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prapper1 vs J_Trooper
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-03-04 at 04:05 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
aight man im sry i missed tha other battle it was late im still young had stuff to do.. aight ima spit first.. 10 lines lez go boy
ima leave u 'crippled' like 'cristopher reeves', but yet u stiff like a board man i look at u and see more bitch in u than any veterinary ward ma flow is sick, sorta like the flow of the souhegan river u thought u threw punches, cut me down, man i aint even got a sliver ur flow is shady, u like to think ur eminem but ur not u couldnt spit a flow if u had a mouth full of flem and snot i shot ur ass down, like we did in vietnam, J_trooper u thought u could win? thats the pick of the day blooper! u think i wouldnt show up 'faggot'? u think i wouldnt find u i know where ur daddy stays, and that homie's alwayz 'behind u' haha J_trooper no beef man.. i aint holdin none... jus dont talk shit on the net... its kinda gay one |
prapper1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 04:13 PM.
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J_Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 10:19 PM.
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lol this ni99a called me out ya, U fuck u gone feel me!!! *looks at u and grips the mic* Look if you had c4 strapped 2 ya stomach u still wouldnt Blow Im outta ya reach like a Gnome..boxin with Dikembe Mutumbo "Ya times due Muthafucka" like im ya Landlord demandin Rent u tryin 2"Suck Me Long Time" as if you resembled Asian Decent Ill give u a Telescope and a Microscope,& u still couldnt see Me Startin Beef will get you put up unda my sneaks like dog Fecee's Look in my eyes, u can Neva Visualize me gettin into a Slump Pumpin ya gas at "Sunoco" the last time u squeezed a Pump Trust me Trick i Run Solo, Knock tha Horse of ya Polo The day u beat me, the day the president is Ross Pero Lol yea no beef -But i bet u wont call me out again lol |
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how can u get votes if u havent even spit nething?
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uppin on ma verse i guess. where are they at? i dont see none
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i allready sent my verse in
u dont see it all? i sent it in at like 10 pm last night this new system fuckin sucks |
nah man i dont c ur verse.... if u get this before tha deadline just post ur verse aight homie good luck
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ima leave u 'crippled' like 'cristopher reeves', but yet u stiff like a board
man i look at u and see more bitch in u than any veterinary ward ma flow is sick, sorta like the flow of the souhegan river u thought u threw punches, cut me down, man i aint even got a sliver ur flow is shady, u like to think ur eminem but ur not u couldnt spit a flow if u had a mouth full of flem and snot i shot ur ass down, like we did in vietnam, J_trooper u thought u could win? thats the pick of the day blooper! u think i wouldnt show up 'faggot'? u think i wouldnt find u i know where ur daddy stays, and that homie's alwayz 'behind u' |
Voted For: prapper1
my votes for papper this is a honest vote to punchlines were better Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lol this ni99a called me out ya, U fuck u gone feel me!!! *looks at u and grips the mic* Look if you had c4 strapped 2 ya stomach u still wouldnt Blow Im outta ya reach like a Gnome..boxin with Dikembe Mutumbo "Ya times due Muthafucka" like im ya Landlord demandin Rent u tryin 2"Suck Me Long Time" as if you resembled Asian Decent Ill give u a Telescope and a Microscope,& u still couldnt see Me Startin Beef will get you put up unda my sneaks like dog Fecee's Look in my eyes, u can Neva Visualize me gettin into a Slump Pumpin ya gas at "Sunoco" the last time u squeezed a Pump Trust me Trick i Run Solo, Knock tha Horse of ya Polo The day u beat me, the day the president is Ross Pero Lol yea no beef -But i bet u wont call me out again lol |
Voted For: J_Trooper
oh shit...hahaha...lmfao...yo prapper...wtf were u thinking...aight u had some good hits...not real good...ure flow was off...didnt all make sense...i like the j-tropper being the pick of the day blopper thing...was funny...but wasnt good enough to edge troop...j_trooper....maine...was sick...u ripped him on every line....i like this one the best...Ya times due Muthafucka" like im ya Landlord demandin Rent u tryin 2"Suck Me Long Time" as if you resembled Asian Decent...that was a hit there...u had flow...made sense came hard...and wasnt sloppy....u also hit subject that alot of cats never use in rhymin...good word use...so obviously my vote goes to J-Tropper...paper got ripped... v/ Trooper |
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Voted For: J_Trooper
im gonna give this 1 ta j cause his flow ws better n punches were more original ,good verses from both but i found the other verse had some really played lines n idea's that i've heard alot ....best line in the whole battle i would say was j's asian descent line...good battle props ta both mc's.. return the favour on grandmastr chi's battle agaist me its on the 1st page in FL... |
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Voted For: J_Trooper
word play vocab goes to troppa but punches goes to prapper, Structure-Tie wordplay-Trooper vocab-Trooper punches-Prapper flow- Trooper punches win da battle but all dose things added up n troopa took it v/Trooper |
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Voted For: J_Trooper
J-Trooper you won this.. Your stucture was better, lines matched up and evenly spaced.. Flow was on point, the rhymes connected with rhythm. Punchlines in almost every bar, most of them connected.. Opener was better, and Closer. Basically no hate, but papper 1 u should elevate a little .. nice battle.. can u return favor wit a drop in mine? thanx.. peace http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139363 |
Voted For: J_Trooper
ok my vote goes to J cuz he had more and better punches....he had more multies too....his flow was ok and is structure and wordplay were also good prapper...you had no multies that i noticed....your flow was good....structure aight....punches were pretty good overall i think J won Return the favor |
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