villagepimp vs CarsonJetX2
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-02-04 at 09:17 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

villagepimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 09:18 PM.

CarsonJetX2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 09:19 PM.

Can't tell who's verse?I know wackness when i View it..
An the truth is, Pimp...your worste than both G-Unit's.
An speakin wit honesty, from the heart-u were lost from start
Makin a CD?..please your in Kansas City..pushin Shoppin carts
I'll Leave your dome two-tone'd wit Sony key's or my chrome..
Think about it. You came on RapVerse?...To claim your Throne?
It show's your pathetic, after this u rep IV's an anisthetics
Jet dun said-it...My fists of spit remain in you embedd'd....
Remember this day, You won't start wit shit If u can't back wit spit
This isn't Like the old forums-is it bitch? Now you can't Swallow-it

Sorry I didn't specify the 10-15 lines... but as the call out said... here's my verse

This shit goes way back but You still ain’t learned/
You should’ve known that I will leave u burned/
Rappin’ is a skill that cannot be earned/
But You'll cry for admin when these tables turned/
Carson Jet, AKA Fag, the Boston Net Thug/
Only Beef online so you won’t get mugged/
Nevermind all this fuck you shit you said/
I’m just flat out tellin’ you dogg your dead/
I’ll just pull the trigger to watch you bleed/
Can’t you see, You gave me a reason to Unleash/
And If You believe in Heaven, I’ll send you to hell/
If You believe In Livin’, Meet this Shotgun Shell/
Hos say U can’t aim when U piss on the toilet seat/
But they say I can aim when I’m pissed I’m holdin’ heat/

This was feedback posted for CarsonJetX2
 

Carson won this....

Both you guys didnt really throw any hard punches...

village you get a 5/10 for a simple verse.... there was n complexity in there.. no words used over iike 2 sylables lol...

Carson....6/10..slightly better.but still no punches.. more complex i admit tho...

Complexity was what i had to go on

now how do i vote......

gotta post feed back for Village Pimp now. then u can vote

This was feedback posted for villagepimp
 

How the fuck you gonna reclaim your thrown with this... And you never had a fucking throne... This was the whackest fucking verse in history... I am a little bit worse at rapping after reading this... How about personals? How about unplayed punches? Maybe you should go back to battling on the streets where maybe people dont know how whack you are...

Fuck this battle system... I dont know how to use it...

uppin

Voted For: CarsonJetX2

wow village that was terrible...easily goes to carson eventhough i hate him...yours could have be written in the first battle ever by a 10 year old...seriously 0 wittyness...do you even know what that is?...anyways all categories to carson

lol... I will up this only for Carson... hehe... I didn't really feel like writing anything but since I drug Carson on here I wrote a quick verse so he can get his ego up...

There will be a rematch tho...

Voted For: CarsonJetX2

Carson had punches....personals that hit hard....ome internal rhyme but barely any overall nice verse..................it was more funny than angry and hard punche s but funny and good
Nice flow fa shizzle.............soome metaphours/wordplay


VP- no obvious punches all gangsta shit............elevate lmao.....howd you get that record making verse like htis....no offense but make shure THERES PUNCHES next time....

You can never win wit herbs.

Voted For: CarsonJetX2

carson
opener was great.the next bar the second line wasnt so great but an ok punch.good flwo there.third bar,the diss to rapverse didnt go to good but still it was another ok punch kinda makin him look like a bitch on the net so kind of a personal.fourth bar not much of a punch but added to ur verse cause it had excellent flow.and closer was good wit a good flow.

villagepimp
wat happened u were beffin wit me over u bein a great vet but damn this not vet material.aight ur flow was aight but really almost the whole way through u had filler punches nuthin personal and hard htting.only thing that came close was the boston thug get mugged but the flow there was childish.your verse lacked hardhitting punches and flow.not good at all

v/carsonjet

Voted For: CarsonJetX2

Both of you were decent, but I felt Carsons verse more- his punches were stronger, the kansas city line was kinda humurous, the G Units line made me laugh- village was iight but your punches just didn't match up here.... Vote CarsonKetX2

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Voted For: CarsonJetX2

Ouch, Carson really just brought it to him on this. He wins simply because his wordplay was there, and village had none to speak of, he just called him a fag, the whole verse was just very simplistic. only thing that even resembled wordplay was his closer. No personals, Carson had 1 or 2 that were decent. punches went to him too, he just outclassed village on this one. V/CarsonJetX2