phatinum vs DRAG~ON
 

Battle Rules:

10-14 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 03:42 PM

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DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 03:43 PM.

phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 03:45 PM.

phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 03:48 PM.

gasoline to ya death depress every nigga on this stress
im bout to put bullets threw ya breath phat bounce threw
with the mess you take viagra for your neck the struggling
and pain ill still kick you outta the game check it im in the picture money and fame i aint doing punch lines cause im
leaning back to a break i finshed off that nigga quake
and now im bout to crk ya skull toward my block
ill b like jay z its a hard knoc life understand im taking ur wife
im a backstabber im holdin the knife now im leaving i hope you know were u stand at u beneath my level i rised frm hell im da devil summon the evil im unberleverble ive left this battle without spittin u need 2 go home and think your shit agin it needs 2 b writtin

cum on dawg u a FLYWEIGHT wit a 0-3 record
i just stepped n gone win where da fuck is da effort

da NO GAME crew n now i see y
cuz if ya wrote ya rhymes on a~BIRD~da shit still wouldn't b FLY...

u only 13 dawg...so go take a nap
a CHRISTMAS present is da only thing u can wRAP

n not even dat cuz flowins not n ya blood
but does hollywood count as 1

like missy im really hot...n u is really cold
da only way u'll b ontop of da world is if u stood ontop of a globe...

so run forest run 4 dat bullet cum n bite ya
ya traxs still wouldn't b hot n hell when da devil invite ya

cuz fuckin wit me i'll infect head just like lice
n leave u crucified on da top of da mountian just like CHRIST

personals

he a flyweight wit a 0-3 rec
his krew slot says NG
n his location says tha hood

it just now changed 2
0-4 just in case u thought
i was off

my fault da holly wood lines goes like diss

n not even dat cuz flowins not in ya blood
n u say u from THA HOOD but does hollywood cont as 1

lol i wasnt tryin nigga i was jus tellin my life if ya was wonderin and i was jus puttin a lil effot to finsh ya off ight

yo nigga you a new to rapbattles dismantle wanna b dragon you sound like you nigga wid no name ill b shootin bullets wid slow motion like max payne trantulizer right in ya back im a kwl nigga 2 every1 your unknown ill kick ya down to the floor nigga i own ya throne

just wanted 2 say dat ight

koo but yea ppl. vote 4
my other battle against
killah
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138650

uppin 4 votes

Voted For: DRAG~ON

Drag on wins this with a better structure and harder punches. I could barely follow phats shit. Fix ya structure up dogg it aint that hard ta do. Drag on wins this hands down with harder punches, better flow nd structure.

Vote-Drag-on

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Voted For: DRAG~ON

nice verse fo a noob..no bad wordplay no real personals but ya punches were much better than phat's ,you had decent structure but i think ya should try n even out your lines ta get flow on lock..good verse 4 havin under 50 posts though dawg..keep it up...phat you gotta elevate alot son,that verse was'nt very good...keep tryin...no hate ya'll pc
return da vote
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thanx 4 ya votes
please vote 4 my other
battle up top against killah
uppin 4 votes

still uppin 4 votes
4 diss battle n others
so vote
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Voted For: DRAG~ON

gotta give this up to dragon...poor structure phat., learn how to word yo rhymes, and rhyme period...if u was gunna do a fast rap, then u shouldve made it look like a fast rap, or did audio...elevate, cause yo flow was tight but u shouldve put it right...u beat yoself...dragon's punches were strong, and he was consistent from start to finish


good flow people

dropped votes=returned HONEST favor

Voted For: DRAG~ON

Pretty weak by both but i say Dragon had it.Phatinum ou came out in tha opener hard as shit but you got fucked up afterwards. Dragon nice punches flow was pretty good an structure was way better than phats. Wordplay was bout even. Phatinum keep elevatin playa cuz you almost had dis shit. He had tha better opener. V/Dragon/Nohate

vote on dis
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or dis
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thanx 4 ya honest
votes just need one
more 2 seal da deal
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This was feedback posted for phatinum
 

Dis battle was ok
too bad I cant vote yet but Il will get back to u when I can

Voted For: DRAG~ON

drag ya 1st 3 lines were hot and ya last two as well
chriistmas present the only thing u can wrap?haahaha

phat u had a decnt flow, end was cool an all
struc was hard to read, an mad mispelled words
punches personals and metas go to drag
good shit drag
phat u got multies an it look like ya flows aiight but try to mix up more punches to make ya shit potent
vote on this if he drop before time
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