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A.M.O.K 07-29-04 06:51 PM

Da Prodigy vs A.M.O.K
 
Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-01-04 at 06:51 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 07-29-04 06:54 PM

A.M.O.K has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 06:54 PM.

System 07-29-04 06:55 PM

Da Prodigy has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 06:55 PM.

A.M.O.K 07-29-04 06:56 PM

Enter A.M.O.K the unearthly, intial contact is deadly
Make a fool of you?Hasn't Jay Z clowned Prodigy already?,
Weren't ready, clearly thought I don't know how to battle
We'll never see 'eye to eye' cause your not on my LEVEL!,
Grovel, beg to get ahead, my lines burst through rhymes
Like I outsprinted a guy w/ my watch, I'm ahead of my time,
Let's rewind, beat me?Crap talk in your raps consistent
Your chances of winning is ZERO like your audio statistics,
Closed coffin bitches, I came, saw, destroyed this nitwit
Can't snatch a win from the Jaws of defeat.. if you in with it,

Bye Bye again....

Desipher 07-29-04 07:14 PM

yo/A.M.O.K's bars are small like da condoms he wears...
no complexity 2 his game or da "spit" his tongue bears...
this guys game is like salad...nothin but "fillers" of "herbs"...
just like take out food he always gets "served"...
he's not not uh real rapper..he just wants 2 be like his peers..
what he really wants 2 do is be uh stage dancer 4 brittney spears...

somebody help this rookie...he's needs uh life line...
he didnt mean 2 battle me cuz all his bars are mine...
its 2 late now...its gone be like chess in hell...
except that your the knight an ur takin ur first "L"..(his first loss an thats how knights move in chess)..
i got room 4 one more bar..even though ur in jail already...
u had ur stuff pre written on paper but u just got "ripped" 2 confetti.....

Desipher 07-29-04 07:21 PM

uppin dis shit

KroNuz 07-29-04 07:41 PM

Voted For: A.M.O.K

Amok- Structure Was Good Flow Was Decent And Punches Connected

Da Prod- Structure Also Was Good, Flow Was Good, And Punches Connected But Some Were Played

Punches- Amok
Personals- Da Prod
Flow Tie
Multis- Niether
Wordplay- Da Prod
Metaphors- Da Prod
Structure- Amok
Originality- Amok

Final Vote-- Amok
Return Favor With Honest Vote:
Vote On A Link In My Sigg

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

A.M.O.K 07-29-04 08:28 PM

Uppeth, cause I'm nice

A.M.O.K 07-29-04 10:02 PM

Might aswell D'Q this kids vote on my other battle

A.M.O.K 07-30-04 12:46 AM

Hurry up & vote, I'll get the lastest D12 album for your troubles

A.M.O.K 07-30-04 02:35 AM

OK OK... no one feeling D12?I'll throw Jada's new LP at chu

Magic5 07-30-04 03:12 AM

Voted For: A.M.O.K

Da Prodigy
structure is pretty good...flow is on target...no multis...u attempted wordplay, but it was either played or wack...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

A.M.O.K.
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay is pretty good...some of ur punches connected...good personal on his name...

Overall
both had a good structure...both had a good flow...A.M.O.K. had more multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...A.M.O.K. gets my vote...

VOTE - A.M.O.K.

Please return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig.

Thanx.

A.M.O.K 07-30-04 02:05 PM

Uppeth

A.M.O.K 07-30-04 08:46 PM

Wow... it's sunny, what a nice day to vote

D-ICED 07-30-04 08:57 PM

Voted For: Da Prodigy

daprodigy takes it with more personals stronger punches and a better flow .amok was good but his punches were too weak and it seemed more freestyle while daprodigy sat a little bit and put his toghther better.

A.M.O.K 07-30-04 11:49 PM

Quote:
daprodigy takes it with more personals

He didn't hav a single personal

Anymore illiterate voters?

DV8 07-31-04 12:14 AM

Voted For: Da Prodigy

vote/da prodigy
aight good battle ya both came fairly strong..props ta both mc's,first verse was better i think had punches that connected n good wordplay,i found the whole verse ta be a lil more complex than da second 1..2nd verse was good but ya opener was'nt as nice..i thought it had better vocab but also had a forced ryme in there"consistent/statistics"also had some nice wordplay...it was a close battle but im gonna give this 1 ta da prodigy,no hate

raw killa 07-31-04 12:30 AM

This was feedback posted for Da Prodigy
 
this new votin system suck's ass fo real n e way welcome 2 da crew good battle but since im crew cant vote good verse though holla back

MaNiPuLaTiOn 07-31-04 04:18 AM

Voted For: A.M.O.K

amok
Enter A.M.O.K the unearthly, intial contact is deadly
Make a fool of you?Hasn't Jay Z clowned Prodigy already?,
^^^WEAK
Weren't ready, clearly thought I don't know how to battle
We'll never see 'eye to eye' cause your not on my LEVEL!,
^^PLAYED
Grovel, beg to get ahead, my lines burst through rhymes
Like I outsprinted a guy w/ my watch, I'm ahead of my time,
^^PLAYED
Let's rewind, beat me?Crap talk in your raps consistent
Your chances of winning is ZERO like your audio statistics,
^^WEAK PERSONAL
Closed coffin bitches, I came, saw, destroyed this nitwit
Can't snatch a win from the Jaws of defeat.. if you in with it,
^^^BLAH...WEAK

PROD
yo/A.M.O.K's bars are small like da condoms he wears...
no complexity 2 his game or da "spit" his tongue bears...
^^NO
this guys game is like salad...nothin but "fillers" of "herbs"...
just like take out food he always gets "served"...
^^^OK..KINDA PLAYED
he's not not uh real rapper..he just wants 2 be like his peers..
what he really wants 2 do is be uh stage dancer 4 brittney spears...
^^^HORRIBLE

somebody help this rookie...he's needs uh life line...
he didnt mean 2 battle me cuz all his bars are mine...
^^OK
its 2 late now...its gone be like chess in hell...
except that your the knight an ur takin ur first "L"..(his first loss an thats how knights move in chess)..
^^DECENT CONCEPT
i got room 4 one more bar..even though ur in jail already...
u had ur stuff pre written on paper but u just got "ripped" 2 confetti.....
^^GUD IDEA BUT WEAK.

OVERALL WEAK BATTLE.IM GONA GIVE IT TO AMOK...
EVEN THOUGH NEARLY ALL HIS PUNCHES WERE PLAYED..
AT LEAST THEY HIT HARDER THAN PRO`S...

PRO-HAD SUM NICE CONCEPTS/ORIGINAL PUNCHES, BUT THEY WERE JUS WEAK...

A.M.O.K 07-31-04 12:34 PM

Rofl




























WAKE UP!!!!
http://www.personal.psu.edu/users/b...e/Wake%20Up.JPG

A.M.O.K 07-31-04 07:26 PM

Pick the blue pill
http://pooka.nunanet.com/~wamphyri/...ChoiceHands.jpg
C'mon, Neo did


































Look at him now
http://www.lnreview.co.uk/images/art/brandon.jpg

Desipher 07-31-04 10:26 PM

uppin 2 put this guy down

Desipher 07-31-04 11:15 PM

uppin

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-01-04 12:16 AM

Voted For: Da Prodigy

DaProdigy cause he had a better overal all around.

A.M.O.K 08-01-04 12:32 AM

Upping for more votes.....

















































Matter of fact, I'm bored of upping this battle.....

Bye bye

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-01-04 05:24 AM

my votes for Da Prodigy allaround he was the best in my veiw

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Desipher 08-03-04 08:36 PM

upinn this shit

A.M.O.K 08-03-04 09:08 PM

Rise

Desipher 08-03-04 11:51 PM

can we get some damn votes

DRAG~ON 08-04-04 12:57 AM

Voted For: A.M.O.K

damn real close battle
but i give it 2 A.M.O.K
his flow made his wordplay
n punches a lil harder
n barely won cuz i thought
PRODIGY came just as hard
but dats how my vote turned
out
v/A.M.O.K.
vote on my battles
DRAG~ON vs killah
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138650

phatinum
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668

ice pick
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138867

intensify effect
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139173

don
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290

thanx
1

Desipher 08-04-04 01:49 PM

uppin

Desipher 08-04-04 07:38 PM

uppin

Kayem 08-07-04 04:47 AM

Voted For: Da Prodigy

Da Prodigy
structure is good..flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is well done...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent...

A.M.O.K
...structure is well presented...flow is there and works well...some really nice multies multis...wordplay is decent...none of ur punches really connected...some o.k good personals..


Overall
I think that Da prodigy got this one he jus hit a lot harder had some really good personals although a.m.o.k had some nice multies

vote:da prodigy

Desipher 08-10-04 03:15 PM

uppin this battle

Desipher 08-11-04 01:42 PM

uppin this battle

Big Boy 08-11-04 09:11 PM

This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K
 
Nice verse I cant vote but dis is goin to be da first one I vote on

_Cass_ 08-11-04 09:51 PM

Voted For: Da Prodigy

im gone have 2 vote 4 rodigy..he had beter flow..all amok did wuz force words together that didnt ryme

Desipher 08-11-04 09:57 PM

can i get 1 more vote people..damn stop all dat sleepin

Desipher 08-12-04 06:01 PM

1 more vote damn

Desipher 08-13-04 08:49 AM

1 more vote ppl


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