phatinum vs Quake
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No DR votes
U got first...

Gd luck!!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 01:17 PM.

Quake has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 01:20 PM.

yo im a tooth ache not your ordaniry milkshake
now i battle till the earth quake look around
nigga you might b frm the same ground ill crumble you to mound like a cookie dont step up to me you still a rookie
ill break ya like a virgins pussy rip open up ya flesh
so the blood flows out you spit so cheep i bet your lyrics borrowed and if this battle dont finsh heres the keyboard finsh tommorw your lucky im typin the battle im out numered
cause your a hill biley wid a heard of cattle i make sure your face crackle im a leavin now get an pen and paper and write somtink down

||Phatinum stepping to me will leave you shaking like a bobble~head||
||Dawgs claims he hard but only if somehow he swollows~lead||
||Stop don't progress I'll shake~`ya~rep when I attach you won't fake~ya~death||
||Don't 'mouth off' I aint here to rate~ya~breath but here to break~ya~neck||
||Phat slow~off~da~splift doesnt show his pic cuz he looks like a cross between a ho~and~a~bitch||
||Phat thinking out loud "Yo Quake come near me lemme blow~on~ya~dick||
||Seems like you're attracted to jokes so lemme give the voterz a laugh||
||The only way Phatinum gets his dick wet is when he visitz the bath||
||And if you want 'beef' call the butcher it could be delivered to your front~door||
||I could teach you how to stunt~whore I could 'smoke' you closer to a blunt's~core||
||Plus you got 90 odds post and scared to battle cuz he scared that god would sin~me||
||Nah you watch 2 much TV espcially Oprah the way your battle record is Win~free (Winfrey)||
||And I got quick~eyes you winning explains men giving you dick~rides||
||You getting 1 vote, that bitch~lies u coming on top shows you lick~guys||

Upping for some muvafucking votes

gd battle
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uppin 4 voted nigga u ight battle next time peace up the votes up niggas

Voted For: Quake

Quake gets it for harder hittin punches. Yo Phat yours were alrite but not hard enough(soft). Both of you had played punchlines. What did it was probably the 'Winfrey' weren't all dat tho'. Phat still work on your structure and flow your losin it although your punches have stepped up. Add more 'ooh' 'ahh' factor to your verses. One last thing it's 10-16 go for the max to give you a better chance and time to unfold your attack (I shud kno) and that's what Quake did learn from this battle and all your other ones. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043

yo who won this battle uppin 4 votes

P.S Quake all of da '~' get rid of them it's newbish.

i tink i won serious he went off key big time at the end but i didnt c how much lines i was allowed so dats y ight

yo up voted in here

Voted For: Quake

Yo Im voting for Quake because I just read another one of Phatinum battles and he used the same lame lines about rhymes being borrowed and coming back tommorow and all that BS. Dog and you talked about me being original? He was Battling Gee by the way.

thx, uppin fo votes....................................

2-0 me

upping for votes

dont let this sleep...

come on ppl i vote on baTTLES

2-0 ME

UPPING...

upping for votes......

2-0 me.....................

Voted For: Quake

ite quake wins wit for good wordplay --Nah you watch 2 much TV espcially Oprah the way your battle record is Win~free (Winfrey)||..........
and Phatinum stepping to me will leave you shaking like a bobble~head||
||Dawgs claims he hard but only if somehow he swollows~lead||
..........good meta the first line, but u coulda worded the secound one better, but i knew what u were gettin at and thats decent wordplay

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other cat

yo im a tooth ache not your ordaniry milkshake
now i battle till the earth quake look around
.......an attempt at a personal, nice try but wasn't a punch when u did it, jus said his name randomly

~~~your stucture is way fucked up, we write in bars, other guys was stretched , but yours was jus fucked. work on personals and ya structure, read the league championship battle to get a better idea on how this is all done, both of you.
return the favor
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Voted For: Quake

multits came strong in this Verse, had a personality to it, had nice flow, long ass lines...but many landed punches. thats what counts, work on the structure hammie.

Add a vote and im out.

upping for votes

4-0 me

upping for the finisher...

Voted For: Quake

DAMN QUAKE.....WHOLE VERSE WAS SIKK......GOOD STRUCTURE......METAS OFF THA HOOK..||Plus you got 90 odds post and scared to battle cuz he scared that god would sin~me||
||Nah you watch 2 much TV espcially Oprah the way your battle record is Win~free (Winfrey)||....THA LINE WAS CRAZY.....U GOT TALENT KIDD........PHATINUMS VERSE WAS GOOD BUT JUST TOO SIMPLE.......QUAKE RIPPED DIS DUDE.......SO VOTE GOES TO QUAKE.......RESPECT TO BOTH OF YA