killlah vs DRAG~ON
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 03:31 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 02:39 PM.

THATREALHNIC yea rite all u do is bite
like a fat bitch claimin she on a diet

n i see y ya krew slot say NO AFFILIA
goes excatly da same 4 us bout ya style not FILIA(feelin ya)

u coldn't even beat me if i was ya damn meat
n da votes will b like CLIPPERS n da playoff games...a damn sweep...

man u weak...u need mo lift dan saggy breast
n ya pectorials remind me of a~SUNKIN~treasure~CHEST~

u get da method,bet not cuz u not a real man
i'll beat ya ass n leave head mo wrapped up den afghanistans

heres da plan get off da crack yea put it down
n like a MERRI-GO-ROUND we gone~TURN~ya whole life AROUND...

n if ya rhymes gain~POUNDS~u still wouldn't have~CAKE~
n since u like a vampire biting i guess i have 2 raise da STAKES...

personals
THATREALHNIC is his aim

NO AFFILIA is n his krew slot
punches
pectorials is your chest
so lets get sum votes please
1
pound cake is cake

killlah has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 03:11 PM.

"Drags Fire, No wires"

This fake drag bitch bout to get name tagged
so clueless this fag is bout to get his face dragged
around in circles everybody bustin cum shots
whats hot this niggas not so nigga -stop trying/you spit that water nigga -no lying/ Ill send ya ass quick -"To hell and back"/
He thought he was good but dog -ya name is whack/

I hate this shit somebody tell'em - he's not the Flame thrower
Wanna be drag na nigga you not a Ruff Soldier
I gotta end this shit quick damn nigga im sick ...
of niggas who ride dicks but to me dog you just my bitch

fagget ass nigga lookin at my files and shit. What tha fuck wrong wit this nigga

yo lets get sum honest
votes please uppin 4 votes
uppim 4votes

Honest yea people lets hear what you all honestly think about this battle. Hmmm? LOL
lets go people.

yo also vote on my
other battle against
phatinum
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668

thanx 1

Voted For: DRAG~ON

i vote drag on fuck i hate havin to explain y shit n im not bout to cus da battle explains it self fuck it, thats it peace

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thanx 4 ya vote n
please vote 4 my other
battle up top against
phatinum
1

Voted For: killlah

ok drag weak verse no punches or personals and bad struture.
killah-flow
killa-personals 'ill send ya ass quick to hell and back'you not a ruff soldier'
killa-disses
killah-vocab
killah-vote

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Aight yo uppin

Uppin for some more votes. They trippin hard on the other votes so lets do it right yall.

Voted For: DRAG~ON

DRAG ON actually had a punch that connected plus killlah structure wasnt workin for me ...

keep elevatin ...

Voted For: killlah

dragon had some attempts of landed punches, which came close..but lacked structure and a purpose behind the rhymes...

killlah you had seldem landed punches, which is better than none...you had better struct. and flow.nothin to be proud of, but it worked out for you this time...

return the good deed.

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139268

Voted For: DRAG~ON

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THATREALHNIC yea rite all u do is bite
like a fat bitch claimin she on a diet
4/10
n i see y ya krew slot say NO AFFILIA
goes excatly da same 4 us bout ya style not FILIA(feelin ya)
6/10
u coldn't even beat me if i was ya damn meat
n da votes will b like CLIPPERS n da playoff games...a damn sweep...
7/10
man u weak...u need mo lift dan saggy breast
n ya pectorials remind me of a~SUNKIN~treasure~CHEST~
6/10
u get da method,bet not cuz u not a real man
i'll beat ya ass n leave head mo wrapped up den afghanistans
8/10
heres da plan get off da crack yea put it down
n like a MERRI-GO-ROUND we gone~TURN~ya whole life AROUND...
7/10
n if ya rhymes gain~POUNDS~u still wouldn't have~CAKE~
n since u like a vampire biting i guess i have 2 raise da STAKES...
7/10


This fake drag bitch bout to get name tagged
so clueless this fag is bout to get his face dragged
6/10
around in circles everybody bustin cum shots
whats hot this niggas not so nigga -stop trying/you spit that water nigga -no lying/ Ill send ya ass quick -"To hell and back"/
5/10
He thought he was good but dog -ya name is whack/

I hate this shit somebody tell'em - he's not the Flame thrower
Wanna be drag na nigga you not a Ruff Soldier
6/10
I gotta end this shit quick damn nigga im sick ...
of niggas who ride dicks but to me dog you just my bitch
5/10

thanx 4 ya vote please
vote on my other battles 2
dey gettin slept on
uppin 4 votes

Voted For: killlah

ok hmm not a really good battle but both verses was ok

flow/ both nice
punches/killah
structure/ drag-on ps. your name is takin in ruff ryders
overall/vote/ killah

Yo uppin aight

Uppin for some honest feedback and votes aight.

Voted For: killlah

this battle wasnt the greates but i voted on killah clearly because drag on was too complicated to read and understand. need to fix your structure. If you could show some love check out my battles

Me vs Sin
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139911

Me vs Helter Skelter
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139991

Me vs RobKilla
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139783

Good battle

uppin for some vote aight..

Voted For: killlah

im gonna hafta say killa won......................

Voted For: killlah

this was a wack battle, but im uppn my vote to killah, cause dragon's structure was poor, he he didnt word his rhymes right...killah didnt either, but his personals were better, and his punches landed more...and thats wut took it


good flow people

dropped votes=returned HONEST favor