BrOTheRP.A.R.A. vs daillest1
 

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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

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BrOTheRP.A.R.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 03:03 AM.

k hurrs mine

I'm tryin to understand why im not in the band//
caught you in your room wackin it you jizzed all over your hand//.

you called yer gurl asked where she was all as she gave u was the finger//
the last time you seen her was a singer//.

you went out after you got payed//
from the gurl you layed//.

you went out side and bought some bling//
i told you that you got a nice ring//
and asked you where you got that thing//.

crazy thing you are i wanna get you back for what you are//
and crack you in the sack//.

just cuz your a crossdresser//
dont make you any lessor then me or her//.
Now How About That!

daillest1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 03:07 AM.

aiight, yo

see im causin devistation, hurt, pain n elaberation ,
to this manz mental deformitation, u got no rime stabelization,
dog wut im really sayin, iz that yo rimez is nuttin but lyrical laxitation,
ima spiritual- more like a godly rap-creation,
wit tha evilization of satain,
now he persperation, prayin that a few pitty votes ill get em out of tha
self dug grave that he now lays in,
aint i tell u 2 bring it, maby u sholda tooka second 2 listen
so tell me, u called da best... i mean u really aint even that hot
i mean im tha 1 packin tha burners n glocks,
tha moste this man be packin is thermal socks,
turn on tha A/C n cool him off, n thaw heated soft,

battlin me... yea kid u got some balls,
but leave it 2 daillest 2 chop them bitches off,

this is daillest1 baby(girlfriend)im uppin this battle for him...i think my baby won....that other guy doesnt know what he is doing....just incase you dont know....thats me in the~~sig i think its called~

waiting for votes any one read and holla back at us

hey...i need people to vote up on this battle....please....i want to win a battle on here....

Voted For: daillest1

This is the only verse where I see punches thos battle lacked punches but I have to sa this was 'da illest' out of the two Brother you're lackin in the attack this is a battle yea your rhymin but u ain't punchin it's different from an audio battle even then ur verse still was weak ur structure looked newbish so I suggest the pro look bting it together. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043

vote up..

i need some votes...vote up vote up vote up

wheres the votes come vote for me ????????????????

VOTE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!tryin 2 get this battle closed and another win on my record..........dont just look at da battle and leave....vote on this shit~~~

This was feedback posted for daillest1
 

Daillest did it...............................................

Voted For: BrOTheRP.A.R.A.

ima give dis to dailest cause he killed da brotha...... Brotha need to up his game a hole life sentence..

wha da hells up wit da vote???^^^^^^^anyways uppin for diz
"supposed 2 be" KO.......up up uppin diz battle

Voted For: daillest1

I'm givin' this one to daillest. He had better vocabulary and his multis were hot. Brother, you need better punches and just need to work on your structure overall.
Vote - daillest

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Return the favor y'all. 'Preciate it

WHAT THE FUCK......can i get some votes....lookin at this battle everytime i get on is fucking annoying...seeing this battle on my list is startin 2 b frustrating.......vote up vote up//i alwayz return the favor.....

uppin this shit dialleist you should be worried sense this is a tight battle ive got better shit now so look out soon i will be winning battles not losing battles

Voted For: BrOTheRP.A.R.A.

yeh niceeee more flow dan da otha dude ima go wit brother para

Voted For: BrOTheRP.A.R.A.

i giv this vote 2 brotherP.A.R.A cuz he came back frum a long tyme without battlin n he came in diz battle n dominiated hiz shyt wusnt great but he ahd flow n structure....da illest no hate dawg but dat wuznt as gud as i expected i have seeen ya du betta Weak batlte ya 2 Vote-Brother

iight vote a return 4 ma battle........wen ya get a chance.........

Voted For: daillest1

da illest:
wow im feelin your rhymes lyrical laxatation, especially, overall great flow bar the weakest lines (see below). but you gets my vote

hottest line:
see im causin devistation, hurt, pain n elaberation ,
to this manz mental deformitation, u got no rime stabelization,
dog wut im really sayin, iz that yo rimez is nuttin but lyrical laxitation

weakest line:
aint i tell u 2 bring it, maby u sholda tooka second 2 listen
so tell me, u called da best... i mean u really aint even that hot


BrOTheRP.A.R.A.: teheres nothing especially wrong with you flow but no offense dof it sounds a lil rushed. i did like youur them and your raw rhymes were on point but i think you should of tryed readin it thru

strongest line:
I'm tryin to understand why im not in the band//
caught you in your room wackin it
you jizzed all over your hand//.
(im guessing thats how you read it)
weakest line:
you went out side and bought some bling//
i told you that you got a nice ring//
and asked you where you got that thing//

Voted For: BrOTheRP.A.R.A.

man his punches kikced you in the ass lol D i give it to para flow n vocab 5/10 D 3/10

Voted For: BrOTheRP.A.R.A.

you didnt have punches butr yer flow was way better and yer vocab he had weak everthing heres my vote