amayze vs BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
 

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amayze has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 01:00 AM.

~PUFFIN BLUNTS`n` jays...cumin STRAIGHT OUTTA S`TOON
lets me kno brotherp.a.r.a. into~trees~like a~baboon~

wit no battle under ya belt...u call ya self a~FLYWEIGHT~
just cuz u light as a feather don't mean ya game gone rise o.k.

so stay in yo place like a statue...while i smash
like a potatoe...n do u like ya garbage rhymes...n trash u

da rules say no biting but u clearly did dat
ya rhymes still wack even if u put~FATJOE~it wouldn't b FAT

so stop dat...like vanilla ice tryna rap
n u ain't got GUNS n a~STR8 JACKET~u couldn't b~STRAPPED~

been knew dat...so i got u TRAPped like a RAT
wit no cheese u lactosintolerant so u don't need that

so go back 2 where u from...n neva CUM back
n go sum where cuz now u~OFF~da traxs~JACK~(jack off)

personals
PUFFIN BLUNTS `N` JAYS is n his krew slot

he say he STRAIGHT OUTTA S`TOON

he a FLYWEIGHT
punches
straight jackets is 2 keep your arms strapped up
ppl who r lactosintolerant can't eat dairy product like cheese

a baboon is another monkey
but u guys probably knew all this
just makin sure

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 02:01 AM.

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 02:02 AM.

thats shit yall vote for me heres mine!

I'm tryin to get to the top, Just wont stop, makin my lyrics, tryin not to die, i get high, eye for eye, your shy around me, and you try to get in the crazy cree man i dont no why?. Yer sly when you come home, you go in yer bed and cry cuz you got yer ass kicked by that guy, i ask my self why, you like mary jay bligh. One night you went over there and broung the pain, its not the same you got no aim i dont know yer name eather whata shame you got no game. Its for sure the flame got big when you blammed it on me, thats fuckin lame im gonna get my freind named jermaine. just to get in Da Game.

k here it is

I'm tryin to get to the top, Just wont stop, makin my lyrics, tryin not to die, i get high, eye for eye, your shy around me, and you try to get in the crazy cree man i dont no why?. Yer sly when you come home, you go in yer bed and cry cuz you got yer ass kicked by that guy, i ask my self why, you like mary jay bligh. One night you went over there and broung the pain, its not the same you got no aim i dont know yer name eather whata shame you got no game. Its for sure the flame got big when you blammed it on me, thats fuckin lame im gonna get my freind named jermaine. just to get in Da Game.

guy your not that good im gonna be putting all my rhymes on audio soon and yer gonna go down hard plus im not light i weight 115 and im 5 ft 9 and im 14 goof vote for me im younger

Voted For: amayze

i voted 4 amayze
his structure was way better
n he actually had punches
i didn't kno wtf brotherp.a.r.a. was talkin bout
v/amayze

cuz you dont kno what indains are there the crazy cree

its a gang down where i live they think there gangsta

Voted For: amayze

Brother-your structure is so wack man...it totally fucks up your whole drop..take notes on how people make good drops in the Lyricist league...in other words..elevate

Amayze-suckidy suck sucked, over played punches n wordplay...stck on the gay shit a lot...but your structure and flow was at least decent, so my votes to you

return the favor link in sig

1.Dont try to sway votes you vaginal fairy
2.Flyweight is your rank on Rapverse..what a dumbass lol

thanx once again JUSTIFY
4 an honest vote
still uppin 4 votes

Voted For: amayze

amayze
structure is good...flow is on target...u had tight multis...wordplay was tight...a few, at best of ur punches connected...no good personals..

BrOTheRP .A.R.A.
structure is wack...seperate ur lines man...flow fell off due to the excessive wackness in ur structure...no multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals...amayze had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...better wordplay..and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...amayze gets my vote...

VOTE - AMAYZE

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Thanx.

Voted For: amayze

Amayze Got this byfar Alot he Accually have Structure and Punchlines that Connected and i felt that Punchlines are alwlayhz da Best he had better personals and Flow i think Brotha needs to elavate good battle but vote goes ehre

thanx 4 ya vote
vote 4 sum of my other
battles also

need 1 last vote

fuck you justify yer a dink a big dink yer lucky i aint kno you in real life i would kick yer ass yer probly a nerd wanna beee cyz thats what most peopel are

Voted For: amayze

this battle definetly goes to amayze his flow was all around better n his punches hit a whole lot harder than
BrOTheR. I see what brother was trynna do wit the diff flow style but it really didnt work out for a battle maybe if he perfected it
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