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A.M.O.K vs J_Trooper
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-03-04 at 01:33 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
A.M.O.K has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 01:34 AM.
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J_Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 01:37 AM.
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A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast
Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz, You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid & it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet, DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly, Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none, 'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block, BOOM!! |
I came in this with a Profound Image..... no time 4 this Gimmick Im into "Battelin" ni99az that reflect spirit 2 me u is a Scrimmage Look at ya Lyrical Maintenance you resemble no Preservation Dismantle ya Tounsels so its impossible 2 hold a Conversation sense the "Tension"when i enter ya buildin its full of Suspension you wouldnt be safe if you had 50 cents entourage wit ya Men my Amunition hits you with Percision, check ya rap Manual this boy george,A.M.O.K Devour more meat than a Cannibal ima make u feel me to the "T" this is nuthin but Simplicity last time u seen Pussy.... u was watchin ya mother Pee |
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Voted For: A.M.O.K
I don' t like all that gangsta talk first off all. but besides that AMOK came coo, he had better punches coz trooperkept talkin about guns.. AMOK had good stucture and better personals, so vote goes to him.. return favor with an honest vote in this battle will you? http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138556 |
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A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz, ->>I really liked this line You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid & it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet, ->>so-so DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly, ->>been done before Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none, ->>been done before 'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block, ->>pretty cool closer It was close but I say you edged it out...yours made more sense and was more enjoyable to me |
Shit messed that up meant to vote for a.m.o.k but I was gonna leave feedback for both...my bad
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Voted For: J_Trooper
Yo dog why waste ya time wit cats who spit like this man its not even funny. Seriously that shit was Garbage on some real shit. Vote goes to J Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: J_Trooper
This one was a close battle to call. Both of the verses were hot as hell. But I just felt more vibe comin from J Trooper. J Trooper had better structure and couple more punches. Overall my votes goin to J Trooper Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Vote removed due to freeposting to 20 posts |
This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K
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This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K
A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast
Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz, good flow, good punch, nice wordplay. You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid & it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet, Decent punch.. this new battle system kinda fucked ya up.. cos it dont show sigs DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly, wierd rhyme... ok punch Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none, first line was original... i liked it 'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block, decent closer over: pretty good verse... was feelin most of ya punches... aight flow |
TRooper Got A Dick Rider.... Protoge Posted 20 Freeposts In National Security Thread.. Than When He Had Enough Posts To Vote (20) Voted J Trooper In My Battle.. And Now He Come Here In Troops Other Battle And Votes Him Agian....
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Voted For: A.M.O.K
j trooper u definetly had good verse but im sry amok came harder wit nice punches n personals i give dis vote 2 amok Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Now thats jus fucked up....^
& I'm getting all the explained votes, J.T's getting all the half assed explained votes... Whats worst they're all getting polled, not mine. |
uGh back to 1...lol
C'mon vote, I'll give you a cookie & a glass of milk if you do |
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Voted For: A.M.O.K
Opener- AMOK takes this you had nice wordplay and multi's with a creative punch. Multi's-This goes to AMOK as well Punches- You both threw punches like crazy I'd say this was a tie Creativity- AMOK cause his punches were a little more creative. Overall- AMOK takes this battle with better flow and more creativity, J trooper, your kid, no deny'n that but on this battle he had ya. |
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Voted For: J_Trooper
ok amok had a lot of personals all weak and his flow was streched and off bad struture was fucked up.j spit hard and had a good flow and struture but no personals really and punches they both lacked but wordplay j killed him and vocab he slaughtered him and that gives him my vote give honest votes back and they get returned dr and get banned |
Voted For: J_Trooper
ey yo J troopa took dat shit son it was raw his punches were more on tact then A.M.O.K u kinda drifted off n sum of da shit dint make sense but yall both did good but J tropa jus took it Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: J_Trooper
j trooper won this hands down amok you wasn't conectin with the personals all in all you was confusin j trooper was funny and was rappin complex words i like that so j trooper got my vote |
Voted For: J_Trooper
J_Trooper structure is good...flow is on target...u had some multis...wordplay was nice...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... A.M.O.K structure is good...flow is on target...u had tight multis...wordplay is decent...a few of ur punches connected...that white singlet, and the belittle his words lines were wack...good personals... Overall A.M.O.K had more multis...as well as better personals...both had a good structure...as well as a stable flow...J_Trooper had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so when it comes down to it, multis r a lot less hard to put in verses then wordplay...so basing off of that...J_Trooper gets my vote in a good, close battle.. VOTE - J_TROOPER Please return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig. Thanx. |
Voted For: J_Trooper
J Troop-nice multi's with decent punches to follow them up, some nice wordplay, structure and flow was on lock which contributed to your drop AMOK-Also a nice drop, with good punches..I would of liked to see more multis in your battle, but not a bad drop at all...structure was decent with a nice flow to back it up V-J_Trooper for coming with good multis followed up by ok punches |
For all you newbs postin votes with inadequate feedback...look at my post or Mimesis...thats how you explain your vote not just sayin "Yah J_Troop took this cuz his was better yo"
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Voted For: J_Trooper
J-Trooper had vocab and good flow and structure, and AMOK was good but did not have as good enough flow structure and flow as J-Trooper Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: J_Trooper
A.M.O.K. Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none, J_Trooper my Amunition hits you with Percision, check ya rap Manual this boy george,A.M.O.K Devour more meat than a Cannibal Structure: J_Trooper. Clarity in this one. Flow: J_Trooper. Came out alot smoother and shit. Punches: A.M.O.K. Came harder with less bragging. Metas: A.M.O.K. More of them (2 to 1). Multis: J_Trooper. Not many but there were a few. Personals: A.M.O.K. Came clean with every bar having a personal in it. Opener: A.M.O.K. Nice line there. Closer: A.M.O.K. Even better than the opener. Final Vote: A.M.O.K. Based mainly on the personals. |
Damn I'm stupid. Posted in the WRONG FUCKING POST! I need to really get used to this shit.
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Lol All good... I'll see if the mods can do something....
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Voted For: J_Trooper
ok vote J cuz his flow was better and his punches hit harder....your opener was good but closer was eeeehhhh funny...good mettas and wordplay....you had multis that were ACTUALLY good....you had a better vocab too....nice structurea and complexity A.M.O.K. what ever the hell that stands for...you had ok punches....our flow was good....your opener sucked...but closer was ok....you had a lot of multis....but they weren't that good..... structure and complexity....good...word play ok....mettas.....eeeeeeeehhhhh....i dunno...your verse was ok and overall i give my vote to J |
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