Tupac8888 vs Mr.Washington
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 08:53 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

^ and ur going first.

check.

yeah man--!--accept the battle and then ill spit--

--Tupac8888--
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mr.Washington has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 08:25 PM.

Tupac8888 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 08:27 PM.

Spit and demolish--!-- this kid is sucky--
And if I dont kill him--!-- hes considered lucky--
Fuck you and your rhymes--!-- your horrid at rap--
You know wat u truly are--!-- wack would be that--
Fucker you cant win--!-- and shut your ass hole--
Cause when you spit--!-- all we say is no no--

--Tupac8888--
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wtf is this gay shit?

spit yo--!--now--

--Tupac8888--
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ur first like we agreed faggot, drop ur verse......................
fuccin herb.

that was my spit--!-- hurry and spit i want votes--

--Tupac8888--
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

People let u post ya shit, so they can be fed laughter....
I'll murder u, just cuz ur username's already a dead rapper
I'm known ta shed bastards, to crowded pastures and foliage
dis fuck'n herb, could even sell boo's to pastors the holiest!
your no competition, so to me this was just a quick key....
..but it makes u wanna call RV and request some sick leave!

okay vote--!-- i easily won--

--Tupac8888--
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dont u wish.....................................

Voted For: Mr.Washington

Well this was a good battle, Mr.W you have your mulit's down that's nice to see, you had some nice punches like your finisher with sick leave. My suggestion to you would be to maybe work on your punches a little more, but on the whole you did a good job.


Tupac- you got nice structre but your flow is a little basic, you should probably try and elivate ya game a little you didn't really have any creative punches that hit at all, no matter just keep elivate'n keep battle'n and it will come.

Because of better punches and flow this one goes to Mr. W,

Please return the favour guy's the link's in my sig, honest vote's and try and make sure there explained or they'll be d.q'd. Thanks, Good job to both of you.

Voted For: Mr.Washington


Spit and demolish--!-- this kid is sucky--
And if I dont kill him--!-- hes considered lucky--
5/10
Fuck you and your rhymes--!-- your horrid at rap--
You know wat u truly are--!-- wack would be that--
5/10
Fucker you cant win--!-- and shut your ass hole--
Cause when you spit--!-- all we say is no no--
5/10

People let u post ya shit, so they can be fed laughter....
I'll murder u, just cuz ur username's already a dead rapper
7/10
I'm known ta shed bastards, to crowded pastures and foliage
dis fuck'n herb, could even sell boo's to pastors the holiest!
8/10
your no competition, so to me this was just a quick key....
..but it makes u wanna call RV and request some sick leave!
8/10


this came down 2 better wordplay and the harderst punches

my vote~~~~Washington

upppn..........

Voted For: Mr.Washington

Mr. Washington
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay is good...most of ur punches connected...good personal

Tupac8888
structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals..

Overall
both had a good structure...both had a good flow...Mr. Washington had more multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Mr. Washington gets my vote..

VOTE - MR. WASHINGTON

Please return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig.

Thanx.

upppppp
.......lol......n he thought he won.

Voted For: Mr.Washington

Better punches harder hittin and better pearonals Pac was good too but you two were on a similar subject and Wash worded his better http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

Voted For: Mr.Washington

nice keyup,opener was good with da dead rapper line,vocab flow n complexity was in your verse along with punches n a personal....clean structure nice job.2nd verse lacked in everything