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*Skeem* vs Lil-trip
Battle Rules:
3 Bars... No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Chea....Le's Go Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-29-04 at 05:39 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
*Skeem* has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 05:10 PM.
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Lil-trip has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 05:35 PM.
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Kid Them Elementary Punches Ya Bringin Ain't Enuff To Knock Out A Second Grader,
All Of Ye Raps Stink To Say The Least|And They End Now|So We Won't Smell Em Later/ Kid Ye Crap At This|Cuz Ya Shyt Ain't Ever Getting Sweet|So I Suggest You Quit The Rap Ye Not Ready To Hang Wit Me Kid, Cuz I'll Put Bullets To Ya Head Like A Wizards Cap / Ye Not Seen Wit The Man|So Like Dykes At Computer Stores|I'm Givin Ya A System Scan/ Ye Punches Ain't Hittin Me Kid|Like Swingers Wit They Eyes Closed|I'm Rapin Ye Text, Ye Compare To A Prostitute|The Way I'm Fuckin You Up Quickly|You'll Neva Get My Respect/ |
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The Second Bar- Wizards And Bullets were The Names Of Washington Teams.. |
Everytime bitches "Scheme" There left with Unrealistic Dreams
Like battlin real G's homie I send bitches for the "Halibut" up Streams! lol homie 3 bars thats as real as your Invisible Avatar Im hittin both your Upper n Pussy "Lips" n aim to leave Sustained Scars! You got a Glass Jaw Hanging over your Chin, how you think you ever had a chance at a win? 6 Commadment which comes after 5 clearly states that lieing is a sin... Hollah...Lil trip |
Voted For: Lil-trip
I was just feelin trip betta skeemz was more elemantry and basic so my vote goes to skeem |
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upping for votes, holla back wit some honest luv n votes, peace
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Voted For: Lil-trip
Vote Goes To Lil Trip.... Better Punches And More Original Concepts.... Some Of Skeems Were Played And Some Punches Werent As Effective As Lil Trips.. Punches- Lil Trip Flow- Tie Wordplay- Tie Metaphors- Skeem Multis- Niether Originality- Lil Structure- Tie Final Vote---- Lil Trip Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077 |
my second bar murdered this kid..lol
0-2 uppin' |
Voted For: Lil-trip
ima go wit TRIP his flow was better SKEEM's was 2 stretched out made it horrible u need 2 elevate v/LIL-TRIP vote 4 deez battles http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138339 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136487 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137991 peace |
Voted For: Lil-trip
Nice flow....words, punches, a lil bit of multis, and vocab.....ya shit was nice cuz.....you got my vote Trip...aye, hit up my battle...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137727 |
Voted For: *Skeem*
Punches:Skeem Multi's:Skeem Opener: Skeem Closer:Lil Trip Personals:Lil Trip, I guess Flow: Skeem Structure: Skeem, By a Little Rhyems: Lil Flip Overall Ill'ness(my own Category):Lil Flip Best Lines: Skeem: Ye Compare To A Prostitute|The Way I'm Fuckin You Up Quickly|You'll Neva Get My Respect/ Lil Flip: You got a Glass Jaw Hanging over your Chin, how you think you ever had a chance at a win? 6 Commadment which comes after 5 clearly states that lieing is a sin... Skeems Rated: 6/10 Lil Flip Rated: 5/10 Summary: Skeems had a tight Verse, just gotta work on harder Punches, and better wordplay, and Come up wit some personals Lil Flip: Aight yo, you hade a good verse, but if yah Put a few More bars in there, it would have been alot tighter, and i think you would have taken this battle, Vote: Skeem Good battle Guys Keep it up Return the Fav...... |
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Thats how you lose...you put all your emphesis n best line into one bar...its gotta be consistent...n thats why not one of my bars, but all "3" of em where ontop of yours.. Uppin for votes |
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uppin for votes, lets get some honest feedback n votes
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Voted For: *Skeem*
vote to skeem...trip came hard, but his punches were choppy, yet creative, but just not worded right...skeem came hard from start to finish and his punches hit harder |
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uppin for votes, holla back with some votes n feedback |
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uppin for votes wit some honest feedback, holla back |
Voted For: *Skeem*
For the pure fact Skeem had punches both verses disappointed me Lil trip made more sense seemed like he had an aim but he lacked punches and thats what gets you the win. Holla back http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982 |
Voted For: *Skeem*
Well I gotta say Skeem your bar's were so stretch I was close to not giving you the win. That said, lil trip your punches were more creative but they lacked the punch. Skeen your punches were constantly hitting but with your bar's that long it really ruined the flow and as well made this seem like I was reading 6 bars. All in all this battle goes to scheema becuase ofbetter punches, but not flow, but puches win battles. Return the favour guy's the link is at the bottom of my sig. Thanks, good job both of you. |
Voted For: Lil-trip
good battle u both did yall thing i liked ur hits they were more unique and original yall both did good doe good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Lil-trip
it was short but your shit was fya cool verse and you were harder and flow was great. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Lil-trip
this was a close battle but my vote goes for trip with a better structure and flow cuz errthing else was tied up. im not sure if skeem was tryin to make it a twista kinda rap but the lines had too many syllables dood. ok no hat fair vote i showed votin luv now show me sum |
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