GEE vs phatinum
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-01-04 at 11:02 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 11:03 PM.
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GEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-04 11:14 PM.
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yo i think your brain dead your heads holo your echos so quiet dey dont follow spit lyrics cheep i bet they borrowed if u dnt finsh i stop spittin tomorrow if i colapse ill giv ya da mic in my grave start turnin this nigga on the beach im comin threw like a tidal wave just turn to the next page release my rage locked up in a cage open up the pad lock im bout 2 crck your skull on the block im leavin you stunned while you still in shock
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I lyrically diss you, "cap" on you like plastic bottles,
this bitch "poses" with "fakes" more than big tit models. Target is the face, "punch"lines hit ya well, and leave ya lips fatter than Dave Chapelles. I preach my rhymes "loudly", to anybody that loves it, in the "game", he's "Melo"*, like the Denver Nuggets. Callin me out..Bitch...you just signed your death sentence. cuz i'll "rip" you faster than a greedy kid with Christmas presents. Kill you metaphorically, close this battle like a finished book, Nobody can feel ya "punches", cuz I diminished ya "hook". I'm a rebel, my range fa rappin like a female's treble, I'm like ya "ceiling", cuz I'm always over ya "level". Kill you with the heat lyrics, inferno blastin at ya like blaze, roast you and toast you, like an albino under sun rays. Poppin you like a bag of Lays, lyrical slaugher with one phrase, water from all the bays, cant amount to all the bullshit you say. My lines come sick and steadier,"mass" is what you lackin-son, ta make his bars hard and "heavier", this stupidass tried stickin "phat-in-um." *Carmelo Anthony, "Melo" = Mellow: quiet, or not active. |
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Voted For: GEE
GEE FLOW GEE PERSONALS BARELY GEE PUNCHES GEE FOR BETTER EVERTHING I REALLY DONT LIKE THIS BITCH GEE BUT I GOTTA VOTE FAIR EVEN THOUGH HE DOESNT VOTE TO GEE |
Gee takes this in all catagories, Phatinum your at about my level we should battle, but anyways, this battle was really one sided Gee takes this with better wordplay and better punches. Sorry to say but I think he was just to experienced for ya P, you and me should battle cause our skill level's are the same I think were both newbs.
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GEE can you return the favour please the link is in my sig.
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Voted For: GEE
DAmn, GEE your goood i love your drop. Nice personals and pnuches all very hard hitteri also liked your structure and flow it was aswesome. phatinum naw yours was shit, you should have structured it and gave it better flow but yur pnuches were weak anyways |
Voted For: GEE
nice verse gee you took this in all cats,you had no real competition,nice wordplay n meta's..i liked da albino line...you came hard da whole way with good vocab..structure was a bit off but i dint find it hurt ya flow that much...phatinum i think ya gotta battle weaker cats n try ta get some format in your verse,don't treat a battle like a freestyle..there alot different..pc return da vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...784#post1452784 |
This was feedback posted for phatinum
stop coying your ryhms you said that the last battle i went to
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Voted For: GEE
aRE YOU FUCKIN SERIOUS? PHATINUM, THAT WAS YOU VERSE? pUNCHES METAS STRUCTURE PERSONALS OPENER CLOSER aLL OF IT GOES TO GEE, NO LIE, NO HATE, NO D/R, NO NOTHIN.. PHATINUM, YOU NEED TO ELEVATE A LITTLE BIT.. GEE CAME BETTER WITH FLOW, AND HIT YOU HARDER.. YOU HAD HORRIBLE STRUCTURE, WITH NO CONTENT EITHER.. NO HATE, THAT'S WHY I VOTE FOR GEE.. YO, DO ME A FAVOR A RETURN WITH AN HONEST DROP IN THIS BATTLE, THANX CUZ.. PEACE.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138484 |
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Voted For: phatinum
platinum wins cuz harder punshes and low was not whack Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Are you serious. Fuckin dickridin bitch.^
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Voted For: GEE
my vote goes to gee he ripped plat IMO....gee had punches after punches on top of punches...he had da flow too......vote gee |
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