phatinum vs intensify effect
 

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phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 08:16 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 08:27 PM.

u clown thats to long to wait for a battle with u....

drop now or forget it

yo intensify effect ill knoc ya out wid da phat suplex
im complexed nigga i spit lyrics as if i pull a trigger
im a b liqidizing ya brain phats the name ill spit punch lines
till ya get brave nigga we back in the ice age ill freeze ya
dont stop you screaming phatty ill fckin please ya
im not a batty boy the way you go every time you blow
im off this cause i make your mum dip it down low
like cristina millian ill c ya bouncing off this battle
ill b like inspector gadget and hack it ill take your digit nigga your a migit break ya piece by piece like a kit kat
nigga you chat shit ill leave ya now you sucking slime
you make me sick im closing da blinds you bitch

cmon nigga y so long battle cmon

drop ya verse then so i can crush it..........................

its der look mby u ave to open this page up again

u the worse lier u clown....
it aint there drop ya verse stupid...

yo intensify effect ill knoc ya out wid da phat suplex
im complexed nigga i spit lyrics as if i pull a trigger
im a b liqidizing ya brain phats the name ill spit punch lines
till ya get brave nigga we back in the ice age ill freeze ya
dont stop you screaming phatty ill fckin please ya
im not a batty boy the way you go every time you blow
im off this cause i make your mum dip it down low
like cristina millian ill c ya bouncing off this battle
ill b like inspector gadget and hack it ill take your digit nigga your a migit break ya piece by piece like a kit kat
nigga you chat shit ill leave ya now you sucking slime
you make me sick im closing da blinds you bitch










your blind dat was my verse

u getting hurt is the approuch i decied to take
its not hard to relate, since u get the same re-action from all ya dates

phatinum u Piece a’ shit, I’ll have no problems tryna eat up ya script
U gotta short thought process, cuz u think wit ya dick

u think that u slick, but more like off-track
its like u shit on ya finger, cuz u write off crap

me and u aint no convo, im the talk, u the bore
the only thing u'll gain is another loss add'ed to ya 0-four

u think u got "A-game",but failed when trying to make ya sickest writes
cuz fuck'in with this old-head gonna get u molested like the bitch from price is right

oop's i forgot a line,

just take a look at ya name, u must be one of them wack-guys
who think hes above, cuz my flow i'll make u feel baptis

Voted For: intensify effect

good as battle but u tae it intensity and i aint evn guna explain y cus dis new votin system sucks

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Voted For: intensify effect

im votin 4 intensity effect..it seemed like none of ur lines ryhmed phatinum..an intensity had more personals

upp'in for some more votes people and plez explain it better thanks........
so it wont get DQ..........

This was feedback posted for phatinum
 

i was gona vote but faginum you suck sit down comedian

This was feedback posted for phatinum
 

wack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

upp'in this so it can end already with decent explain votes...................

Voted For: intensify effect

fuck ,man!!!
do any of these kats know how to rhyme?!!!

too easy again...
phat:

1) structure sucked ass
2) first few lines didn't even rhyme
3) concepts... from every aspect... were trash and/or played
4) no wordplay, multi's, metas, vocab, personals or punches thrown

join up with boomer and elevate on all levels

IE:

again shyt rhymed and was better than the verse ya spit against boomer...

second bar was funny as shyt... good personal in bar four... coulda been reworded to hit harder

structure was ok... stretched at times

another easy win... challenge someone w/ more skills... uhh.. someone with ANY skills...

drop some honest votes on my battle against the great(not really) harvest crew... they tryna team up on me but fuck it... i'll kill 'em both

upp'in for more votes..................................

upp'in
this battle
ya..............................

Voted For: intensify effect

IE took it

punches- IE
flow- IE
structure-phatinum
creativity- IE.

jsut overall better puncehs by IE nice job...

return the vote on the Jono battle in my sig....

Voted For: intensify effect

Intensify came with good multis, aight structure, and some good punches - I like the finisher. Phatinum, keep workin' and you'll get better, and if you wanna battle again holla at me.
Vote - intensify effect

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Voted For: intensify effect

phatinum
structure is decent.. u had one stretched line though.. flow fell off due to that stretched line.. ok multis.. no good wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

intensity effect
structure is ok.. u have quite a bit of stretched lines though.. decent multis.. wordplay is alright.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a decent structure.. both flows fell off.. both had decent multis.. neither had good personals.. intensity effect had the better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. intensity effect gets my vote..

VOTE - INTENSITY EFFECT

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Thanx.