ill bing aka U.G vs phatinum
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 09:08 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 07:31 PM.

ill bing aka U.G has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 07:32 PM.

Sit Back While You Hear Your Bones Crunch
Understand Phats Gon Finsh You For Lunch
Release My Niggas Like Monster Much
Im A Hungry Dog All I Do Is Grunt
I Think Its Time You Just Flopped Ya Stunt
You Gon Lose This Battle This Time Cause Im On A Hunt
Im Like A Bear Ill Put My Jaws Straight In Heart
You Couldnt Win This Battle Even If You Was Nas
Leave You Knocked Ova With Stars Round Ya Head
Singing That Song The Old Man Bumped It On The Bed
Instead Rip Ya Face Off Like A Mask
My Complete Sucess Was A Task Im Leavin This Battle Last I React Like A Acid When It Comes To Rap
But U Aint No Solotion Im Taking A Nap



Up 4 Votes Nigga Phat Ill Eat Ya Alive!!!

my kinetic minds connectien with ryhms so tight that the mic be riped nigga and triggas go togeather waether you hot or just playin on the block i give u secounds to eather be suckin a cock or be shot you ant real you feal homies that only rite and bite shit i spit only the tight shit the bizzar bars that niggas bumb in there cars i drop bombs like quwad the close's thing you get to bein black is qulad

i dint even drop my top shit kid i m to tired an im talkin to my girl at the same time

you ant up 4 votes........................................

Wtf Yo We Typing Not Usein A Mic And I Dun Really Like Urs But Its Ight

So Nigga I Won U Say Cause I Avent One 1 Battle Yet I Gotta Win At Least 1

i havnt finshed a battle so am win this won........

U Aint Won Nigga Yo We Need Votes Up In Here And No Crew Votes

Voted For: phatinum

ok both verses needed some help. there wasnt really any punches or anything so i had to vote on the flow and strucuture and going by that i'd have to vote for phatinum. ill bings verse was hard to read and everything i aint know where the lines began or stopped

Voted For: phatinum

phatinum: u'r flow was decent, your creative level was average which isnt bad there are alot of people not even there yet, ya punches u need to work on them 4-real u can do alot more damage with those and all around not a bad drop..

7.3

ill bing aka U.G
your verse was hard to read or at-less follow ya flow fix ya structure, other then that ya flow was ok ya punches u aint have none so u need to work on those as-well they help win battles as-well as personal but get creative cuz u was kinda basic with it but all around a decent drop that could of been better,

6.0

vote: phatunum

Voted For: ill bing aka U.G

ur flo wasnt stretched ur lines all made sense n to da point the only thing is u dint realkly insult him u was jus tellin him things like the first lines but besides that it was tite, good battle

Voted For: phatinum

You win this one Phatso you've improved with your structure and flow your content but not quite there a punch that hit for once. return da fav http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982
Lil bing you need to learn from Phat he went from a structure similar to yours and now it's improved and write more than that on '6-unlimited' I shud know I wanted to see this battle a couple days ago I thought it would be even but it was one sided cuz Phat stepped his game up. bing learn from evry battle. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

yo am down to do this again cuss i rote really bad so lets set it up again

Voted For: phatinum

platinum cuz he had strong punches and nice flow and structure

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: phatinum

return da favor and vote on dis
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136356


Aight dis battle was obvious
Phat took disone all over
Da structure was da number one thing Ill bing ur structure was just messed up it didnt even sound like it rhymed
Phat urs was pretty good because it atleast sounded like it rhymed
Basic vocabulary but it was ok

return da favor and vote on dis
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136356

Voted For: phatinum

This wasn't a great battle but if i had to say sum1 won it it'd be phatinum........both of ya structure was messed up and flow wern't great..... but phatinum punches hit harder...

Vote:Phatinum