LyricalOnslaught vs $ Wordman $
 

Battle Rules:

PUNCHLINE BATTLE 2 BARs=4 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
you spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-30-04 at 02:28 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

LyricalOnslaught has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 01:59 PM.

$ Wordman $ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 02:04 PM.

Wordman’s style is fucking ancient, older than the first words of Noah.
My rhymes will have you “wrapped up” like a man strangled with a Boa.
I had already blocked wordman’s winning streak, stopping it to a hault.
Cause Wordman’s luck's going in reverse, but I'll still win by default.

Yo, your Not Up to par With the Punches-I-Invoke
How ya Gonna Say iam a Noob, when yah taking ta lunch-by-Revoke

Desperate For Friend's, every other Thread is a wanted to Join Crew
G, Leave why yah still can, and Put a Application for Blink 182



W/e... Peace

Yo, your Not Up to par With the Punches-I-Invoke
How ya Gonna Say iam a Noob, when yah taking ta lunch-by-Revoke

Desperate For Friend's, every other Thread is a wanted to Join Crew
G, Leave why yah still can, and Put a Application for Blink 182



W/e... Peace

blink 182 lol
ok let the votes come in

yo, iam at work.. thats why it took soo long.. iam suppose to be doing some work.. lol....

uppin.. lets get some votes guys.................. Leave a link

and we'll return the favor yup it good

uppin............................................. ...........

This was feedback posted for $ Wordman $
 

your vocab was poor and punches just didnt come strong, jus a bit of feedback

Voted For: $ Wordman $

vote for word man you had good rhyme
crew and blink 182 thos were some good rhymes

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LOL w/e Upping i kno ill return the favor

Voted For: LyricalOnslaught

i think wordman was talking about punchlines. . . but i didn't see him use em i cant really ase my vote on much cus there ain much in this one. . . but i want to go with paramik because his opener was a punchline and he had multi's
although the end i didnt' quite understand
overall though i think it was better than wordman
nice one . . .

upping two please vote on this NICE punchline battle

Voted For: LyricalOnslaught

I felt Paramik's better. Wordman had a personal but I don't think it was all that good.

Voted For: LyricalOnslaught

zboth dropz was good but i was fellin tha Boa line more. So yung got ma vote. Word ya shit was aiight it jus didnt hit as hard as Paramik.

Voted For: LyricalOnslaught

Paramik wins this with a harder punch. Wordmans didnt hit that hard. P had an even structure too. P gets tha vote.

Vote-Paramik

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ok... i hope everyone knows, that this was a punchline battle...

Voted For: LyricalOnslaught

Yo, your Not Up to par With the Punches-I-Invoke
How ya Gonna Say iam a Noob, when yah taking ta lunch-by-Revoke
i guess a personal, but the hit wasnt that effective un-less its a battle i missed? but either way its still not a hard hit....

Desperate For Friend's, every other Thread is a wanted to Join Crew
G, Leave why yah still can, and Put a Application for Blink 182
slightly better then the first another personal but the hit wasnt strong decent no-lie but u just gott hit harder...

7.0 outta 10


Wordman’s style is fucking ancient, older than the first words of Noah.
My rhymes will have you “wrapped up” like a man strangled with a Boa.
ha nice, good hit flow good and creative...

I had already blocked wordman’s winning streak, stopping it to a hault.
Cause Wordman’s luck's going in reverse, but I'll still win by default.
decent hit, creative was decent but it probley could of been re-worded better but decent...

8.5 outta 10

my vote: paramik