crap...try to spell words right "tooken"? straight up stupid playa

Return the favor..link in sig

Voted For: Word processor

better flow the other kidd seemed like his flow was in slow motion...good punches nothin special..but enough to get you my vote

Voted For: graceful flow

i gotta give this battle to graceful flow the punches were both ight but his hit harder. structure and flow were b oth ight except word processor need to make his rhymes less basic
holl at me n return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136612
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136648
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650

Voted For: graceful flow

I wasn't impressed by either but this verse had better puches personal but it was sloppy ur structure I don't like and the way u overexaggerate ur punches like 'SICK' and 'ELEVATOR'
they were played.
return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043

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aight don sleep on this battle ya'll
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uppin for votes

Voted For: Word processor

Hot shit, both had smokin personals and punches but gotta go with graceful flow, he had bit more personal stuff, checked ya profile real good and killed you with your own shit.Both ya flow was str8, vocab was kool...nice battle

^shit erm i voted for wrong guy, wanted to vote for graceful flow (check my explination), how do get this undone


Fixed

Voted For: Word processor

word good struture but your flow was type hard to catch.your vocab and punches need some work and your disses were ok.grace your flow is too strech and your or your structure need serious help.you had no punches at all and no good disses your wordplay and vocab were also lacking so word gets this with a better verse

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don't sleep on this shit lets get some dam votes

Voted For: Word processor

opener - word, haha funny shit...
closer - Graceful, wasnt really feelin Words
punches - Word, gracefuls were played, not original
personals - Graceful, most of his verse was all personals
metas - Word, had better metas in my opinion
multis - Word, had'em in first 2 bars
vocab - word, gracefuls biggest word was elevator...which is what he should be doin (elevating)

Graceful: Most of your stuff was played, and the stuff that wasnt was kinda stupid cause most of your punches obviously revolved around you reading his profile...you can do better than that, elevate with multis/metas, vocab/especially punches.

Word: you took this one man...I felt your verse was a lot stronger because you has great structure, multis, and way harder punches. Elevate with better personals and maybe harder punches, good job tho man...props...

please leave vote with honest opinion and leave non-DQable Feedback as I did for you...help me close this shit man... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141105

Voted For: Word processor

Ok, both styles were a little simple, but Word processor came with better punches - I like that reference to Dave Chappelle (the wrap it up box). Graceful, your punches didn't really connect - they didn't end the same way you set 'em up. But no hate though, good battle you 2.

Reutrn the favor, honest votes only:
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