phatinum vs c-square
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 02:05 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 02:06 PM.

yo ill leave ya head broken 9 bullets in ya ass now you smokin
turn you in crumbs off a biscut you fckin jackin off like cricket
you might of saw my battle last time but ive improved
i spit wid out a thought but type it smooth heres the keyboard think of somtink u got 2 days 2 move yo your a rookie backdown your fresh so new ill spit lyrics till you turn black and blue dont underestamate this poll rate ill just die till i finsh every battle each day u betta go sit down and understand your lost nigga sit and prey

c-square has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 06:44 PM.

why am I battling a herb that lost 100 percent of his drops?
he couldn't ever have hold of this battle if he was a cop!
your only able to be fast if you consisted of a cars RPM
but like your metabolism your slow like you were "fat-in-em"
were you aiming for another loss or was this a accident
your rhymes wouldn't be hard if you fell on damn cement.
this is just a easy win ima a newb and dominating this herb
his rhymes aren't straight in a arch....like he went to curves!
i'm dying of boredom waiting for this fake ass emcee to drop
if you were able to fly to the sky you still wouldn't be on top

ez quick 15 min drop.....

Voted For: c-square

C-Square got this, his drop was pretty nice.. He had better stucture and better punch lines.. I like how he played off of your name.. Ohatinum, you should help your flow by using more multies, and spell better, no hate.. C-square had the smoother verse and better stucture too, so I vote for C-Square..

Can you return favor wit a honest drop in mine.. thanx..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139363

This was feedback posted for c-square
 

uppity up mayn....................................

Voted For: c-square

battle was kinda weak
c-square killed him
flow was better n
punches not alot dough
v/c-square
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Voted For: c-square

C got ma vote cuz all his shit was jus better. Phat you did aiight i can tell you gettin better but not good enough. C came harda wit da flow an wordplay.. Had a better structure an punches hit way harda.. Personalz....nobody.
v/ c-square


vote on dis battle honestly
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Voted For: c-square

Honestly, neither drops were that great, but c-square came with harder punches and just a better style overall.
Vote-c-square

Yo, return the favor. Vote honestly, 'preciate it.

Voted For: phatinum

phatinum - u cant talk about killing someone in a battle it does no good....ur flow was ight.....uhhh tha 4th line was wackness to full extent....work on dat....cas ur set up looked like it mwas goin somewheer but dint....and ur closer was simply horrible....work on ur structure too i couldnt find where ur rhymes were and shyt....keep droppin and elevate dogg

c-square - structure was waaaay ahead of phatinum's...no doubt u took that aspect.....flow was better.....rhymes were better.....u seemed more focused on disses rather than saying what ur gonna do to him.....i like your closer....it hit harder than phatinums did by far..

nice spit kid

vote/ c-square

uhh i meant to vote for c-square but this was my first tyme using this voting system so meh bad....maybe a mod can fix that shyt

Voted For: c-square

ok good opener for c bad follow up 'a cop' no that aint make sense.ok second bar and third also,ok opener you need to elevate on vocab and punches.phat your drop was horrible you defintly need to elevate 'what the hell is jackin off with a cricket mean'????!!4th line aint rhyme at all with the rest neither did the majority of the rest and you had no punches or good disses so c took this one.