Phatinum vs EmerginMc07
 

Battle Rules:

12-14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 09:29 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


EmerginMc07 DQ'ed for posting this thread http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138819 in bitchslapped

phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 09:30 PM.

EmerginMc07 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 09:30 PM.

time to get my first win,

u wana battle me is that wat i herd,
figured from my last battle u alredy learned,
but guess not time to take yo turn,
fuckin wit me is like fuckin wit fire u guna get burned,
yo rym style is weak i can tell dat shit is obserd,
i swear ima see u rip off my shit n try to rym my same word,
my words are like flyin bullets u cant dodge it,
yo words r guna tell me ur a fag bout to come outa the closet,
sum dude shows his dick u redy to massage it,
u like a fag bank evry1's made a deposit,
dawg ill fuck u up evn worse den imaginable,
il do u like my man hannibal,
u tryin yo hardest but ppl jus laff at ya,
im sukin yo skills outa ya like dracula,

yo your flows betta but i still think your a pussy wid dat pink sweater you better drop your mail im takin ya letters
new identites around im bout 2 giv ya a back hand
wid a pound ill rebound ya lyrics off my chest
while im shooting ya wid the last bullets i have left
ill break ya neck like an emergency nigga i think
you alergect to a g back off the keyboard before you get
a surgery brain stitched up like your got fcked by a man wereing burberry u neva heard of me you is a emenim
wanna b im leaving this battle on slys cause i think your getting fcked annualy and ya dads wipping ya wid da cane for free

gd battle nigga u ight peace nigga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!votes up in here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

iite we uppin 4 votes cmon dat was a battle for yall n now we need sum votes so holla

Voted For: EmerginMc07

WOW This was a close battle I'ma break it down like this. Emergin, I was feel'n your punches a bit more Phat your's were alright but it seemed like you were trying to come to complex because your punches didn't seem to make much sense. As far as metta's go I give that to Phat like around, and rebound that's alright. The flow was very similar I didn't have to much trouble with either of these ya got the bar structure down. Bowever because of better punches and that's what wins a battle I'd say Emergin takes this one. Good battle to both of you.


Can you return the favour the link is in the bottom of my sig. Honest votes!

yo uppin 4 votes in here niggas we gave it all we got giv da votes

yea dawg mo votes lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!! cmon man we uppin for votes

Voted For: EmerginMc07

ight,

Props to both, you both Came with your own "Style, Creativitity, and Individuality..'

There was nothin you two really shared but both excelled in your own ways..

I figured however, "Phatinum" you where attempting to push somethin you already can do, which is spit..

Too many hard lines, forced a small vocab which cost you the match...

Emergin, you kept one word to rhyme wit consistent and nottin wrong wit that but it didnt bring nottin new but you "Did Not" over do it, props..

Vocab was a bit better, as the flo, n the lines i was feelin mos':

sum dude shows his dick u redy to massage it,
u like a fag bank evry1's made a deposit,
dawg ill fuck u up evn worse den imaginable,
il do u like my man hannibal,
u tryin yo hardest but ppl jus laff at ya,
im sukin yo skills outa ya like dracula,

Punches there for win, keep doin "Both" your things tho,

Emergin n Phatinum Return the Favor in one of the battles below..:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138264
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138680
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138700

yo nigga me and you is tight com we battle again next time if ya want and cmon peeps more votes come on votes in peeps

next time u go first same rules n lines so set it up wen u ready

ight ill do it 2mows mby

iite, we still uppin 4 votes dawg ill return da favor if u vote

This was feedback posted for phatinum
 

my rhymes are like fire your gonna get burned you are a fag coming out the closet im sucking your skills out like dracula.lol
hahahahahahahahdamn that was DIRT.think and get dont rhyme phat neither does sweater and you neither does annually and free.what you did a poem??!!!no personals no good bars or even decent ones and your flows and strutures were even still while mc 7 had a bad verse phat had a worse one so the vote goes to mc

Voted For: EmerginMc07

good job kid you got this, phatinum your lines were stretched and didnt make sense your structure was whack and you werent funny if you tried to be funny you failed good job you sit down comedian. emergin you had me weak with this line "u like a fag bank evry1's made a deposit," even my friend who hates rap laughed at it so you did real well there is room for elevating with both ya especiay crapinum oh sorry fagnum oh shit the buttons are broken whackinum oh fuck i give up you sit down comedian

v/emerginmc07

Voted For: EmerginMc07

your flow waws better and your shits fesh ph was iiaght but you got him due battle me next

hey faginum if you got beef we can settle it set up a battle and i'll beat ya down you'll be another loser in my sig

Voted For: phatinum

phatinum took dis one easy.... no offence but EM ur verse had 2 much repitition in it.... u said word like 4 times and u said fag 3 times... and PH had betta flow and punches an wordplay so he wins....

vote/PH

yo like u said u gnna return da favor i know i aint vote 4 u but dat doesn't meanur gonna DR r u? anyway jus elvate kid and u'll do fine... not so bad4 a second battle....

yo heres the link... plz vote on dis iight?

ILL

Voted For: EmerginMc07

ok this battle was really weak. not really any personals or punches. the gay joke, tha joke about the bank were kinda weak but those were probly tha best attempts at punches in this battle. phatinum u gotta come up with better disses and work on ur flow cause i was havin trouble readin it