SUPERVILLAIN vs !RIFF RAFF!
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
riff raff spits first. (30 minutes to do so, starting now.......so check in)
i spit second. (within 30 minutes from the time you finish your drop)

......i guess that'll work.

s.v.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-04 at 09:21 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

SUPERVILLAIN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 10:02 AM.

!RIFF RAFF! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 10:02 AM.

aight i'll drop soon

Its Funny!! I stomp on ants like you daily!!! Plus I’ve peeped no wonder everyone Doubts-You-Kid…
Cuz ya Punches are incredibly soft and the best personal you’ll use against me will be about-my-sig!!!
Sorry to break it to ya but son u aint have much talent.....You Makin Me Wanna Listen to Niggas Comin From The Street
Simon from American Idol would ask...Did U Get That From "William Hung" Cuz That Had A Chinesse Beat......
Your ego's balloons im Bursting You Kid, Steppin in the ring wid me's the Worst Thing You Did, Dick is the First Thing You Spit , I'll Make u Hurt From The Hit, Make u eat ya words then maybe ya Verse IS THE *Shit!...//7

my 6 lines........

the knife i clench in my fist is sharp...but before i pull it
i'll drag the blade on the pavement then stab you after i dull it
dearest riff raff, sweet as tic tacs, now that his holes ripped your style: defined as fulla bullshit like matador soles get
homeboy check your sig, i think you need to edit that...
all i see is destined 2 rhyme...and a pathetic medic flag

........sorry for the rushed verse, im tired. i didnt realize the deadline was set up like so. weak. weak. fuck it though.

s.v.

decent drop, good work.

ha! you predicted well, i used your sig in my verse. funny shit.


s.v.

oh shit, my structure got posted differently then i submitted..........very weird.

s.v........c.s.

just for your knowledge........

my 3rd line really ends with "...now that your holes ripped."
and the 4th line starts with "your style:..."

it might not mean much, but it can be read wrong if i didnt mention this. thanks. once again, nice work riff. one.

s.v....c.s.

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

RIFF RAFS VERSE WAS VERY GOOD NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES ARE VERY GOOD THE ONLY THING I DIDN'T LIKE IS THE STRUCTURE ANDS FLOW. SUPERNAT. FLOW AND STRUCTURE WAS BETTER BUT HIS PERSONALS WERE NOT THAT GOOD

VOTE: RIFF RAFF

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR BY VOTING ON THIS BATTLE
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1452658

props to you anyway..........
aight lets get some votes in

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

Flow: SUPERVILLAIN
Structure: SUPERVILLAIN
Punches: !RIFF RAFF!
Personals: !RIFF RAFF!
Creativity: !RIFF RAFF!
Metas: !RIFF RAFF!
Enjoyment: !RIFF RAFF!

Vote: !RIFF RAFF!

wow.
either im really devastated right now, or i just dont care about records. hmmmmmm? lol.

s.v.

go on admit it
youre devastated

return the fav and drop an honest vote in my battle wit Phatinum...

uppin

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

punches riff, barely though
multis noone really
vocab noone
metas noone but super cause that mataDOR LINE
personals riff
overal riff but this wasnty a good battle

uppin

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

I liked this battle I didn't hard punches if any but the metaphors weren't bad some parts in both verses lost momentum towards the end so I'd say continuity should be what you 2 aim for. It was jus a cool battle. return da fav.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

riff raff cuz he came harder and flow was nice.
vote riff raff

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